Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 102

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Take A Bow di..
not at all expected dis kinda twist..
especially arjun bro knows.. she had a daughter..
howw much ro hv to suffer...
Pierira i would kill him ufff
Washroom scene lol...
loved d bonding btw sis n sam bro watching !!
karan too gud..
hats off di...
speechless ..
beautiful ...
Congo gonna complete one yr...
thanks for d pm di..
waiting for next ...


Thanks so much Payalia..
yeah.. he did know about it.

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Di beautiful vm...
have no words..
Speechless ..
1st day rula diya!!
Awesome work di..
hats off..
take a bow..
u hv created a best masterpiece ..
proud to be a reader n fan of urs!!
love u..
Beautifully penned down emotions..
nailed it..
ty for d grt ff di..
Hny :)


Thanks once again..
Lol.. haan.. hatke beginning to the new year.. 😆
Fan?! 😲 Nopes.. We'd better be friends.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
loved it
It came as a shocker
Rosy had a daughter and she also died
How much has the poor soul suffered more?
Was really a heart-wrenching update
can't stop my tears
waiting for the next part
continue soon


Aww.. sorry about that..
yeah.. lots more in store..

Originally posted by: skrafty

Congrats for completing one year
Awesome VM
It was beautiful
loved it


Thanks dear..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

i have no words...

😭
😭
u made me ...speechless for update...
she had daughter she also died!!!!!!!!
waiting for ur precap plz do update soon!!!!!!


Thanks dear..
yeah.. it's really sad.. but it had to be done..

Fantastic VM yaar...
Congo for crossing first anniversary and will for 2nd anniversary also(know little gready )...
Happy new year dear...

Thanks soo much.. Aww.. I don't think u guys will let me live if I drag it for one more year.. 😆😆
Happy New Year to u too.. 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Rajvi-

💔
I have not idea what to say di...I always thought that I can relate to Rosy's pain and with each update, I thought this the maximum one could suffer. But today, it seems all that was just a small glimpse of what our Rosy has undergone through. First, her insecurities that she may not prove a good life partner to Arjun, then her losing Arjun, the only person whom she ever loved, to her best friend whom she loved just like her own sister. And if that was no less, she lost her whole family, her baba and then loosing Roshni would have broken her to no extent. And then this 😭 She lost her husband and her daughter in front of her own eyes. 😭 That is too much to bear for a single soul. I can't even imagine what rosy must have undergone through in all these years with no one beside her. Di, Please tell me Ayesha was with her during this time And not away for the undercover mission.

Hey.. You've nailed it again, my dear..
She has indeed been through a lot and I'll still say there's a lot that remains hidden..
Her pain of loss is what drives her.. and now after losing everything, she wants to keep the one person without whom her life is meaningless, safe.. I'd say we haven't witnessed her obsession for him, yet.. 😉

She was.. But by the time Ayesha got to her, the damage was already done..


My respect and love for Rosy has gone a notch higher di...After witnessing all this anyone would have succumbed to grief but then its our Lady in Red we are talking about. She not only composed herself but also stood against all odds and decided to revenge the death of her loved one's. And if that was not enough, she is ready to give up all for the one, whom she love with all the broken pieces of her heart. Just to keep him safe and away from a heart break. She has stood up to the real meaning of love. I so wish, that Arjun would have not left Rosy then, rather he would have smacked Rosy and echoed the same word he said at the theater
"Not this time. Jo marzi kar lo, I'm not going anywhere." things would have been different, now. But then again I can't blame anyone.

I know! and exactly why I love her soo much..
He wouldn't have.. but things really spiraled out of control..
More on it later! 😃


Erghhh...what a wrong time and wrong choice of words to lash your anger out Mr. Rawte.😡 Why can't you see beyond obvious Like every time you do. Dil thod diya na Rosy ka.💔
Di, I don't know why but still I can't bring myself to hate Arjun for this. I know whatever he did was wrong but then the situation and Mario's closeness to Rosy which he witnessed a while ago made him do this. All he wanted was to convince Rosy to back out from this mission. And I'm sure, if he would have known the fact that Yash and Rosy's daughter are no more, he would have never ever uttered those words. I don't know if it make sense or not but I think its high time that Arjun should know the whole truth and maybe this was the only way which can force Ayesha to say out the truth aloud! Because I'm sure, Rosy won't do that ever. I'm so afraid of Arjun's reaction after truth will be in open.

