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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update in sometime...
As my phone battery charged up...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Sorry sorry sorry for late update..
Hope u all like this updates...
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PART-53
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VIrat puss her in her room nd closed the door with loud sound..he was too angry on her..first she left house without telling him nd now again she starts her rubbish..leave her alone nd all..he already know that from last few days she trying to talk with him abt this..he tries his best to calm nd make her understood that he can do anything for her even change himself totally..bt now its high time o his temper..
With all this he turn towards her with jerk which make her scared..after long time she again she saw same mad virat..his anger clearly visiable in hher eyes nd on his each nd every actions..his ecxpressions make her more scare..even she has no dare to move her gaze from him..she gulped nd step back as he walk towards her..
M-vi..vir..virat..k..kya kar rahe ho?..she manage to say..
V-just glaring at her with red shoted eyes..
V-kyu?..tumhe nahi pata?..he said full of anger..
V-continue-ek ladka ek ladki ko room me kyu lata hai?..he said with smirked..
M-she didnt like his joke as always-just shut up..bandh karo apna ye achcha drama banne ka drama aur jao yaha se..she said walk out from there..
Bt before she leave the room he grab her wrist nd turn her towards him with jerk nd pinned her with door forcefully..even she didnt know when this happen with her..her eyes were closed with this sudden action..
V-learned close to her nd place his both hands on her both either sides of door near her waist-kyu?..kyu jau main?..problem kya hai?..tang aa gaya hu tumhare is no matter behavior se..he said with cressing his each nd every words..he hurts a lot which can clearly visiable in his angry tone..
M-open her eyes nd looked him..
V-come more close to her-pata hai jab tumhe us raat hurt kiya tha?..tab se leke aaj tak oh sare moments..tumhare sare tears..tumari woh pleadings sab har raat mujhe yaad ati hai..pata hai kitna hurt hota hai..apne payar ko hurt dekhnaa..?
Hearing him maanvi felt going to numb with his every sentance..his sayingaall this in angry tone bt his feeling clearly she can feel as always..
V-more angrily-bolo naa?
M-hearing this she come out from his trance..she move her eyes from him nd look nd there-mujhe kuch nahi dikhta aur nahi dekhna na chahti hu..nd with this she try to puss him back..his closeness she cannot bear which making her lost him..which making him more angry..
M-bas chale jao yaha se..mujh se..meri life se dur..
V-going away from her this think only make him mad nd restless nd here she already saying this-lekin kyu?..he shouted loudly..full of angery nd mad..
V-preoblem kya hai tumhari?..haa?..mujhe accept karne me..mere accept karne me?..tumhare liye jitna badal sakta hu koshish kar raha hu..tumhe mere pagalpan se problem thi right?..lekin ab ab kya problem hai?
M-puss him back forcefully a his she found him loosing his anger-mujhe tumhari kisi problem nahi hai..kyuki tum hi ek problem ho..tumhe pata bhi hai tumhare yaha rahene se tumhare career pe..tumhari family pe kya effect ho rahi hai?..media me kya kya bate ho rahi hai?.she burst out her all tension nd what going inside her..
V-as he hear this he felt some good inside his heart-step step near to her-kya kaha?..tumhe un baato se farak padta hai?..kyu?..mere career..meri family paroblem tumhe farak padta hai?..he ask her in low voice bt still angry
As he ask her this she realize that she speak all her fears..she turn her face to other side..for ignore is questions nd his gaze..
M-nahi..mujhe koi farak nahi padta..
V-again same things hearing from her makes him irritate nd angry-damn..he shout angrily nd bang og door his palm angrily..
V-tum pagal ho kya?..yaa mujhe kar dogi..he said angrily..kuch samaz me nahi ata..kya chahti ho mujhse..jab kisi chiz ke liye force karta hu tab bhi problem hai aur jab apna sab kuch chhod ke tumhari aur sameer ki responsblity lena chahta hu to usme bhi problem hai..kyu?..he ask her angrily..his voice volum increasing with every minut..
V-tumne kaha tha ki tumhe apni family ki responsblity nibhani hai nd all that..to main taiyar hu woh sabhi reponsblity nibhane k liye..even nibha raha hu..sameer bhi mujhe apna chuka hai..sameer ko bhi shayad koi problem nahi hogi mujhe tum dono ki life me rahene se..
M-sameer sameer sameer..bas karo..sameer mera bhai hai..meri responsblity..tumhara koi hak nahi bich me padne ka..main sambhal lungi use..she said in between him..which make him out of controll..
V-come near to her nd hold her by sholder nd pinned with door again bt this time too force fully nd anger which can burn anyone-aur tum meri..tum aur tumari saari reponsblity meri hai..mera tumpe aur tumhari har ek chiz pe pura hak hai..he said angrily with comeing close to to her face..his voice sounds like made lion..he was mad e for bt he cannot understand why nd what stopping her to be with him..he try her clam shade bt now he know his anger deal with her..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-54
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she know how long nd how many times she deny his love nd care bt she cannot refuse the truth..nd also cannot hide her own feeling for him..she scared what if one day she cannot control on her feeling for him nd he saw her soft corner for him..she scared with accepting her own feeling..she know after last few days virat come close to her nd sameer..sameer nd she herself starts useing with him..he unknowingly entered in their life..
M-try to control on herself make strong ecxpression on her face-kyu apni life barbaad kar rahe ho yaha par..mumbai me tumhara career aur tumhari family tumhara wait kar rahe hai..
