Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 100

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

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Phew...behna here I am. I feel I should comment now or else I wouldn't be able to comment for a long time. I thought the previous update was mind-blowing but you have once again outdone yourself.

Seriously, I should get used to your dhamkedaar updates by now, but you leave me speechless with one thing or another with each update.

For me once again this was an edge of your seat update, I was literally biting my nails from start to end, even though you had given me a sufficient warning I was still anxious throughout the whole update.

So Rosy had used the information she had gained while strolling on the beach to her advantage, at the time I thought Mario was aware of what was going on but it seems he had few traitors in his camp that benefited Rosy's purpose.

Very well done, now she has gained his trust completely, but I hope she doesn't end up paying a big price for it later, I have fate, but Mario is one ruthless man I would hate for Rosy to get trapped again.

But...there is a saving grace to this at time. Memories of Arjun and his close proximity to Rosy may be painful and even embarrassing at times to her but they keep her grounded and keeps her moving towards her goal without loosing control, but again that is double edged sword.

Rosy's inner turmoil the struggle with her feelings was very well written and described behna. She wants Arjun to forgive her yet she can't accept the forgiveness either, the guilt she feels overshadows all other feelings.

Even as she had pushed him away in the past and may be even now there was that tiny hope in her that he would fight for her like he always does, that he will cool down and come back to fight her until she tells him what was bothering her, why she was acting the way she was, but unfortunately for her the one time she wanted Arjun to fight back he had given up and walked away. That still hurts her to this day, adding to her guilt all over again.

And now when he is back, ready to hear her she can't (wont') share what drives her. She feels it is too late and she has nothing more to lose now.

Okay the best moment for me for this update, and the only time I smiled while reading this was the the moment between Rosy and Ayesha. I have been waiting for this for a long time now. Somehow I have always pictured them this way.

Ayesha the always serious and caring older sister and Rosy or Arohi as the naughty and head strong little sister. Loved the way Ayesha caught Rosy and scolded her for doing something that would harm her. Shows the strong bond of love and friendship between the two. And I am glad Sameer witnessed this.

The conversation between Ayesha and Rosy in the powder room tells me that Ayesha hasn't revealed everything to ETF yet, hope she doesn't get herself in trouble for it, and in a way I am glad she is aware of Rosy is planning too.

But it seems Ayesha doesn't know it all either. She completely missed Rosy's reaction to what ETF is planning next. I am curious to know what they will find when they reach Banda and how it will effect Rosy and Arjun. It seems Rosy is more worried for Arjun than herself if the whole truth is revealed too soon. She is sure that whatever is hiding in Banda will lead to Arjun's self-destruction but I get the feeling when Arjun comes to know everything, yes he will be angry and may even reach the point of self-destruction but in the end he will come out much stronger than Rosy is giving him credit for, but let's wait and see.

Last but the not the least...Arjun finally loses control on his anger and emotions.

I was wondering how much he would be able to control himself and I had also feared the explosion and he didn't disappoint me at all.

I almost wanted to reach out and make him stop before he went to far, but there was none that could have stopped him, not even Rosy.

If only he had realized that each of his hateful word was like a knife to her already bleeding heart. The one person she thought knew her better was saying the most revolting things to her. She had expected him to be angry with her but I don't she had ever expected Arjun to be this hateful her.

While I understood his anger was from jealousy and hurt I couldn't help but hate him for hurting her like this.

He hit her where it would hurt her the most.

And the final scene, Rosy memory of her daughter and her death was her breaking point, the pain and her tears...I have no words. I couldn't even begin to put into words what it made me feel like. I wonder what it will take for her come out of this...


As I said once again mind-blowing, dhamkedaar update. I thought I was well prepared for it but it still left me stunned behna.

But..I loved the update as always. Thank you so much for writing this story and introducing us to Rosy.

On a side note...I could have picture no one else as Rosy except for Dhrasti, most especially after reading this update. None could do justice to something so emotional to this scale as she could I am sure.

A very, very Happy Annivesary to The Lady in Red.🤗

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

A very, very Happy Anniversary to The Lady in Red, my favorite story of all time.

Firs of all, I have edited my comment on page 133, I think I went a little overboard but I couldn't help myself, it was the moment I have been waiting for and dreading for a long time.

So here we are a year later, I remember when you started this FF and each and every moment since then. The endless discussions on what would work and what wouldn't and me catching on to where you are going next with it and even guessing at certain things.😆

Yeah you remember don't you the conversation after the first time you mentioned Annu, I could picture the surprise on your face very well.😉

Any the point is I have loved every moment of this epic tale and I feel proud and special too. I am so glad you decided to write this story and introduce us to Rosy, a character who is product of you imagination, (Even Mario and Karan). The rest of the cast is familiar to us but these three characters make the story so much more special because you created them.

Congratulations behna, hope we celebrate many more special moments like this.

Originally posted by: srividhya68

Awesome update...
interesting precap
thanks for pm
cont soon plz

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

awesome update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Congrats
Awesome vm

Originally posted by: life93

Hi Avani di🤗...

...coming back to update ! i have lots of questions for which i have to patiencelly...

Haila.. But yeah.. you're a good girl.. 😉😆

but first tell me from where u got this idea ???😕...i mean how u manage to write that intense writing😕...

Idea? which one? For the story? I just knew i had to write and intense one with someone from ArjunJi's past, one who loved him to death but had to let go of him; someone who was a splitting mirror image of him.. 😉 And the rest followed.. 😉 ❤️

so Pareira 😡...is very impressed with Rosy's work👏...and now when he totally trust her i want to see him going in pit😡 ASAP !!!

i must say di in case writing you are amazing !👏👏👏...

