Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 103

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Di,
We know the story is now at a very crucial point...
I dont know it fits or not..
but I'd like to give a poetic dedication to our very favorite LADY IN RED..

hope u like it...

Tanhaiyon me aksar hum chupke se roya karte they...
Tere gamgeen yaadon aksar dil khoya karte they...

Ashk e rawa k alawa na mila kuch iss beraham zindagi..
phir bhi aansu bahaake khush hua kartey they.

Chalein chali kismatne hamare sath kuch aise...
Hum khud ko hi bhula baithe ho jaise...
Sheeshey me nazre na mila paye aise badal gaye hai..
Apni saari jazbatey luta gaye hai.

Jhooti muskano me zindagi ki sachchai dabaye nahi dabti...
Ye baat hum di ko samjha ke aaye hai...
Zakhamo dil k cheer k rakha hai kuch is tarah
Seene se dil ko hum nikal k aaye hai...

tere mere dil ki dastan ae jana hum dil ko bata ke aye hai...
dil se dil ka rishta hum nibha k aye hai..
Tere Ishq me jeena marna kya hum khud ko mita k aye hai.
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry



wow amazing one
thanks for the pm dear😊😊



Thanks soo much.. Happy new year to u too.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Congo for 1 year...

This is one of my favourite story...
VM is fab...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...



Thanks a ton.. Really glad u like it.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

Happy anniversary of Lady in Red..
Wish atleast two more years dear..
Hat's off Avantika..
Girl u let me enter an entirely ddifferent world. .
Thanks a lot...



Aww.. 😳
2 more years.. You guys will slaughter me.. 😆

Thanks a ton! 😃


Originally posted by: hal96

Loved it 2 bits

Awesome update
Bechari Rosy
Shes been througb so much pain ... lost her l9ve then her baba then her husband n her daughter
Tears flowing down my cheeks
Wonder what Ayesha will say to Arjun
Will she say the entire truth to him n everything
Update soon
Cant wait
Thanks 4 pm
😊



Thanks so much! Aww.. don't worry..
Yeah she will tell him only what she herself is aware of.. The rest will still be hidden..


Originally posted by: nakshatra92

first of all sorry for being late...

awesome update as usual... loved it...

ro - ayesha convo was nice ... sameer - a silent spectator...

ayesha concerned for ro...

mario 😡 , after all this how could she behave casual?? bold lady... hats off...

arjun's reaction as expected... the pain , guilt of not saving them vented out ... but poor ro...

she lost her husband and the precious part her daughter...

waiting for arjun - ayesha talk... ro hid everything from him for his sake but he criticised her...

update soon and thanks for the PM




Thanks!

She has to.. Coz now u know how important the mission is to her..
Yup! That's the precious part, I'd mentioned before..

He did it, coz he was really angry.. But let him cool down and he'll smack himself for it.. 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

That was indeed an emotional one..
Rosy-Ayesha, truly these two are sisters, so caring and understanding.Glad that they had a convo and Rosy has figured out that Arjun has begun to put the odds together and has started to plan by putting two and two together.What has happened in that place that Arjun wants to find out and Rosy is scared of?

Thanks! That place holds a lot of secrets.. But Arjun will have to dig deeper if he wants to unearth them all..


Mario has started to make his intentions more and more clear.He is so curious to find out about Rosy, that evident as he too finds her so mysterious.And Rosy is really so brilliant and confident to handle everything as per the situation, that also a reason why I Love her so much.I don't blame Arjun much for saying her so much things.It might have taken him such a great effort to stop himself and watch her so close to Mario that too smiling
and he said what he felt at that moment.So, he can't be blamed much.It was his Love that made him hurt her with his words.

Yup.. I don't blame him either..

Rosy, her daughter, her most priced possession..that was something, I had guessed somewhere.So, Arjun had been keeping tab on her every now and then, so how did he miss such a big thing, about Yash and her daughter's death?

He wasn't keeping tabs on her.. But he was unaware of her husband and daughter's deaths.. More on it when we get to Arisha's convo..

Now, Rosy's wound has been opened once again.She couldn't handle herself at the moment.
I guess she'll now share her pain and open up with Karan.She needs somebody to hear her out and handle her at the moment.

Yup! she does.. And karan will be right beside his partner..

And Aisha-Arjun convo is also much needed.Arjun seems to be unaware of a lot of things, he has been kept in dark all along. But I'm scared thinking Arjun's reaction, when he finds out about all these things.

Yup.. but she can only tell him what she knows.. Coz there's a lot that's hidden from her too..
Looking forward to more..
Continue Soon.



Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

First of all, wish you and your family a very happy new year.May this year bring a lot of happiness to you..
The Lady in Red,
it a year old now.Another reason to celebrate..a happy anniversary too:)
This story has become really special to me from the very beginning.A wonderful and brilliant suspense thriller story.It's been a year now, still the suspense hasn't been leaked, it's still revolving around Rosy.Rosy has been very important for me too now, I smile and shed tears with her.I think I too feel the pain she feels while I read the story.
Love this story..and wish for many more parts of it.
Do continue soon.
And once again, a lots of congrates..



Wish u and family a very Happy and Prosperous New Year too.. 😃

Aww.. Thank u soo much.. I am really very glad that u can relate so deeply to it.. 🤗




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samiya.059

OMG...though u had warned to keep tissues handy still couldnt control my emotions...!!!
Oh!! life has been very unfair to our "lady in the red"...truely her life has been written in red...BLOOD RED

Oh!
And yes it has..

