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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god sweetu its such an awesome story , i have just read its first chapter n i m in love with this story ,
🤗 , i m running 2 read next , very curious 2 know ki aakhir taani gayi to gayi kahan , and 😲 agar rey ko pata chala to kya hoga , n precap main vicky ka accident 😲😲😲
i love u a lot rimjhim my swetu cutu sis 4 writing this awesome story 🤗 so damn interesting yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god , what a story !!!!😳😳
i cant believe , i have just read ch-2
nd its super duper awesome
i was shocked , was reading it so heartily 😳 cant tell u those scenes were mind blowing , and
thank god rey ne sun liya ki taani hai vahan but ye kya taani is no more , that' cant be possible 😭 taani ko vapis aana he hoga apne rey ke liye , apne rey ke paas 😭 running 2 read next chapter
loved it a lot sweetu 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
ch-3
thank god taani thik hai ussse kuch nahi hua
but she lost her memory 😭 uaannn
loved d full update sweetu , ⭐️⭐️
really amazing awesome superb work
👏 i loved this story so much👏
i m reading a story with so much curiosity after such a long time😆😆😆
but i really love it sweetu n
song made d update even more emotional 😭
but still i loved it , it was emotional yet beautiful 😳😳😳
keep writing n update soon 😊😊😊

Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
JAANE PEHCHANE SE YEH AJNABI


CHAPTER # 7

(ok first of all i m really sorry for being late but kya karti taani k jane ke baad himat hi nahin hui
ok now i stop my bak bak...ok now i stop my bak bak...ok now i stop my bak bak...

NEXT DAY IN COLLAGE..
The gang go to canteen and their faces was sad
AT THE CANTEEN
Reyam and shaani notice that gang was so silent today
rey : guys . kya hua tum sab moh (face) latkake kyun khade ho
vicky : kuch nahi yaar bas bore ho rahe hain ..(sadly)
sw : bore ho rahe hain matlab ???
neha : matlab yeh k kuch bhi nahin for doing
nil : ya no reharsal , no events no comptions, no fun
simmi : ya yaar kuch karte hai na.. whats say??
sharon : not bad idea but karen kya??
rinni : arey sharon kuch na kuch toh hoga hi ..
aashi : haan party events , ya koi festival types
(every one was thinking and suddenly taani said)
taani : DIWALI.. (every one look at taani and sharon say)
sharon : ya thats great guys superb idea taani
simmi : ya taani u r too good man...
rinni : but guys hum diwali manayenge kahan???
neha : haan collage mein toh not allowed..
aashi : toh phir kisike ghar types..
gang : ya right (every one was thinking again )
gang : (gang looked at aashi ) aashii..
aashi was shocked
aashi : whatt ?? nahin nahin mere ghar mein nhi
bharat : arey kyu be yeh idea toh tera tha na..
aashi : haan but mera ghar to bohut chota types hai ..
vicky : hmm toh phir neha.. iske ghar pe
neha : nahin babu mere ghar pe nhi woh meri maa allow nhi karengi sorry neha is..
vicky : its ok kagu tumhare ghar pe nhi to kya hua mere ghar pe manayenge diwali..
gang : nooo...
nil : vicky pehle khud ka room toh saaf kar phir ghar bula...
bharat : abey mera garaj hai na
gang : ewww noo ways
rinni : amar tumhre ghar pe???
amar : ale mei to khul pan guelt hoon kiti k ghal pel..(arey mein toh khud pan guest hoon kissi k ghar per)
nil : ohhh... mere ghar bhi guest aaye hue hain..
rinni : and mom dad to delhi gaye hain mein toh simmi k ghar pe hoon
simmi : sorry gays mom dad mujhe allow nhi karenge you know shor hoga wahan toh ..
vicky : swayam tere ghar pe whats say ??
sw : nahin guys papa ghar pe hi hain and diwali k din toh ghar pe honge and tum sab toh jante hi ho unko..
gang : haan right dude ..and gang lokked at sharon with smile
gang : sharon...(sharon shocked) yeh sharon k ghar pe
sharon : guys i m sorry
nil : sorry but why sharon infact hamein tumhain thanks bolna chahiye
sharon : guys pehle meri baat sun lo plzz mere ghar abhi kaam chal raha hai
gang : (shocked) whattt?? toh abb???
and now every one looked at reyy
rey : okey i have no problam...
gang was happy and exicte
taani : haan toh chalo kitne saare kaam honge
rey : wait tum log kaam karo ge ?? i mean jo kaam hoga woh servant kar lenge
taani : diwali ki prepartion karni hai toh hum hi karenge na ??
rey : haan but servant bhi toh diwali ki prepartion kar sakte hain..
taani : agar hum prepartion karenge to koi problam hai aap ko ??
rey :haan hai kyun ki woh mera ghar hai and jo bhi hoga woh (and swayam cut him)
sw : rey plzz yaar dekh diwali hai toh inhe karne de na jo karna hai
rey : ok per tu keh raha hai sirf issi liye
taani : rehne dijiye bhai kissi ka ahsan nhi chahiye ...(angry)
rey : what tumhein lagta hai k mein tum pe ahsan kar rha hoon
sw : rey plzz yaar chill ...
taani : nahin bhai bolne dijiye na unhen
(gang was confused andwatch this all and sharon say )
sharon : abb taani... chalo hum chalte hain prepartions karni hain na come...
(taarey give angry look each other)
REY'S HOUSE
taani making the rangoli and rey watch her
RANGOLI