Yup! I'd have to agree.. I wouldn't blame him either.. he's been hurting for long now..
It had to find an outlet..

He will get to know a large part of it.. But the major chunk has to come from his Miss A, right? Why? Coz no one else knows about it.. 🤔 Not even Ayesha..
He'll be broken and will feel guilty about what he said as well.. But he's a Tiger and he will gather himself up coz he has to heal her too.. 😳

Loved the little conversation between both the sisters. It was very warm and sweet. Now, what's the mystery behind
Banda😕..It seems that this time even Ayesha is aloof about this...And yeah, I dint missed the drooling session done by the two girls on our hotwa😉

🤣 But I did keep them away from our Hotwa.. 😉

So Mario now trust our Rosy fully...God save the day, when him and Arjun will come face to face!

All in a all, a very emotional update di...But then, next update won't be any less I'm sure. Looking forward to read Ayesha-Arjun conversation.

Thank you for the wonderful update di, each and every word was written perfectly.👍🏼

PS : Though its very late to say this but I'm so glad, that you choose Drashti Dhami as Rosy. She is strong, beautiful,independent, impeccable lady just like our Rosy.😃

Thanks dear.. I too feel the same! None else could've been her.. Either it had to be a faceless Rosy or DD.. 😳

Thank you soo much, once again.. You never fail to make me smile, love.. 🤗



Originally posted by: -Rajvi-

Awesome VM di...But aapne phir se Rula diya 😭

Congrats once again 🤗



Aww.. sorry about that!
And thank you, once again.. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

sorry for getting late...

read both the parts together...i am numb...i dont know what to write...

the dance,beautifully described..their attraction and their intervention was depicted beautifully...

as you get carried away while writing its happens with me while reading this...i want more...

Arohi's daughter...now tats really painful...but what had really transpired...high time ab to bata do yaar...

both the parts were excellent...Mario...bas itna sa??i want more of him...😛

thanks for the pm...😊


P.S update shayad too plzzz...😳



Aww.. Thanks so much..
Batate hain.. the next few ones are all about that! 😉 Tanik dheeraj rakhiye mohtarma..

Lol.. more of him? 😲 I can't wait to band bajaofy him.. 😡 But yeah, GC is hawt! 😳

Working on shayad.. An update this week for sure..! 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Siyaa-

The girl in the picture...😉

I am crying buckets ...😭



Meri jaaneman..

I knew u knew it! 😉 ❤️

Awwie.. 🤗 Jooti matt phenkna.. 😕


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yas23

Really emotional update
Aisha Rosy convo,their bonding was lovley and then their washroom convo was great
the way you wrote Rosy Mario scene was nice...and then also the way u described how she felt when he held her close to him was great
and all the was witnessed by Arjun
and then Arjun's words were so painfull with his outburst and accusing her
omg rosy had a daughter and she also died
felt really bad for her
eagerly looking forward for the precap...Arjun Aisha and Rosy Karan conversation
thanks for the pm
continue soon



Thanks dear..
I'm going to cheat a bit.. 😛😆
You'll know when u read..

Originally posted by: yas23

Congratulation on completing one year on the lady in red
beautiful VM
loved it



Thanks once again.. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anant90

i read it twice👍🏼..aisha and rosy.!!😆

kitna kuchh saha hai rosy ne..arjun could not bear her with any one..ek ke baad ek sab reveal ho raha hai..arjun is unaware about what had happened with rosy and her family in past..you have written her and arjun's emotions so well..👏👏👏
and wo Mr. Pereira 😡



Thanks so much! 😳
Yupp.. aage aage dekho hota hai kya.. 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

I m happy that I took your disclaimer seriously & did not read it while travelling.

Lol.. I knew it! That was esp. for u and a couple more who do it.. 😆

To start with the two sisters: Glad that you brought in this chotu sa lovely conversation between the two. I missed Misti here.😭

Me too.. But she'l be back at the right time.. Don't u worry! 😳

Coming to The Lady in Red:
She is indeed impressive.👍🏼 Never does she fail to surprise me. So its Divide &Rule policy she is adopting that never fails to work at any point in time which will lead her towards being a trustworthy individual to Mario. Very Impressive!!!.