Phew.. thanks.. I'm worried about those bits actually..

and Aisha...came at right time😆...i i must say their bonding is lovely😃...

and sam understood and gave them required space was good one😉😆...

and their Chit Chat in washroom was nice ...Aisha's worry is right but now another secret is waiting at Banda ...so Rosy's past is related to the place

It is.. many secrets hidden in the place..

it is just next to impossible for me or anyone else to exactly feel what Ro is going through !...i mean how can she is so selfless...??

after going through a lot any one would be turned into a dead corpse but this is Ro...👏👏👏

was she physically abused 😲...?? when that Pareira touched her i feel like i should kill him😡😡...

Lips sealed on that one, Nee.. But what drives her is her pain of loss.. There was a time when he meant the world to her and then she lost everyone.. And now she cannot rest until she makes sure that the enemy is punished and can in no way harm him or Ayesha..

and...what angered me the most was Arjun's lashing out on Rosy...i felt like he never knew Ro ...neither he loved her...

even in his anger he didn't think twice what he was talking and to whom ??? It was his Ro ...whom he trusted more than himself ?...i'm sorry but...lashing out in anger and his accusations were too much...😭

Aah.. Yeah.. it was cruel of him to have done that.. And I won't justify him either.. But he loves her too much and is hurting from within for years now, ever since he decided to let go of her.. The pent up anger had to come out some day..

he shouldn't have included Ro's daughter in all this mess😡...he touched the wrong nerve😡...

Ro ...the lady whom i loved trusted from the initial never proved me wrong today but yet surprised me the most with her inner strength...being in the field work what she has gone through was...not yet came but...that would be more shocking i know you di🥺...

but for a species she is ...unique no wonder why she took the decision and in those circumtances this is 👏...

she endured her loved ones murder in front of her eyes,...but seeing her daughter's dead face what she went through i don't want assume its heart breaking🥺...

and Arjun won't be able to forgive himself for what he spilled out in anger never...

That's coz he doesn't know about her daughter and husband's death..
And am glad u could relate to Rosy's pain..

di...for all of us Ro is indeed an inspiration but please let her avenge first then ...every thing will sort out just my pov...

CONGRATULATIONS on 1st anniversary of THE LADY IN RED👏...

and an a huge round of applause for you👏...

waiting for Arjun Aisha , Karan- Rosy conversation ...

update soon love you di🤗

Yup.. shes here for revenge.. But she cannot do it without him.. And unless her fears and weaknesses are done away with, she won't be prepared to face the enemy.. You know who'll help her deal with it, right? 😉

Thanks so much Nee.. 🤗 Love u too..

Originally posted by: Devangana

That was absolutely brilliant. Continue soon please.

Originally posted by: miss_precious

Indeed that was a shocker... She had a daughter and she also died... How sad... That's emotiona... Will arjun now know everything?!

Please update soon x

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Dammit B2...ek hint toh deh deti...i would have prepared myself for this...

I have to confess this...For the first time while reading an update of lady in red, I felt tears in my eyes..so intense, poignant it was...

Lol.. Jhatka dena tha na aap sabko. But I'm surprised u hadn't caught the hints before, B3.. There were ample of those.. 😳
Aww.. Sorry about that.. But it gets more intense now on..

she had a daughter and she too died...kitna rulaavogi Rosy ko...And Arjun knows that she had a daughter...but i guess he doesnt know that she is no more...else he wouldnt have hurt her with those words

Yupp.. he doesn't know.. Not even about her husband.. To answer your qst that u asked at the adda, u gotta keep in mind that their relationship is waay different from how we perceive friendship and love.. Besides he wasn't even thinking about it when he was drawn closer to her.. It just happened, naturally..

ab next part keliye wait nahi hota...anxious to read the convo between Aisha and Arjun!

Coming back to the other parts which literally faded out of my mind with that last bit of revelations...

Aisha-Rosy convo, their sisterly bickering and Sameer enjoying it was cute...then ofc the washroom scene...the silly girls...everything was so well written...loved it!

then Rosy-Mario, an encounter I had been dreading and i knew Arjun would see all of it...isiliye i read the whole scene and convo with a strange fear...I knew Arjun would lash her out soon after...and the same happened.

Thank you ji!

The accusing words was really hurting though Arjun told all of that in his own despair and hurt!

but Ro's past and her pain as a mother losing a child out did all his hurt...ab toh Arjun ka saare dard usske dukh out of focus hogaya...

its just Ro, the lady in red now in my heart...i feel so sad for her...I know even a revenge wont give her peace of mind or solace but still thats the least she can do...and her stepping into the dark world is only justified...hope she manages to get justice!

Awwie.. Maybe not.. she won't ever go back to being the person she was before.. But yes like u said, that's the least she can do for her child.
P.S. @ Bold: I'd say.. lips sealed behna.. You know me, don't u.. 😛 Aap hi se seekha hai.. 😆😆

cont soon

Thanks so much B3.. ❤️

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Congrats once again B2...

I need not elaborate on what makes this story special...its not just one thing but many many things that make up this story one of the best fictions of this forum...and as I always tell u that it would make a superb thriller book!

Another point is the air of mystery around the story and the lady herself which hadnt ended even after an year...It makes it all the more interesting!

Thank u soo much.. Coming from u, that means a lot! 😳
@ Bold : bohot gaali padti hai mujhe.. 😆😆

No doubt Miss A and Mr A continue to rule the space with their own strong persona but then Karan's charm has a magic as well...I love him too!

khair, iss story ka sab kuch pasand hai mujhe...harr panna special hai!

Yup! I love him too.. KC ho gaya na.. 😉

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Amazing VM...it was like seeing the story in action...loved it!

Waiting for the next part!