Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

meine comment kiya tha...aaj subah...pata nahi post kyun nahi hua...😕😕😕 😕😕😕

Plzzz PM me the update...😭😭😭 😭😭😭

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

I seriously didn't expected an update this soon..!!!
as always you were brilliant..!!!
the whole dance sequence was amazing...I couldn't get out of it
Sam aiesha..they have started realising there feelings for one another..!!
Mario..the man how much ever I try to hate the man..but still couldnt...perhaps coz of face you have provided for him..!!
He reveled in the fact that he
had finally found a face, one
who would help him achieve
what he aimed for,
professionally and perhaps even
personally if he made the right
moves. He was going to make
her his, very soon
now he is eyeing the rosy for his gains...but dude this tym u have made a wrong choice..!!!
you would be buried in the grave u yourself dug..!!
As far as the ro n arjun part is concerned I would say...u nailed it Dea...it was so beautifully portrayed..!!!
the way the felt some connection for one another...something inside told them that this is the one whom the heart needs...
Their hearts screamed out the
answer to their turmoil in
unison. However, the sane part
of them dismissed it just as
quickly as it had popped up. It
couldn't be..
I just loved how they forgot their worries...n felt peace with one another..
whole dance part was beautifully written n each emotion was perfectly conveyed thru words
the song choice was amazing..already had it in my playlist..so played it while reading...!!
so at the end rosy realized who the known stranger was..!!!
its better that arjun had left the place...otherwise all the planning and all the mission would b at stake...the thing for which they had done so much..but still my heart wanted to both of them to meet each other...but I would wait patiently for the big day..!!!
eagerly waiting for the update
update soonish..!!
love samiya.

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

awesome part

loved it

Lisa... poor lady

couldnt stop herself from drooling... she is also little scared.

Rosy and Arjun

very very very nice part 👍🏼

waiting for the pm of part B 😳

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

awesome update
poor LIza dancing with the hot cop must have been difficult for her
the ball room's sequences were well written
it was easy to imagine the scenario
Rosy and Arjun sequence was superb
Sameer-Aisha were nice
the song selection was beautiful
n well suited in the part
thanks for pms
cont soon

Edited by rizwanaa - 11 years ago

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

part B :

it was beautiful

simply beautiful

Rosy recognized him... but he left...

amazing writing

excellent

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Awesome part dear...
Just amazing...

You portrayed each and every character's emotions beautifully ,
whoever it may be...great work

Continue soon...
Thanks for pm...

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Unresed my post on Pg 51

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#398

wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😛😛

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

SO Sorry for the late comment Avantika di... was busy with exams
Just read both the the part 26 and 27th... And Thank you so much for the PM

Two updates full of Arjun and Rosy!!! I loved them
OMG... rosy was finally in her Mr. A's arms!!! Oh how sweet, I wish she could find him in the car park
I wonder now, how will Arjun react when she comes face to face with him?

Regarding Rosanna's vulnerable side, its natural when you have gone through so much in life... you know like they say, to get and feel the best in future, you have to go through the worst first... That is exactly what is happening with our Rosy... A bright and better future with lots of love, care n happiness with her loved ones is stored for her (At least I wish it)
And the strength with which she is carrying herself even while deleberately hurting herself is really commendable

I liked Rosy's relationship with Mr. D'costa... Glad that she has someone elderly whom she can share her turmoils with

Sameer and Aisha are progressing with their feellings... nice to see that!

And I was glad to see that our Tech expert's gaze was on his girl, even from the cctv cameras

Thanks for the PM di and please update soon😊

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#400

superb update
poor liza she was so scard of arjun..liza's reactions were really funny..
hmm so shree was admiring her
loved rathore and aisha moments so happy for both...hope they soon realize their feeling for eachother.
really loved arjun rozy dance it was amazing...the song was great.
the last part was so touchy where rozy figured out it was arjun but when she goes behind him he has already left
waiting for the next part
thanks for pm...continue soon