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Posted: 12 years ago

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Eksss really...i m waiting


yeah...
I m starting to write soon...
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MAanvi got shock as he suddenly ask this..he was asking abt her fear which stopping her to accepting him..bt now what happen him?..why?..one night spend with him..means..means..he..he want to..
Her body shivering badly as this thought starts running inside her..she gulping as he comeing close to her...
V-smirked as he saw that effect on her..he know very well that she never do this..she cannot put herself on be half of any other circumptions..she easily agree to come with him or she tell him everything which he want to know..
V-with passionate eyes nd smirk..come close to her nd pull her close by her waist which make her scare more-kyu?..kya hua?..karogi naa?
Her eyes gotten wide as she hear this..this sentance conform that what she hear before this..that was truth..he really asking her for that..
M-gasper-virat...she whisper in surpriesly..
V-smirked nd come close to her lips..-dar kyu rahi ho?..sirf ek night to hai..phir tum jo kahogi main kar dunga..yaha se..tumse dur jane ko kahogi chala jaunga..lekin bas tumhe meri ek baat maanni hai..ek night..main jaisa kahunga woh karogi..
M-gulped..
V-looking in her fearfull eyes with passionate gaze-mujhe nahi rokogi..ek night ke liye tum meri ho jaogi..he said in huskey voice..
Hearing this she imigeatly looked down nd gulped..
He can felt her shiver nd fear..he know that she has feeling for him bt she never accept lossing herself like this..she never lose her selfrespect..
He smirk again nd leave her..he step back..
V-in stright voice her ordered her-jitni jaldi ho sake apna saman pack karo..hum mumbai ke liye nikal rahe hai..
Hearing this maanvi imigeatly looked at him..surpriesly..
V-smile-kya?..tumhari khamoshi hi tumhara jawab hai..mujhe wait karna pasand nahi tum janti ho..so answer ka wait naa karte hua i guess tum mumbai ane ke liye ready ho..
M-still looking at him with surpries look..
V-hum aaj raat hi mumbai ke liye niklenge..kal mera ek concert hona hai..mumbai me..media aur meri family sab ko unka jawab wahi mil jayega..so dont worry..
As maanvi hear this she look down nd her mind starts thinking alll that stuff which fighted inside her..her mind nd her heart's fight..
V-main sameer ko ready karta hu aur tum sirf utni hi chize lelo jitni tumhe jarurat hai..baki vaha tumhe sab mil jayega..hum ek ghante me yaha se nikal rahe hai..so jo bhi karna hai jaldi karlo..nisha aur rahul se main baat karlunga..
He said with normal tone..nd his happiness can clearly visiable that now he can took her with him nd may this make her tell him everything..then he can short out everything..which make her free from all this nd make her think abt him..his love..
He turn from there nd walk towards door..
V-walking towards door-main hall me wait kar raha hu..do fast..
He said nd put his hand lock..
He just open door nd abt to put his first leg out of room bt stop as he hear her..
M-looking down..her hands holding her dress tightly in her fist-i m ready...she whishper in low voise..just that loud which he can hear..
He smile at this..he thought that she is ready to go with him mumbai..she is ready to tell him what going in her mind.that reason which make them away from last 4 years to till now..he just stoo their nd his back facing to her back..he smile like cute small kid..bt at the next moment his smile vanish with her 2nd statement...
M-close her eyes tightly nd gulped her all selfrespects nd her own dreams..her feelings nd makes her soul die before saying this-main ready hu tumhare saath ek night spend karne ke liye..
Nd at the ending of this sentance tears slip from her close eyes..
He got shock as he hear this..for moment his body freeze at the place with his heart..his mind cannot work on it..yes..he love her alot nd want to be with her..he want to love hr..to touch her..too feel her..to protect her..to pemper her..to stay with her whole life holding her in his arms..but he already know that before marriage or her permission if he do that its make her broken..she is too innocent nd pure in this things..she working in modern 21st century bt still she follow her simplesity..what she accepting now its not her type dicisions..
From last 5 years e carving to touch her..nd feel her in his arms when he found her after long 4 years he cannot help to went near her..to touch her..he cannot make distance from her..everytime he try her to be close with him..he did many crazy things to get her close with him bt..he didnt cross his limits..yes that night he loose his control bt till now he regrating for that night nd just bcz of that..from last few days he kept distance from her nd try to change himself for her comfortness..he thought this make her think on his love..his care..bt..what was that..
What she said..?
She is ready to fulfill her demand which is surly not her choice..not her likeness..then why?
Why she choose this on behalf of mumbai?
Why she didnt wann go mumbai with him?
In his life?
Why?
This all make him again angry nd made..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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HOw can virat bear all this..he is always straight nd clear with his demandas nd his behavior..what he is saying its always what is inside him..he never gave fake ecxpectations nd all..he tell her everything nd behave with her as he was..he never saw her his fake side which can easily make her come close to him..he never try to make her tell him everything forcefully..from last few days he try to catch her trust..make her trust on him that make him understand what bothering her..bt she is such stubbon..such stiff..his each nd every try get flop..his cold behavior..his calm nature everything..no matter how he control on himself..his wild side bt she never got to understand him..never leave her ''jid''..her strubon only deal with his craziness..means his ''junoon''..everytime he prove that he can do anything for her..any problem any situation..any dream..any confusion ..he can solve for her..he is ready to deal with everything..bt..she..she never get ready for him..nd his love..nd on all this..she nd her every actions makes him mad nd angry..
