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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blessed4

Superb part. Hope Armaan realizes

His love before he leaves for the USA
Please continue soon


thanks dear
bt he won't
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

osome part dear...
Ridhima ne yeh kya manga..
Armaan name it attraction hudfff i hate that word armaan said...

Armaan is not aware of his fellings... Hufff
...


Continue super duper sooonnn plz


armaan is confused...woh khud nahi janta ki usse kya chahiye🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Hayye yeh kiya hogaya...
hmm itni jaldi tohdi Armaan apne dil ki baat kahenge.. use toh abhi tak maalum nehi hai woh Riddhima se pyar karta hai... aur use apni amanat samajhte hai :)

it was superbbb part... love it...
cont. super soon..
take care :)


thanks dear
hope jab woh realize kare sab theek ho🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ojaswi_kajen

awesome update...

poor ridzi...
i hope armaan realise that its not an attraction but love...
cont soon...waiting eagerly for ur next update...
thanks for the PM...!!!


thanks dear
hope he realizes😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 16:



roengi aankhe muskurane ke baad,
raat aayegi din dhalne ke baad,
ae jaane wale zara mudke to dekh
shayad ye zindigi na rahe tere jaane ke baad.



THE DAY ARMAAN IS LEAVING FOR US:

As he finished his last minute packing, Armaan was anxious all morning. He wondered where Riddhima could be. He had not seen her much since his birthday. He really wanted to spend the last few hours with her. He had called her house several times, but Shashank had informed him that she had gone to the University to turn in her applications.



"Itni der lagaa di.sirf application submit hi tho karni thikya usey pataa nahin ki main aaj 2 saal ke liye jaa raha hoon," he was upset with her, "kya usey meri bilkul kadar nahin?"



Riddhima had been dreading this day for a long time. After the recent turn of events, she was not sure whether she should even bid him goodbye. Since her birthday, she had felt an array of feelings inside her- initial anger, then humiliation, then dejection, and now just hollowness. A numb feeling inside her; where she had shut herself from the thought of the moment when Armaan would be gone. Despite all her anger against him, the thought of him leaving left her yearning for him even more so than she ever had. May be Armaan was right- she was more insecure after her mother's death-is that why she did not want him to leave, or was it the fear that she might never see him again?




Riddhima tried to stay busy all day at some pretext or another. She came back from the University and shut herself in her room. She prayed to God, "Hey Vaishno Matamujhey shakti de ki main aaj Armaan ke saamne apne oopar kaaboo rakh sakoon.kahin toot na jaaoon."



As she was praying, she heard someone enter her room. She looked up- it was Armaan. He gave her a tender and warm look, "kya aaj bhi mujh se nahin milegi? Itni naaraz hai?"



Riddhima tried best to control her emotions, "nahinaisi koi baat nahinwo bas," she got up and walked to him, "sab tayyari ho gayi?" she looked away, trying to hide her tears.


Armaan's eyes filled up with tears too; he placed his hand on her shoulder gently, "roz phone par baat karegi na?"


She nodded, "main tho phone kar doongibas tum mera call answer kar dena," she could not hold her tears any more.




Armaan could not hold his tears either; he pulled her closer and squeezed her in his arms. They did not say anything, just held each other for some time. Riddhima's tears soaked his shirt; her warmth filled his heart. He kissed her forehead and pulled away, "Chal main chalta hoon..and no more tears.apne saath tere aansoo nahin, teri muskaan le jaana chaahta hoon."


She smiled through her tears and wiped her face with her dupatta, "aur de bhi kya sakti hoon tumhein?" she complained and sniffed her nose.


Armaan sighed and gazed at her sad face, "main jaate hi phone karoonga..theek haiintezaar karna mere phone ka."


Riddhima's fears came true- she could not control herself as she hugged him again, "mat jao Armaan.mujhey chhod kar mat jao..main bilkul akeli ho jaaoongi," she sobbed loudly on his chest.


