Arhi OS: Take off the Chains

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya

lol

Your very beautiful, lol xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Wow, that was definitely a mind blowing and outstanding one shot,

Written exceptionally well and a wonderful read.

Poor Khushi locked in a confined room, so sad.

The flash back was so painful, poor Khushi was being tortured so glad Arnav saved her.

Awww loved the last part where she recognised Arnav and she called him her saviour, a beautiful and touching moment.

Amazing writing,

Thanks for the PM xx

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

It was a great 1.
Tf pm.

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

IT WAS A HEART TOUCHING UPDATE ...

LOVED IT MAN...

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

must say u got a flair for writing...

d way u present a tale nestled in twists, turns n is awesome...

this os was one of a kind n u very well resentwd the feelings n emotions... D message was a subtle one.. n any story with arshi in it is sure to spuce up the tale...

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hey ...
That was flawless !! :)
It was sooo beautiful ... :D

Thanks for the pm ...

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awsum
u alwaz teach me sumthng new everytym

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

God poor khushi
Hope Arnav saw to it that the guy got life in prison or at least a good beating
Loved how Arnav didn't desert her after saving her
How he swore to protect her
He really is her saviour
Thanks for pm