Khwabo Ki Manzilein.. Last part on pg 57

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#361

👏nice part........waise ab tak main isse pehle ke 2 parts bhool chuki hu😆

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ruksaar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#362

awwhh!! finally kkm is updated hun!!

loved every bit of it. Rajveer & ipshita's scenes were really cute! And whats up with Shiv hun? Seems something fishy about that sameer too..

In all it was a pleasure to read after sooooo long!

hope to see the next part soon..

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Tv-Fanatic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: varallika

awwwww thx for such a sweet comment dear....i no we made u wait really long but cudnt help it as barely gt time to write.....abhi phirse we hv our exams so u will gt next part abhi 20th oct ke bad...m srry but cudnt help it will try my best to write sumthng in between...but i promise this wud be the last time we make u wait itna .....hope u bear this delay wid us...love u love ur comments

awwwww dese papers bhi na... no probs dii.. all d besties for ur papers..do well...n will b w8ing..😃😳

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varallikka

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Posted: 17 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: ruksaar_khan
awwhh!! finally kkm is updated hun!!
loved every bit of it. Rajveer & ipshita's scenes were really cute! And whats up with Shiv hun? Seems something fishy about that sameer too..

In all it was a pleasure to read after sooooo long!

hope to see the next part soon..

thx for liking the part...you will soon know whts wron with shiv...and bt sameer to kisi mare huye insan ke bare me bura nahi sochte bacche buri bat..he he he.....we'll try to udate as soon as poosible nahi to u cn kill farheen i dunt mind😆

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varallikka

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Posted: 17 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: togepe30
👏nice part........waise ab tak main isse pehle ke 2 parts bhool chuki hu😆

thx 4 liking the part...waise sach bolu to me n farhu dono puri ki puri stry bhul chuke tum ko to phir bhi baki ke 32 parts yad hai..hats off yar

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C3_IF

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Posted: 17 years ago

#366

awww next part of KKM😲
but must say up 2 the expectations again
waise i'd thot u guys hav closed the ff
keep up the gr8 gud wrk & plzz thoda jaldi post ho sake to???

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varallikka

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Posted: 17 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: chinmayi
awww next part of KKM😲
but must say up 2 the expectations again
waise i'd thot u guys hav closed the ff
keep up the gr8 gud wrk & plzz thoda jaldi post ho sake to???

yes darling the next part is up.....ammm soooo srry ke we proved ur assumption wrong and didnt close the ff...waise bhi we love surprising ppl...he he he....u no if u wud hav followed the thread(which most of our readers did) thn u wud hv known ke we never intended to leave it lik this...

we will surely try to live up to ur expectations..but cnt promise a part soon in future as we both hv our pprs nxt month..so it wud be uploaded after tht only ...

seeing ur highly understanding nature i am sure u will understand....

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rajeevlicious

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Posted: 17 years ago

#368

ab ek thanks hamari tarafse bhi to all those who commented here! Dont worry this ff will definitely be completed, and next part wil be up by....eerrmm.... may be by end of next month...