"Pagli.2 saal tho aise nikal jaayenge," he snapped his fingers, "aakhir ek din aisa tho hona hi tha.ab zyaada senti mat ho," he took out his handkerchief and gave it to her, "meri flight miss ho jaayegi..ab jaa raha hoon main," he peeled himself away from her and walked out with a heavy heart; he looked back and said, "2 saal mein jab aaoonga.yahin iss khidki ke paas milna mujheyand with a big smile.theek hai," he waved and then took leave from Shashank.


Riddhima was upset at herself as she had promised to not appear vulnerable in front of Armaan, but she could not help it; even if Armaan would never reciprocate the intensity of her love, she could never stop loving him. He was her first and only love, and would always have a special place in her heart.




Riddhima cried all day till her eyes dried up. She had never felt so lonely in her life; first her mother's death and now separation from Armaan was too much for her frail body. Riddhima fell sick the following day; she ran a high temperature and could barely get out of bed. Muskaan came and stayed with Riddhima for a few days and took care of her friend.


Armaan reached the US and found himself busy trying to settle down in the new country. Every so often, he saw flashes of Riddhima sobbing on his chest, "mat jao mujhey chhod kar.." Each time his heart skipped a beat when he thought of her clinging to his chest. He really wanted to talk to her, but since he had landed he had gotten so wrapped up with the formalities of living in the US-getting a driver's license, social security number, leasing an apartment etc etc.


He was yet to get a phone line at his new apartment, so he made a quick phone call home from a friend's phone to inform everyone that he had reached Detroit safely.
"Mamaaap Riddhima ko bhi bata dena ki main pahunch gaya hoon.abhi mera phone connection nahin lagaa hai."


"Zaroor bataa doongi puttar!" Naina hung up with an evil smile, "meri matt maari gayi hai jo usko bataaungi."



"Riddhima.tu bhi mere saath Chandigarh chalmera wahan Rahul ke college mein admission ho gaya hai," Muskaan informed Riddhima while nursing her through her illness.



'Nahin Muskaan.daddyji ko chhod kar main kahin nahin jaaoongi," Riddhima said, "Patiala mein hi paida huyi thiyahin par apna dam bhi thodungi."




"Riddhimatu bhi nakitni depressing baatein karne lagi hai?..Armaan aa jaayega 2 saal meinphir tho tu uske paas hamesha reh sakti hai na," Muskaan scolded Riddhima




Riddhima buried her eyes on the ground, "nahin Muskaan.aisi koi baat nahin hai," she hesitated to tell her friend what Armaan had said to her on her birthday.




Riddhima looked forward to Armaan's phone from the US, but never received one. Of course, Naina never conveyed Armaan's message to her either. Once she recovered, Riddhima gathered some courage and knocked on the Mallik's door.




"Pairi paini auntyjee," she greeted Naina



"Aao aao Riddhima puttar, kya haal hain? Suna tha tum kaafi bimaar thi pichle dino?" Naina asked sweetly


'Bas aise hi auntyjee, kuch bukhaar ho gaya tha," Riddhima said softly, "auntyjeewo Armaan ki kuch khabar? Kya aap mujhey Armaan ka phone number de sakti hain?"



Naina's smile vanished at that question, "bhai mujhey kya pata? Shayad Suhani ke paas ho number.usko tho roz phone karta hai na wo.iska matlab tujhey jaane ke baad ek phone bhi nahin kiya? Hai rabba! Kaisa dost hai?" Naina rolled her eyes gleefully.

"Suhani?" Riddhima was surprised because as far as she was aware, Armaan had never shown any interest in Suhani


"Suhani ka number doon tujhey?" Naina asked


"Nahin .koi baat nahin auntyjee," Riddhima turned around and left. May be somewhere inside her she had a little hope that Armaan would miss her once he was away, but even the last flicker of hope was dying soon.

Shashank senesed that his daughter had become very quiet and depressed since Armaan left, "puttar.kuch bahar wahar jaaya kar.apne doston se mila kar..kab tak Armaan ki yaad mein roti rahegi? Waise bhi tu tho jaanti hai ki Armaan aur teri.." he paused.


