SwaRon FF: Misfits [Chp 8 Pg 16 8th Jan'14] - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nidhi, my dear. Why aren't you coming up with any substance? And what is it with you and drugs these days?
The prologue that you put up was so enigmatic and you know, deep, and all this chapters that you're putting up are more of fillers. Although they help us understand a great deal about the friendship of the three.
Coming to the chapter, i'd like to say it was fairly a light-hearted one. It has always been an enjoyable experience to see Swayam drunk ( D3 or otherwise). Hamster! Hah! ^.^
Then there's Mary. Swayam had a girlfriend. I really have no clue where you're going with this.
Anyway, to sum it all up, you've added so many unique characters, the neighbor who listens to Jazz? Then Sharon who is another definition of weird in its entirety, Rey, and also Swayam himself! Its really an interesting concoction!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gargicool

Nidhi, my dear. Why aren't you coming up with any substance? And what is it with you and drugs these days?

The prologue that you put up was so enigmatic and you know, deep, and all this chapters that you're putting up are more of fillers. Although they help us understand a great deal about the friendship of the three.
Coming to the chapter, i'd like to say it was fairly a light-hearted one. It has always been an enjoyable experience to see Swayam drunk ( D3 or otherwise). Hamster! Hah! ^.^
Then there's Mary. Swayam had a girlfriend. I really have no clue where you're going with this.
Anyway, to sum it all up, you've added so many unique characters, the neighbor who listens to Jazz? Then Sharon who is another definition of weird in its entirety, Rey, and also Swayam himself! Its really an interesting concoction!


That's what I've been saying. I have no idea where this story is headed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Res..
Read it will be unresing soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
awesome one..
our threesome are high n telling their stroy😆..
swayam part was the best😆..
what!!!swayam had a girlfriend like seriously😲 but how n why?(this one frm swaron fan😆
but i loved the update..
plz update soon
n thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
read ur work for the first tym
it was much more than a epitome of a great read .
the chapters were fairly light hearted ones
n i luved swayam sharon n rey's characters
n ur one liners every chapter has tat
chap 1 ''today is the day i becum a legend ''
chap 4 ''tat's more like it''
very well written
do update soon n do pm me
i wud appreciate it .🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Lovely update
in whole update, sharon was hilarious
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Awosm Afab part love has has kk kya bolu love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom


That's what I've been saying. I have no idea where this story is headed.


Yeah, seems like it. What you're writing now has a very eluded connection with the prologue. I hope you find it in you to chronicle the magic in paper once again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have lost my track with the story. 😳 This is so, ridiculous of me. I am gonna start with the prologue again and be back by the weekend.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: epiphany.

I have lost my track with the story. 😳 This is so, ridiculous of me. I am gonna start with the prologue again and be back by the weekend.


You and me both, sista. I've been mentally harassing myself to find time to read yours. And thank god for Diwali vacations. I'll be getting to your story, soon enough! 😃

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