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#369

faru, varu welcome back yaar...i seriously missed kkm very damn much... i know maine tum dono ko pareshan bhii kiya ym par kii mujhe next part kab mill raha hai..hehehe.... waise woh kehthe hai na back with a bang that is the exact case of the two of you.. what a wonderful come back yaar... mazaa aagaya.. poora part , i completely loved it.... you know in this whole part i found some scenes very cute, some very sweet, aur kuch scenes par tho main pait pakad-pakad kar has rahii thi...seriously yaar this part has every element in it.. it had all the ingredients to make it a perfect mixture.. aur the part flavor was awesome.. mazaa aagaya yeh part ka flavor chak ke.. really very well written yaar.. keep up the good work going.. yeh part padne ke baad i think kii is part mein both of you have done a vast thinking and then scripted this part and given it a proper shape.... varu, faru you know this part of the fanfic was worth all the wait.. i seriously enjoyed reading the part from the bottom depths of my heart.... it was just mind-blowing.... mere pass shabd nahii hai, to tell you mujhe yeh part kitna pasand aaya.. yeh part padke mujhe aisa laga kii yeh direct dil se nikli hai.. you both have written this part direct from your heart...it was simply superb..👏 pehli baat vish ka ghussa hone se zyada yeh karan aur kunal usse chida rahe hai.. kya baat hai..main jaanthi hoon karan aur kunal aise kyun karr rahe hai woh dono aise isliye karr rahe hai kyunke woh jaanthe hai kii raj ke saamne unki nahii chalthi..sirf vish kii chalthi hai.. yeh karan aur kunal ne achchi tarkeeb nikali hai raj ko daant khilwane kii... lekin afsos karan aur kunal kii chah poori nahii ho ski, raj ne vish ko aisi khabar sunayi kii uske agge vish kuch keh hii nahii paayi. she was just happy for raj.. waise raj ne joh khabar sunayi na, woh tha bohat hii fantastic, ek dum bhadiya... usne itni aasani se apni dil kii baat ipshitha ko bata dii.. he proposed to ipshitha.. awww... how nice.. shabash raj.. i'am proud of you.. i'am so happy kii raj ne ipshitha se apne dil kii baat keh dii.. it is good that raj ne apne andar hii nahii chupa rakha tha pyaar ko.. raj ko apne pyaar par yakeen tha issi wajah se raj ne ipshitha ko propose kiya.... i love this bit.. and i'am proud of him.. aur doosri taraf ipshitha kii confusion.. well ipshitha kii confusion itself shows kii usse raj se pyaar ho gaya hai, but it is just that she is being pulled back by the thoughts of her past.. ipshitha chahthi thi kii uske aur raj kii zindagi kii shuruwaat se pehle raj uske ateet ke baare mein jaane.. well i respect this sentiment of ipshitha aur sahii bhi hai... she wants to start a relationship which is pure.. aur jahaan un dono ke beech koi raaz na chupa ho... good.... then the scene where ipshitha , raj ke kamre mein jaathi hai... aur usse baat karthi hai.. this scene seriously was the highlight of the whole part.. it touched my heart.. all the emotions were perfect to the "t'" , jis tarah ipshitha ne apni dil kii baat raj ke saamne rakh dii.. the way she talked about her painful past... uske assoo showed kii aaj bhii it hurts ipshitha jab woh sameer se judi yaadon ke baare mein sochthi hai.. in my opinion it is fair on her part to think kii shayad yeh sach jaanne ke baad raj usse chod de.... lekin joh humare hero sahab ne kaha, kya baat hai.. humare hero sahab tho poori tarah se chah gaye..his tears, his words..absolutely fabulous... the hug which ipshitha and raj share... hyeee..hyeee...balleee...ballee... dil karr raha hai kii main bhangda karoon... dono ne pyaar ka ikraar kar diya hai.... mazaa aagaya.... really awesome, amazing, excellent, marvelous, par excellence,very nice..... abhi jab vish aathi hai na wahaan..ipshitha ke jaane ke baad.. and jaise raj usse apni khushi ka izhaar kartha hai.. the dosti they both share is very sweet..aur jab wahaan ipshitha aathi hai.. jis tarah vish usse aur raj ko chidathi hai... jaise ipshitha sharma rahii hothi hai... and jab raj uski side letha hai.. kya kahoon main in scenes ke baare mein.. marr jawaa main tho... raj aur ipshitha itne khush hai saath mein, newly in love..."pehla pehla pyaar hai.. pehli pehli baar hai...." aur jab wahaan chahat aathi hai and jaise vish gives the news to her about raj and ipshitha.... that was