*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 66

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Aesome but short and so are my grabbers as there is only one because we just went to college and came back...

My grabbers...

Khushi's heart is "talking too much" and Arnav's eyes...good one as heart always looks through the eyes and doesn't comprehend words...He made her sink in his chest...good one..

He is whispering in her ears brushing his breath against her skin sending tingling shivers...wow ...my fav part and the way you wrote it ...delicious...

Khushi is sad going away and he doesn't want her to go ...Shyam ka tou bahana hai...BuT he is concerned with her safety ...

Khushi is jealous..."aap par sirf humara haq hai"...hmmm...winking Arnav with his teased looks...and happy internally...mean boy

She dozed off "what the.."...that is our wiwy's shtylwa...but he didn't forget to remove her locks ...hmmm...hmmm...good...a trade mark of Arnav

YES CONFESSION chahe neend main hi sahi...I love you Arnavji...me Love it wiwiji...

Arnav closed eyes with pain...over her confesion...hmmm...will wait for the update for this one..something signalling nice story on this side

Originally posted by: wiwy

Your witty comments and your trademark monkeys keep me 🤣 for hours! Shuchi, I am so lucky to have a wonderful friend and reader like you! 🤗 Thanks a tonne for being there for me!

Originally posted by: SAM32

buhaahahahahahahha fantabulous update :-D :-D :-D
u carried that part of her confession so well :-* :-D
loved the update every bit of it

Originally posted by: KittenRose

fantastic update, i want to read the next one immediately 😆

Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun

Reswa

Unres:

Wiwy, what a confession. One often speaks the truth when they sleep. No expectations or powergames going on at that time. And lucky ASR gets to hear it and has time to prepare himself. I bet he is relieved, what with his mind spinning around in jealousy imagining Shyam and NK vying for Khushi's attentions. Now he knows the truth, what will he do? Will he fess up? Or will he flirt with her till she crumbles and says it to his face. Ooh what sweet surrender that would be. I am on pins and needles Wiwy. Post the next update soon.👏

Originally posted by: sarun21

amazing and awesome update...

so finally khushi confessed her feelings for arnav in sleep...

loved the update very much...

simply superb...

awesome...

pls continue soon and pls pm me the update...

Originally posted by: chalhov

Wiwy love you for writing the short I love u update jealous and possessive Arnav and Khushi do make a pair

Originally posted by: aashi12

amazing yaar.. You write romance such well.. That i literally drool over each n evry scene..!

Hmm.. If only he'd come in my cllge.. I swear i would have run to him n nevr let go..

Aww.. Confession in her dreams.. What! Arnav's reac.. Is he frustrated.. Or not able to decide..?

Originally posted by: wiwy

Guruji ke Grabbers! Thankyou thankyou! And the edits! How do you always manage to turn up with the perfect ones?! Too good! I am delighted you liked the update. It means a lot to me!🤗