With all his anger raised in his spine..he angrily tighted his fist nd jaw..he close his to control on his anger..not to brust on her..not to hurt her..bt again her another stantment make him go out of his control..
M-as she didnt get answer..she open her eyes slowly nd wipe her tears..gulped..gathered energy to say further-i m ready..ye room kafi hoga right?..jo karna ho kar sakte ho..lekin kal tumhe yaha se jana hoga..
She said wit ecxpressionless face..looking her front wall..she stood near bed..
Hearing this he imigeatly open his eyes with jerk nd turned towards her nd close door with loud thund..
He come behind her nd hold her arm strongly nd turn her towards him angrily..which she expected from him alreday..
V-go out of control with all this..hold her from both wrist nd puss on bed..pinned her both hands with bedshits nd go on top of her..he look at her angrily..his eyes throwing fire..he looking at her face who try to not looking scared but he can saw her fear nd unwanted this clossness on her face..her heavy breaths..she is closing her eyes tightly..as she know if she look in his eyes..she again go weak in front of him..also he can read her eyes easily..
V-tighted his teeth as he didnt felt her strugging to fr herself..why..?
V-with full of madness nd anger..of course his passion-kyu pagal bana rahi ho mujhe?..kyu?..he said with burried his face near her neck..
She gasperd as his face touch her cheek nd her ear..she control on her tears..
V-mere saath night spend kar sakti ho..matlab khud ke soul ko maar sakti ho..lekin mere saath nahi chal sakti..mujhe accept nahi kar sakti kyu?..mere career k liye meri har najaish demand puri kar sakti ho..lekin mere saath naa ane ka reason nahi bata sakti kyu?
He said with nuzzling his face in her hair to her neck..
Hearing this she cannot control on her tears..they make their way out from her eyes..she bit her lips to not make sound bt her tears slip from corner of her eyes..as he feel something wet on his face..he move little up nd again look at her..now he conforimed that surly she hiding something big..
V-come close to her face which can felt her his breath-plz tell me naa..plz jawab do..kyu?..kyu ye sab?
Hear all this she tighted her fist nd cntrol on herself..didnt want to fell weak..
M-open her eyes slowly nd found his face just inch away from her..his eyes saws many ecxpressions..anger..love..madness..passion..agreevness..fustration..etc..in low voice-main tumhare ek sawal ka jawab de chuki hu virat..she said with moving her gaze to other side-main ready hu..jo karna chaho karlo aur chale jao..saying all this she killing her own soul slowly slowly..
V-hearing this he felt more bad..his anger make him mad-remove ur dress now..he said imigeatly as his sentance ring in his ear..
M-imigeatly look at him..gulped..gve him surprse nd question look..
V-saw her same old virat looks who didnt care anything in front of his choise-tum ready ho right?..to go ahead..
He said with losing his grip on her wrist nd pull of himself up from her nd stood up in from her nd leave her lying on bed..still stoon near her legs..where her half legs hanging from bed..at her knees..
She looking at him with ecxpetting look..he surly want me to do this look..she try hard bt cannot read his ecxpression..
V-i m waiting..
This make her come out in reality..place her one hand on her chest nd hold her shirt which she wearing..here she wearing shirt nd jeans..
He starts unbottoning his shirt from wrist nd from front side..
V-continue-do fast naa..now i cannot wait..remove ur all clothes now..he said with opening his shirt's buttons as he took out his shirt from inshirt in his trousers..
She felt her heart stopping from beating..she felt lack of breath..now she can not hide her true feeelings..she gulped nd get uncomfortable..
V-dekh kya rahi ho?..do fast naa..he said angrily..i promis tum ye raat kabhi nahi bhoologi..he said with smirked..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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MAanvi hold her shirt's buttons tightly in her fists nd engaged her both legs togather as she saw him unbuttoning his shirt..
As virat saw her strugging with all this he didnot waste time nd again come close to her..
V-shayad tumhe koi problem ho rahi hai..dont worry main help kar deta hu..just second..he said nd remove his shirt..maanvi look away as she saw his bare uppoer body in front of her..she shivered as she felt him leaning close to her..
V-come near her nd pull himself up with support of his one hand..he raised his one hand towards her hands..she imigeatly look at his hand as his hand remove her hands from her shirt..tears slip from her eyes..she felt her heart nd sould going to kill by her own sturbboness..she felt her heart skipped beating nd breathing as his finger move towards her shirt button..
M-viratt..she whisper in low voice with surprise tone as he unbutton her first button..
V-his hand on her shirt bt his eyes only staring her face nd her ecxpression..his anger..passion..madness..fustration already there in his eyes nd his face bt one more thing is there..some kind of confidence for his action..as she whisper his name..he got to know that he was right..
