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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

That was such a beautiful piece Di!

It was simply breathtaking. The emotions that you portrayed all came through and snared attention till the end!

Write more often sistah! <3

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srishti_jain

@srishti_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

This was so beautiful!! Well done! 👏 😊

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Very beautiful OS with lots of love & emotions but in the end it was a miracle that she survived.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

This is beautiful...started to have tears

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

So beautiful~~~

I dint realise that I was crying while reading it !!!

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

A story which touched the deep recesses of my heart. I could feel everything written in this story. The love, the pain, the anger, the frustration of not being able to do anything to save the one thing you care the most in this world.

It was such beauty reading this OS, and the song selection was absolutely brilliant.

And thanks for the PMs while I was away.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

That was wonderful.. Their first meet to falling in love.. Arnav thinking of how it wud have been different without her.. Such a wonderful read...

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

that was absolutely amazing!

the way u showed their love from day one and the sorrow arnav felt when he looked at his cheerful khushi on a hospital bed in nothing but a piece of not-so colourful cloth...the pain of loosing her and the guilt of him being responsible for her state, it absolutely touched my heart.

that was just great!