"Jaanti hoon daddyji..Naina aunty kya, wo bhi mujhse shaadi nahin karna chaahta.main hi pagal hoon," she said softly.


Shashank was a little upset, "tho phir usko yaad karna chhod de puttar.waise bhi humein iss ghar se kuch din mein jaana hi hai," he added


"Kya kaha daddyji?" Riddhima was surprised


"Haan puttar.ab tu sayani ho gayi hai.tujh se kuch nahin chupaaoonga," Shashank sat down and told her about the contract, "tabhie keh raha hoon ki iss ghar aur apni yaadon se lagaav chhod de puttar..ab hum dono ko aage badhna hai..bhool ja iss ghar ko, aur bhool jaa Armaan ko..wo tera achha dost tha..ab uska raasta aur tera raasta alag ho chuka haiiss liye kehta hoon puttar himmat se kaam le."


Riddhima had always looked up to her father's advise; she knew he was right, "aap theek kehta hain daddyji..mujhey hi sab kuch bhoolna hoga.waise bhi mummyji ke bina yeh ghar kaatne ko daudta hai..ek baat kahoon daddyji?"


"Haan bol," Shashank said


"Hum intezaar kis baat ka kar rahe hain? Jaldi hi shift kar jaate hain iss ghar se..kyun hum Billy unclejee ka ehsaan aur din sahein?" she asked


Shashank lowered his eyes and then told her about the loan taken for Padma's surgery.


Riddhima was really upset with the Malliks now, "daddyji.kya un logon mein itni bhi insaaniyat nahin ki mummyji ab nahin rahi, aur wo phir bhi apne paise ke peeche padhe hain? Shayad bhagwan theek hi karta hai daddyji..wo mujhey aise ghar ki bahu nahin banana chaahta thaachha hai mera dil abhi toot gaya.kahin sach much shaadi ho gayi hoti Armaan se, tho bahut der ho jaati," she reflected.


Shashank caressed his daughter's head, "tu bahut samajhdar ho gayi hai puttar."


Riddhima got up and started packing the house into boxes; there was no reason for them to stay even a day longer. She resolved to figure out a way to pay the debt back to the Malliks as soon as possible, but there was no way she could live in this house any longer.


In between her packing, Riddhima started distracting herself by writing a diary. She started putting all her thoughts on paper. Of course most of her thoughts centered around Armaan and their childhood memories. She had tons of memories from this house and before they left, she wanted to capture as many in her diary.


Shashank had no choice but to agree with Riddhima's plan. He was a worried man though, "ab kahan jaayenge hum log? Kahan se paisa laayenge? Riddhima ki padhai kaise poori hogi?"


As a worried Shashank, pondered on his options, there was a knock on the door.


"Arre Amar tu?" Shashank was surprised


"Pairi paini Tauji!" Amar touched his uncle's feet and walked in.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...I srsly hate that naina she is soo cunning...and ridzi was damn understanding...I hope amar won't create any new prob in ridzi's life...cont soon...and thanks for the PM...!!!
Edited by ojaswi_kajen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg.. yeh amar kyun aya...😡😡😡😡
issey bhagao...😡😡


armaan chala gaya???😭
aab riddhima ka kya hoga??
iss amar se kaun bachayega??😭😭

i guess asad's entry is knocking at d door, isn't it??😃😃
waiting eagerly vibha..
update soonishh...😆😆😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update . Feel very sad for
Ridhima. Hope this Amar guy doesn't
Take advantage of her. Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ye amar kya kar raha hai yaha???? Di isse bhagao yahase..nhi toh mere hato do do khun ho jayegi 😛 ridhima is way much stronger what i think
Edited by Prizi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...vibha...


u gonna cry for him later
and soon asad gonna enter😉

Akhir hai toh woh armaan hi... Jitna bhi gussa karu lekin at the end roti khud hu... Wow asad's entry...i'm so hooked up to this ff nw

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