M-virat..
V-looked at her shivering lips who just call his name nd then again look in her eyes..which r teary-shhh...dont worry...i promis naa tum is ko kabhi nahi bhulogi..nd i know ye tumhara first time hai..so dar normal hai..lekin woh bhi dhreere dheere chala jayega..nd tum bhi is night ko pura enjoy karogi..nd he lern close to her nd hide her face in her neck..as her shiet was not lose little he pull her shirt little down from her sholder nd starts nuzzing there..
She get more shock with all this..she losing his tough nd fake wall which she maded..
V-continue nuzzing her with again move his hand towards next button..he place kiss on her crook of her neck as he got next button in his hand..he bit her little as he half unbutton her that button..
But before he unbutton that button also she hold his hand imigeatly after he bit her..nd whisper his name with closing her eyes..
M-virratt..tears slip from her eyes..
As she call his name nd place her hand on him to stop him he imigeatly stop nd pull him self liitle up..look at her from just few inches distance..
M-closing eyes with tears-plz ruk jao...plz..
He smirked nd remove his hand from her shirt nd pull him self up nd sit beside her handing his leg on bed..
As he move away turn to other side nd hug herself nd cried..
M-pull her legs up on bed-main..main ye nahi karna chahti virat..
V-with wearing his shirt-i know..
M-cry more..he look at her..
V-phir kyu haa kaha?
M-in between her cry-main..main..main tumhari baat bhi to nahi maan sakti..nahi ja sakti mumbai..nd cry..
How can he bear her in this condition..he just close last three buttons of his shirt..bt without wasting more time ly behind her nd go close to her..move his hand towards her pull her close to his chest..he hug her from back..tughtly..burried his face in her neck..
V-stop it..tum janti ho main ye ansu nahi dekh sakta..
This time she didnot felt fear or uncomfortness with his action..she felt protectiveness in his arms as always..she like when he took her in her arms like this..unknowingly this make her forget all her tension nd stress..even she forget world when he come near to her..
M-plz virat..plz chale jao..mere liye apna career distroy mat karo..plz..i dont like all this plz..plz..kisi ko tumpe ungali uthane ka moka mat do plz..virat...plz..
V-okay...tum chahti ho main mumbai jau?
M-nodded in yes..
V-kal ka concert ho?
M-again nodded in yes..
V-thik hai..sab hoga..main mumbai bhi jaunga aur concert bhi hoga..tumhari kasam..
M-open her eyes..nd turn her face little which make him lose his around her..she turn nd look at him..
V-yes..main sab thik kardunga..media me..meri family me..sab..he said with wrapping his hand around her nd also wipping her tears with one hand..
She didnt know why bt she imigeatly hug him nd hide her face in his chest..u can imagine hospital bashment scene here..bt on bed..
V-place kiss in her hair nd hug her back-hum saah mumbai jayenhe..
This make her lose hug..she look at him..
M-abt say-nahi main
bt cut by virat..
V-just shut up..maine kaha hum saath jayenge..tum main aur sameer..
M-shook her head in no-nahi..ye possible nahi hai..nd pull her self out from his arms nd sit on bed..she abt go when he hold her hand also get up from bed..
V-make her look at him with one hand-impossible ko possible kaise karte hai ye virat vadhera bahot achche se janta hai..he said with full of love nd passion for her..
V-sameer ka aur apna saman pack karo..mera to already kar chuki ho..main bas 15 min me saari arrangements karke ata hu..30 mints me hum jet tak pahoch jayenge aur kuch hours me mumbai..
Nd he stood up from bed..nd walk towards door with asdjusting his shirt..he open door nd abt to bt turn..
V-mumbai problem mumbai me discuss karenge..he told her nd left the house
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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'' Never say u r happy when u r sad''
'' Never say u r fine when u r not ok''
'' Never say u fell good when u feel bad..''
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'' Never say u r alone when i m still alive...''
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HAPPY FIRENDSHIPDAY TO ALL MEMBERS FOR IF...
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sorry for late...
Hope u like this updates...
Try to next updates in other stories today...
Thank u...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eksss...r u serious khushi? 3 updts once again...O.M.G...meri bat ki itna dil pe le liya...awww thnk u so much yar...u r such a sweetheart...really... :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear and we get 2 more
its wow
try to update soon😃
waiting for next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm wrk. Hi i m new hr n reguler n silent reader of dis forum.also in touch wid all ur wrk, actully m big fan of virman,so i join dis forum.plz accpt me here
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Posted: 12 years ago
like it no i loved this update ...triple update and that too soo awesome tooo goood 👍🏼
virat knew her soo welll that he tricked her smartly in stopping that from her happening and even trying to make her speak about her problem of not going to mumbai with him...
and noww he again just ordered her to come with him and also to deal with tht prblem together.
how he can never see her in tears and then the hug loved it and then calmly consoling her 😃😃
waiting for the net update .and update pain and smile tooo 😊
happy frendships day to you tooo🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
wah...khushi maza aa gaya!!!!! 3 updates ek saath...
bt plzzz continue soon...as it is growing more interesting1!!😊

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