V-smirk..with full of passion nd love-kyuki meri life yaha hai..aur mujhe duniya se aur kuch nahi hahiye..naa ye career na kuch aur..he said in stony voice bt still his passion come in his voice..
M-lekin agar main kahu ki main chahti hu ki tum vapis lot jao apne career aur family k paas tab?..she said with full of concern..which was enough to ecxpress her emotions..
V-loos his grip on her sholder-tum chahti ho main ye sab karu?..bt still he is too close to her..
She nodded in yes..
V-thik hai lekin agar tum bhi mere saath chalogi..he demanded her..
M-looked away-nahi..
V-his temper again raising her no no no..every imporatnt things which he want to know from her bt she only say him to no..nd after that night he didnt want to force her..hurt her..
V-thik hai to main bhi kahi nahi jaa raha..5 min me ready ho jao hum dinner k liye jaa rahe hai..aur is baar mujhe naa nahi sunni..he said with angry tone looking in her eyes..nd he left her..
V-5 min..he reapted with more loud voice nd abt to open door bt stop as hear her voice..
M-nahi..main kahi nahi aa rahi..na dinner naa mumbai..
He close his eyes nd control on his anger to not hurt..he cannot bear rejection from anyone bt he try to not brust on her like before..
V-look at her with angry glare..
M-gulped with this..bt manage to say-aur..aur sameer bhi tumhare saath kahi nahi jayega..batter hoga tum chale jao yaha se..humare liye apni life ke saath compromise karne ki jarurat nahi hai..
He think for min nd bring phone from his pocket..
V-to his manager-abhi ke abhi yaha pahocho..mere sare directors,producers,sponcers nd media sab ke liye ek e-mail ready karna hai..aur haa ab tak meri jitne bhi pending work hai jinki humre pass pemant hai unke naam pe double amount ke checks bhi banake le aao..
Mn-scred to ask-bt..k..kyu sir..
V-looked at maanvi who looking at him with confussion-kyuki sab ko e-mail send karna hai ki..virat vadhera aaj se music world chhod raha hai..
Hearing this both maanvi nd his manager get shock..bt virat say all this too easily..with full of confidence on his sentance..
Mn-sir le
v-cut him-jo kaha hai woh karo..jald se jald yaha pahocho in sab ke saath..hume sabki payment lotani hai..baki sare legal actions hum dekhlenge..nd with this he hang up the call..
M-as he cut the call-ye kya kiya tumne?..pagal ho gaye ho?..apna successful career chhod doge?..virat music tumhara dream hai..she said in too worried tone..
V-from inside he know she cares alot for him..smirk nd pull her close to him..full of passion-aur tum meri life..tumhare liye kuch bhi..ab jab koi career hi nahi to main mumbai ja ke kya karunga..main mumbai tabhi jaunga tab tum saath hogi..
M-hearing this she cannot control on herself-tum mujhe ase blackmail nahi kar sakte..
V-looking in her eyes..lerning close to her face-matab meri parvah karti ho..
M-single tears slip from her eyes-plz virat..mere liye apni career waste mat karo..mere ane se tumhari life,career aur family sab barbad ho jaiyega is liye plz..plz..mujhe weak mat karo..chale jao yaha se..kisi ki adat hone ke baad jab woh saath chhod deta hai to bahot hurt hota hai..
Hearing this he felt something new nd her hiden pain..he has already doubt that she has some other reason to reject his love bt she never confess that..
V-main saase lena chhod sakta hu lekin tumhe nahi..kuch barbaad nahi hoga agar tum saath ho..he try to make her comfort to tell him her hiden pain..
M-hearing his madness she come in reality..puss him back nd free her self..look away..which make him angry nd disspont both..
V-tum kuch chhupa rahi ho right?...wahi jo ek saal pahele tumhe mujhse dur le gaya tha aur ab bhi tumhe rok raha hai..
She crussing herself for blur our her hiden feeling try to ignore his gaze nd question..
V-her igmorence nd silance make him more angry-main kuch puch raha hu..he said loudly with anger
bt she kept silence nd tears slips from her eyes more..nd how can he tolrate all this..he wann be with her nd also want to know real reason behind all this..
He move his fingers in his hair nd try to control on his anger..he walk little here nd there nd then come in front of her..
V-okay..main yaha se chala jaunga..
Hearing this she imigeatly look at him with teary eyes..
V-lekin..come close to her which make her more confuse..
V-tumhe mere saath ek night spend karni hogi..he gve her choise without any ecxpression..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res😊
unres ...
finally got the double updates than alott khushi after soo many probs too you update you are sooo awesome...🤗
and the updates were just soo awesome i mean like yu are just soo amazing yu give updates daily yet soo interesting such a talent yu are ya 👍🏼
and virat ko finally pata chal hi gaya ke she is hiding sumthing from him and for sure he willl find it out eeksss soo excited 😃and the angry virat is back wowww but just for mannu he is trying to control soo hard thats how much he loves her 😃and his condition omg thats soo shocking ..lets see wat manvi does,,,,,,excited for the next upodate ...😃
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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whenever u get time u update we will wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow angry virat !!!

humm we will wait di...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey update next part tooo...plzzz asap...plzzz...and this part is nice...again angry virat...y dnt she accpt it that he cnt live wdout her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plzzz update soon ok khushi...tc.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys i type two times nd try to post bt every time my net connection get lost...:(:(...
Sorry second part not posted bcz of my net problem... Now i hve to write 3rd time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...poor manu...but happy my sanki virat is back...cont soon

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