His intensions now seems much more clearer to wards her. After all ,Its the human nature of being curious i.e..,if sum one is not figurable or is out of your mind to understand him/her ,you tend to become more curious to know them more. This goes with Mario perfectly .Ro is indeed a mystery which makes Mario eager to read her more.It would have taken alot of patience for Arjun to keep himself &his sanity in check watching her being so close to Mario which later on turned out to be the accusing words from him.

Yupp.. He finds her very mysterious and she's kinda out of his league too.. Ghaas nahi daali na.. 😛 That's what makes him all the more touchy about it.. Besides, like we say, he's a tharki.. But an elegant one.. 😉

You know that right that I m not at all angry with Arjun for his accusations coz I know it, if he had said those words he surely might have had died a thousand deads along with her. About she having a daughter was something I knew I felt it long before coz sum where at the back of my head I had this one thing in mind about the little girl whom Arjun was not able to recognize long back when he visited his shanti Bua's house.Now I get it what her priced possession means. it was her daughter & sum thing more I m sure of. I wonder if there is any end to her sufferings.

Nah.. Im not either.. Coz he will die a hundred more when he finds out the truth.. Aha.. Chalo.. Mentos khao and dimaag ki batti jalao.. 😆😆

But yes what was shocking for me was that Arjun knew about her having a daughter. Never had I expected that.This pops up a question in my mind, if he was keeping a tab on her even after leaving their home 5years back but then on a second thought if that's the case how did he miss about the death of her daughter. The scream of her's is still lingering in my ears. Please give me a reason to smile after this one. But i know that will take time &I wonder how will I manage it coz wat Ro felt here is nothing to wat Arjun will feel once Aisha will blurt out to him the truth in the next one. Please please please, I request you to end this roller coaster emotional ride soon.

Nah! He wasn't stalking her.. Remember Roshni was still in touch with her.. That's how he knew.. More on it later!
Just coz u asked for it, I'm skipping the conversations and giving u a tiny reason to smile.. 😳

But I'm afraid the roller coaster has just begun..

Anyhow! Thanks so much dear, as always for relating to it, the way u do..



Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

😃A very very hearty congratulations for completing a year of this beautiful Saga & girl,can u believe it,I was here from the start.🥳🥳

Thank u soo much.. 🤗


Coming to The Lady in Red:One of the fic not only close to you but many, me being 1 of them. Scratching heads like mad,reading & then welling up eyes while travelling,hitting my laptap, threatening you,sending angry PM & what not.Trust me,I am a mature individual & your lady made me do such childish things🤪.Na na ,complain nahi kar rahi hu but then this epic is something very special to me that I have started living with this story. For the first time,I am falling short for words.For the Lady, all i can say "The most powerful weapon on earth is the human soul on fire." This fits in the Lady in Red aptly.

Of course.. It wouldn't have been the same without you guys. 😳
🤣 God bless me.. I would've done all of that and more, had I been in your place.. 😆

And again, you're right.. There's a fire burning within her, which I'm trying to put into words..


The VM is beautiful⭐️ Scenes+Lyrics were apt.🥺

BTW,you are one of a kind.Anniversary par bhi rula diya.😡I hate you for this but then🤗🤗 for giving in Lady In Red.I really mean it.🤗

Lol.. 😆😆 I had to do something hatke right? Hasate toh sab hain.. 😛😉

Lastly ,Thank you Avantika for tolerating my madness & threats ofcourse which wont stop if you make me cry at a spree😆
Short of words bolkar kitna bol diya😆😆

Thanks so much, darling.. Glad you chose to stick around despite all cliffhangers and craziness.. 🤗
Lol.. yeah.. In fact, I need to ask for police protection now.. SYS?! 😉😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Beth-

That was such an emotional update!!!!!
Wonderful!😊



Originally posted by: Jannat94

Amazing update Avantika

loved it and enjoy it a lot



Originally posted by: pihu_angad

Awesome update..

continue soon.



Thanks so much.. 😳
Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago

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