Arjun's outburst was expected considering last few chapters..but I hadnt expected that he would raise finger on her character...it was so unlike arjun
The grief he experienced when he saw rosy in another man's arms made him mad with anger and he said all that...but still he did worst use of words..grief does not change you,it reveals you

Maybe u are right! But from how I see it, he's been hurting a lot too all these years.. He'd lost her to Yash and was helpless back then.. And today when he's just as helpless, but in a different way, he probably lost his sanity..
I agree, he went a bit too far.. But I think that's how His and Her relationship has been.. You'll know more when we get to it.. But they've always hurt each other where it hurts the most, of course unintentionally..

My heart went out to rosy...she is left empty handed...I can now relate to her insecurities...they aren't baseless...she has lost everything dear to her...parents ,her little child her husband her friend and her loveGrief is the price we pay for love& rosy surely has payed a big price.I was shocked to learn about ro's daughter...though u had given a slight hint in one of the chapter(if am not wrong)where arjun visits raghu dixit's house and sees a picture of a little child and he saw ro's reflection in child's face!!
Thank God karna is there for ro..he is a perfect gentle man...for the time being ro would need his shoulder to cry on..!!

Yup.. that's the Flashback.. She is indeed left empty-handed but she's far from giving up.. Coz she still has something to fight for.. She cannot lose him, ever! And then there's revenge too..

am happy that aiesha has decided to reveal everything to arjun...he needs to know everything...the time is prefect..!!
am happy that rosy cried for her loss...she needed to vent out her sadness..she badly needed to weep..There is no grief like the grief that does not speak..!!

He does.. But does Ayesha know the entire truth? We'll have to find that out..
Yup.. but the healing will only begin once she pours it out to the one who can do something about it..

hats off to you for brilliantly potraying such emotional chapter
perfectly written..!!!
waiting eagerly for next chapter
update soon



Thanks so much.. Really glad u could connect to it..


Originally posted by: samiya.059

Time flies so quickly..it seems as if were yesterday that I had received first pm for this ff..
I must admit it is One of the best piece of fiction I have read on forum...!_
It was truly a rollar costar ride as u had promised during the start
Every chapter was brilliantly written...The best thing about this ff is its unpredictability..the air of mystery around each character and the beautiful portrayal of characters...
congrats on completion of one year..!!


P.S. an absolutely lame attempt...boht bura bana hai I know..but still..birthday gift toh Dena tha na



Hey.. Thank u very much.. And am happy that u returned to it.. 😊
nahi nahi.. I love it.. Really appreciate the effort! 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Swara85

Hey firstly Congratulations for the 1st anniversary..😊
coming to updates..
Chapter 39 A :
The way you described each and every scene was superb.
Loved Arjun and Rosy's relationship.. Nicely portrayed... Well done on that.👏
And Karan was a great partner always keeping her focused and grounded..
Beautifully written..👏

Chapter 39 B :
Well what to say..i m speechless
I thought part A was great but this was perfect..
I'm not good at words so understand by this-👏

Thanks for pm and sorry for late comments..
plas cont soon.



Thanks so much..

Coming up soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

First of all, a very happy new year Avi Di...
&
Happy Birthday to the LADY IN RED... ❤️

Thank U so much Di!! For gifting us this wonderful story that has kept us feeling for and with our Lady!!

U r a genious, u know!!
U made us believe in fiction so hard that we cried for our Rosy, laughed with her and enjoyed the story as if we were part of this show!!

We all love this story genuinely!!
Its a rollercoaster ride that no-one would want to miss!!

Lov U Di!
and a big cheers for the Lady!!
Hotwa toh lajawab hai hi...
But my Mr. Pareira is also no less!! ❤️



Sumu.. Thank u soo much dear.. 😃 🤗

That's a huge compliment and I hope I'm able to do justice to the story in the further parts.. 😃
Your comments actually put up a smile on my face always! 😃

Aha.. he's no less for sure.. 😉
And Karan Babu too.. 😉



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diw9

Chapter 36

Sameer stayed with Aisha whole night just to give her support.
support.
Arjun and the whole team got two shocks-
one that Miss A knew about her fathers mission and Arjun's involvement in it.
Bonding between the sisters nicely written.
Mr A had to instigate Miss A to know the truth about their fake death.



Yup.. he's going to push her until she gives in..

Originally posted by: diw9

Chapter 37

loved the update.
Are they going to find a clue or another dead end in the village.
Mario is planning something bad for Ros.

They will.. plenty of them.. But will they be able to put the dots together? 😛



Originally posted by: diw9

Chapter 38

Mario is angry because of his men's mistakes.
they are doing in on their own or the team is making them do it.
Arjun as a photographer.
Now he know's they have the same mission in hand.
what is still hidden that the team can not know about the mission that was started by the sisters.



Nah.. his men were really betraying him..
Ayesha will reveal bits to Arjun in the later chapters..


Originally posted by: diw9

Chapter 39A

What is rosy up to.
Did she put a traker on Mario.
Loved the dance betwen Karan-Rosy-Arjun.
Arjun called her Arohi after a long time and told her to be careful.



Nah.. she didn't.. remember the walk on the beach after she met arjun for the first time.. She gathered proofs from there..

Originally posted by: diw9

Chapter 39B.

The most shocking update till now.
Are you going to give your readers any more shock or this was the last one?
What is hidden in banda village?



Oh yes.. lots more.. 😆
I shall wait for u to find out..

Thank u soo much.. Really appreciate all of it.. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Happy Anniversary to The Lady In Red!
Congratulations Avantika di...!!
Its the most favourite FF of mine! I Love it and love you for creating this

P.S. Sorry for my lateness



Thank u soo much, my dear.. 🤗
Glad you chose to hang in there.. 😊

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