wonderful..vish ek bhii mouka nahii chod rahii hai raj kii taang kheench ne ja.. aur mujhe bohat hasii aa rahii hai, raj ke haalat par... jis tarah vish raj ko taunt karthi hai kii woh log wahaan field trip ke liye aaye hai.. raj jis tarah embarrass hotha hai then the way he orders vish... hailaaa..shooooo sweett... shona......really yaar bohat hii zyada achcha tha yeh scene... the next day ka journey back to the Academy, jahaan bus mein raj aur ipshitha ke beech aankhon hii aankhon mein baatein ho rahii thi.. yeh dekh kar mujhe ek old hindi gaana yaad aagaya..."aankhon hii aankhon mein ishara ho gaya..baithe baithe jeene ka sahara mil gaya.. aankhon hii aankhon mein.."andthen coming to the scene where raj ipshitha ko cjidatha hai... and then they both have that pillow fight and end up falling on each other.. aur tabhi entry maarthe hai pritha , karan aur kunal... koi kyun raj aur ipshitha ko romance karne nahii detha.. jab dekho tab koi na koi tapak padtha hai.. aur jis tarah yeh theeno raj aur ipshitha ko chida rahe the na... aur raj ne joh kaha , all was brilliant.. i was seriously laughing gir-girke.... maano jaise in sab scenes mein main ek dum poori tarah se kho gayiii....😍 now coming to the serious bits of the part... pehle thi i'am confused kii aakhir shiv , ipshitha se kya kehna chahtha hai..woh bhii raj ke baare mein.. then woh joh parcel aaya usmein kya tha.... kisne bheja woh ipshitha ko.. i think all this somewhere down the line involves raj and sameer, that is what happened in the past.. i just hope kii that past does not effect raj and ipshitha bright future together..keeping my fingers crossed....😊 then the last scene.. jahaan par they get to know kii unke beech koi ek aisa insaan hai who is not true to them..and is causing trouble to their mission... this shows the seriousness of the situation... lekin the last bit woh raj aur suraj baat karthe hai... well the thought kii koi raj ke jaan ke peeche pada hai has disturbed me..obviously suraj bhii apne rishton ko emiyath de raha hai..this shows raj is very dear to him.. just like suraj even i'am worried for raj.... yaar faru,varu raj ko safe rakhna.. usse kuch hone matt dena... and this scene also showed kii raj ke liye apne farz ke agge kuch bhii zaroori nahii, khud apni jaan bhii nahi... i Salute raj's quality & his attitude....👍🏼 now coming to my guess on the next parts... for the coming up parts mera guess yeh hoga kii shayad there will be more amount of security breaches.. aur saari security aur bhii tight kar dii jayegi.. i some where doubt that shak kii sui ipshitha par jayegi.. shayad koi ipshitha ko jaan bhooch kar phasane kii koshish karega.. aur yahaan ipshitha khud ko innocent nahii saabit kar payegi.. shayad raj bhii ipshitha ka saath chod dega.. uska dil kahega to support ipshitha and believe her..lekin uska dimaak will be against it... and his duty will force him to believe kii ipshitha is the person jiski wajah se unki security breach ho rahii hai... i think aisa hoga.. i'am not very sure of it... lekin ek baat par i think i'am sure it will happen kii the doubts will point towards ipshitha... ab faru, varu tum dono mujhe batao kii kya mera yeh guess sahii hai, ya phir ghalat.. agar sahii hai tho kitne hadh thak sahi hai... yeh bhii batana....i really want to know.. 😉 varu,faru please yaar next part jaldi se post karna... i'am waiting for the next part very damn eagerly...😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#370

hey thats was supar dupar cool romantic part.............i mean i am totally surprised.........ipsita ne ha kar di.............are yeh to mithai batne ki baat huyi.............i cant wait to see some more romantic moments between major rajveer and dr. ipsita..........nice combo............lekin ab raj ko kahi aur bhej rahe hai to muje darr lagta hai ki kahi inke rishton pe koi aansh na aaye.............i love the scene between them in the room...........it was awesome...................i wish i could be part of the acedamy ro see live moments...........hey i have one suggestion if u dont mind...........can u put list of all the characters with whos is playing so it would be easy for me to understand/...........ple.......thanks for this part......loved it...................ple continue soon.............

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kashish