Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 33

Originally posted by: Live-life

I don't have words to describe this update!!

Seriously...I don't!! 😃

It was just too perfect!! With each person's feelings described as if I could

Just see right through them!!

For that I have to give you this...👏

And coming to the update!

It started out with a shocker!! For me atleast!! 😕

When Arjun and Rathore overheard Dustin Cohelo and Meera talking I thought that they

Might come to find out the whole truth!!

But, it wasn't the whole truth! Yet, there was glimpse about someone whom they loved very much!!

And Rathore was pretty angry 😡by what I imagined and read! And Arjun...well it's like he relived the moment when roshni had died. Wasn't that how he described it?

I could tell that he was badly hurt, hurt to his soul!! Realizing the only person who had started to make him feel human again... Was faking it, wasn't what he thought she was. Realizing that it was all an act! If only...they knew the whole truth!

And I liked the little Ayesha's day dreaming scene about Rathore!! It was cute and romantic! 😳

She really has fallen hard, hasn't she?😛 But I felt bad for her when Rathore shouted at her. He shouldn't have done that. But then he was deeply hurt as well...

What should I say about shree and Chotu? They were as badly affected as their sceniors!

With whom they had formed the sacred bond of friendship had betrayed them! 😕

And Riya...well she doesn't realize how much damage has been done to those four men whom she cherished the most.

And well... She has her own turmoil. Realizing that she loved Arjun. She loves the man who think she is no more. And she thinks she doesn't care and has probably forgotten about her.

But... She is wrong. She doesn't realize how much she has affected him. How much she has changed him.

And the las part just go to me!! Four of the men thinking that that there was no truth,no trust and no relationships in this world.

Only deception, intrigue, and manipulation. If they could just see the whole picture...

Because I know for a fact that Riya didn't do all of this on purpose. There has to be a reason behind it!

Behind everything!!

And you made me cry again at the end!! As in mote mote magarmach wale Aasun!! 😭😭

A Fantabulously amazing update!!!! 👏👏👏

Continue soon!!! And do pm me!!

Originally posted by: ninii

Fantastic have no words just fabulous update
loved the way each and every emotion are described
u are doing very well just awsome
waiting for the next update
thnks for the pm

Originally posted by: shah10

Awesome update

Fantastic update Love it Arjun and Rathore heard the conversation between commisioner and Riya's mom conversation and to know that Riya has hidden some truth from them Commisioner wants to tell etf member the truth but Riya's mom stoping him to do that Rothore and Arjun POV was written very beautifully Arjun is felling betrated by HIS RIYA Arjun is felling a simillar pain what he felt after Roshni's death. Shree's and chotu's POV are also nicely written Ayesha's felling is beautifully portrait. Riya is thinking that etf does remember her and Arjun is uneffected by her death So the girl is an escort and also a friend of neha Seems like etf and NIB cases are interrelated Precap seems very intertesting Thanks for the pm Waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Fantastic update Love it Arjun and Rathore heard the conversation between commisioner and Riya's mom conversation and to know that Riya has hidden some truth from them Commisioner wants to tell etf member the truth but Riya's mom stoping him to do that Rothore and Arjun POV was written very beautifully Arjun is felling betrated by HIS RIYA Arjun is felling a simillar pain what he felt after Roshni's death. Shree's and chotu's POV are also nicely written Ayesha's felling is beautifully portrait. Riya is thinking that etf does remember her and Arjun is uneffected by her death So the girl is an escort and also a friend of neha Seems like etf and NIB cases are interrelated Precap seems very intertesting Thanks for the pm Waiting for the next part

unres my comment pg-37😃😃

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

Res
me again second
leki

unres

it was awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super-duper, block buster and mindblowing update dear.

I just love it.

You have beautifully writeen all pov.

So Arjun and Rathore heard the conversation between commisioner and Riya's mom conversation.

A they come to know that Riya has hidden some truth from them.

Commisioner wants to tell etf member the truth but Riya's mom stoping him to do that

loved rathore and arjun POV.

arjun thinks that riya is bertrayed him. Her love, her care was just a lie.

and rathore also angry.

they think that riya is just a lier.

serously they loved riya as a collegue, as a friend, sister and many things but feel bertrayed.

loved ayesha thinking.

she had a crush on rathore but rathore all anger brusted or poor ayesha.

ayesha feels crying but it was not rathore falut because he also feeling sad and yet bertrayed.

loved samjun talk.

loved riya pov.

riya is falling for arjun but thinks her dead doesnt effect arjun and he does not remember her.

but poor girl dont know who she affect arjun.

yaar it was shocking update. All are angered to riya.

but technically dekha jaye its not riya fault.

riya is doing her job to save her country.

so riya cracked siddharth case.

i think ETF and NIB case are fully same.

i am thinking when they know about riya what was that reaction and specially our super cop arjun.

i just hope they dont angered on riya.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.

or jaldi update dena

Originally posted by: Amri174

Thanks a lot for commenting, Megha❤️

Yes, the members of the ETF are very angry with Riya. I don't blame them. If a person you care about lies to you all the time, won't you feel betrayed? That's the reaction I wanted to show in this chapter.

Arjun in particular is very angry. The poor guy is already confused about his feelings, and now this?

Riya is going to get the shock of her life when she finally gets to meet her friends and her love. She's already insecure about having been forgotten by them, will she misunderstand their anger too

And welcome for the PM jii, you're my most faithful reader.😊

Till the tenth of Aug, then😃

Madamji last page u said u vl update by 9th now u r sayn 10th not fair ...i want on 9th

Originally posted by: Leki

Madamji last page u said u vl update by 9th now u r sayn 10th not fair ...i want on 9th