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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Res!

Will edit in d mrng n scrap u

My gawd! This is so much fun!

Long update I was looking forward for one more part! :p hehe I know I'm asking too much!

But to the update! She's super strong I'm glad!

Why is he always so tough! God!

Look at what and all he said!

But he loves her too much I know!

Cliff hangers I hate them!

Loved the intensity with which the converse! That is enough to deduce the raw passion!

She at his place omg? I cannot believe it

Wifey eh?

Looking forward to it! But why isn't the truth out yet?


Cheers
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
He didnt got to knw the truth 😕😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Hihi arnie gets shock after shock..
Loved the update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Wonderful Maha-Update!!
First I like Arnav's way to admire Khushi as his wife avter..
I think Arnav should know long ago that Khushi was with him even he left her as a friend..
But kehete hai na ''DER AYE PAR DURUST AYE''..
I think Khushi's challenging way gave him enough clue that she is perfect as MRS. ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA, sherni..
I love the scecn when Garima said that in childhood she did everything as Arnav said for his kiss and bone cursing hug and Khushi blush like tomato..
Gamira and Sashi indeed the parents anyone could ever get..
They did a good job to sent Khushi to live with Arnav..
The Gihapravesh scecn was awesome..
The way Khushi hold Arnav's hand for entering her sasural first time shows that she will need Arnav's support through out her married love..
And Arnav's feeling at the moment you wrote beautifuly..
What Khushi wanted , she get it..
Arnav said that he will not leave her this time for anyone or NK..
I hope uss dinki nowbat kabhi nehi aaye..
Waiting for Mr. & Mrs. Raizada's cats and dogs fight..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Congrats on new thread.loved the update soo much that read it twice.great to know about arshi childhood bonding.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
forgot to mention... it truely is a maha update :) :)

thank u soo much :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Superb maha update...
Loved Khushi in whole update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
and the married life begin of

MR.and MRS RAIZADA

Awesome update

Love aana teri marzi or tera jana meri marzi oh I love this dialouge
Thanks for. PM
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Congrats on new thread. Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Wooowww what a maha update, brillant ,perfect well written👏❤️.
Her tears didnt make any effort to stop and his heart didnt stop bleeding to her tears. i love this line
Eagerly waiting to the begining of new life of MR & MRS RAIZADA
thanks for pm

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