'You Add COLOR To My Life' UPDATED! Pg8 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb cannot wait to read more
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My Nish is writing a story! 😃
Awesome concept!
Looking forward to read!
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niceee :D
glad to see u back :D
continue soon :)
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Fairy tale love story...
Poor jeevs.. her dream got interuppted lol
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SUPERB!!! 😃
CONTINUE SOON!! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woohooo look who's back 😃
Nimo 😎

yuhooo lovelyyy start dear 😳
i loved it ❤️
it sounds like SRK movies and i love his films ❤️

so u better continue soon or else u have to face the consequences 😆😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER :1



"Aaa Mummyyy..."

Mummy?!?! that didn't certainly help Jeevika'she had more to face after that incomplete blissful dream!

It was Izzie'YET AGAIN!'.she never failed in breaking Jeevika's dream! But wooaaa she was fuming with anger now...how dare she call her MUMMY?!? After all she was the second most 'HOT' n 'HAPPENING' girl in the California'because Jeevika took hold of the first one! 😉

But the rage was mutual 'once again Jeevika couldn't see his face because of her. She had been having those beautiful dreams of her Prince coming to take her away on a white steed..but Izzie and her guitar always came in her way'

The two with squeezed eyes looked at each other ...held onto the pillows tight and began "The FIGHT." This had become much of their daily routine now, but they were no sign of boredom from this. It was more and more fun each day and cursing each other, hitting each other with those feathery pillows, they would end up laughing on the bed and clicking a picture'capturing their most Precious memories!

It was 8:00 am and here Mr.Viren was all set for office. He had a pretty simple and a smooth going life. An 8 to 8 day at office..back home to dinner and then SLEEP! NOT AT ALL a happening Life'.but he liked it the way it was. He had no one to look upto when back home 'that was depressing for him at times'well at most times'but he never complained. He went on with what Life brought for him, but YES he had molded his life into a several cups. The amount of hard work he had put in was unfathomable and the results were well deserved. He owned one of the largest and the finest firms in California. Such a honorable and successful man he was but had no girl in his life..sounds strange right?? But It was a fact that he had given into NO temptations till now'when he was 24 , with the most charming looks and the power to make everyone turn their heads, a Perfect 10 on 10 body, a Killer smile and a heart of pure gold with his money n power adding onto the List for most people. But having a precise look into his life story..there was a girl. His College Crush! The most gorgeous girl around whom everyone wished to be coupled with..but sigh none did manage to pull off to her expectations.

YES! All your guesses are on the right track'It was Jeevika. And a secret to share'The secret love was Mutual!

But none of them put a step forward to confession. Shy Loving Souls'stealing glimpses all the years of college , admiring but speaking nothing! But forgetting past isn't that easy right? The two were single...but not ready to mingle. They could never justify themselves for this but yes they couldn't move on. Maybe their hearts were stuck in those days when just a look was enough for the day to pass'but they were gone with a minutest hope to meet again. But FATE you call it.

This is how Life was for Jeevika ' full of fun and play but alongside went WORK. She was the Chairman of a well reputed Company'none could guess it from her carefree nature, but Yes she was a Damn Hardworking Girl! And on contrast was Viren'a life as successful as Jeevika but without the colous of FUN n LOVE. They were sailing in the same boat yet a different one'but who cared to stop and have a look'LIFE WAS MOVING AT ITS PACE!

It was a Monday Morning'

When Jeevika was done with her daily dose of morning fun and all set for work and Viren was on his way to his work.

It was a usual day until Viren got a call confirming his meeting with the Company he had been trying to enroll in a deal. This was a good start to the day and off course of a great week for him.

On the other hand, Jeevika was all set to make an important deal of her life too. This was gonna be a big turnover for her company . Th e deal meant a lot..like A LOT!

With the two all set to be at their best and nail it at the meeting'the time literally flew!

It was 4 in the evening and time when the two companies were to get along discussing.

Jeevika entering the conference hall from the left was too engrossed in reading the file in her hand and was barely looking ahead, her head buried into the file . She was well dressed in her formals'Perfect dressing for office, with the minimal make-up and a high ponny tail. None surely beat her in her dressing sense!

And here was Viren walking through the opposite side, busy in his talks with his secretary marching towards the conference hall didn't bother to look in front and took over the most common yet the most different event to the beginning of 'The retreating Love' .BANG!!!! the file literally flew up in the air and here was Jeevika in Viren's strong arms initially oblivious where she fell..cursing the dumb who walked into her'while Viren was simply left staring at the figure he was confronting. Was it really HER?!? Was what roamed in his mind! Jeevika , as she managed to pull away the flicks which were falling into her eyes blocking her view of "The dumb she thought of" and as she was done and about to shower him with tough blows'she was Stunned!They had in front on them the people they longed to see...FINALLY!!!! But...

To Be Continued...

Hope you all like it.My Lappy is seriously unwell so couldn't post much...this ain't really a Long update...but yeah still...i think it will work.

DO LEAVE YOUR FEEDBACKS! Much appreciated.. 😊
The story has much more to unfold..i bet on that...

-Nishu ❤️




Edited by nimiksham - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres...
the update is super amazing...
luved viren nd jeevika persona...
nishu i want u cont soon!!!
plzzz cont soon na...
Edited by millee18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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greatt start and awesum update..keep continuinggg..eager to read the enxt update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...
Loved the start...
Last part was great..
Update soon

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