DIYA...



sharon : wow taani its awesome rangoli great work
neha : haan taani bohut hi achi hai
simmi : ya and ab se na tum hamein bhi banana sikhao gi ok
taani : (smile) ok sikha doongi
rinni : and mujhe bhi plzzz
taani : haan sab ko sikhaon gi but abhi sab chalo pooja k liye late ho raha hai (and they go)
aashi : sharon woh pandit ji phoolon ki thali types mang rahe hain
sharon : ok mein leker aati hoon (shron go and take the thali)
sharon : yeh lijiye pandit ji.. aur kuch chahiye???
pandit : nahin betya sab ho gaya hai bas aap sab log aajaye pooja k liye der ho rahi hai
every one doing pooja and end it
vicky : guys pooja toh ho gayi ab chalen phatake phaad ne hain

BOYS DRESS..

Vicky's dress



Nilesh's dress



Amar's dress



Bharat's dress



Swayam's dress




Rey's dress




Girls dress

Neha's dress



Aashi's dress



Simmi's dress



Rinni's dress



Sharon's dress



Taani's dress



(every one go out side and )

sharon : boys dhayan se phatake jalana kis ko lag na jaye
boys : haan haan sharon dont worry
taani: mein yeh colors store room mein rakh kar aati hoon
at the store room
taani doing her work after some time she feels some thing weird and turn to see what
she turn and shocked to see the fire speeding in the room and she shouted
taani : aag ..help ,help some body help bhaaii.. bhai ..plzz help
(but in veins because the store room on terrace)
at the out side..
sharon : yeh taani kahan reh gayi
aashi : sharon aap jao mein taani dekhti types hoon
sharon : ok thanks aashi.. (and aashi forword to terrace)
at the terrace...
aashi saw the fair coming out of store room..she was confused and shocked
and she trying to talktaani but in vein.. then she run from there ...
at the out side...
All are enjoying and bursting bombs and aashi comes there and shouting
aashi : guys help , help guys help.. (reyam see her and ask her)
reyam : kya hua aashi???
aashi : wowoh woh ta tta taani...(crying)
rey : (scared) taani...kya hua taani ko????
sw : haan aashi batao kya hua taani ko???and woh hai kahan???
aashi: woh,,woh store room mein hai and wahan pe aag ..
rey run to terrace and swayam also ..
nil : arey yeh rey aur swayam kahan ja rahi hain??
vicky : chalo chalke dekhte hain..
bharat : bhai log zaror koi panga hua hai
boys : chalo chalo (and boys also go)
girls : yeh boys kahan ja rahe hain..(chalo chalke dekhte hain)
rey reached at terrace and trying to open the door ...swayam also reached
and reyam success to open the door and rey jump to inter the room and finding taani
swayam about to go but aashi stop him and all their now
inside the store room rey find taani unconscious like dead body rey shout..
rey: taani taani and try to come close taani but fire r very spread and
finally rey come to taani and save her life not her but his life
now taarey are out side all r very tensed and praying.
rey : taani ,,taani utho
sharon : rey pehle isse room mein le chalo
he take taani his life in his room..
sw : mein doctor ko fone karta hoon ..
and doctor come and cheak her...
swayam : doctor taani kaisi hai ab??
doctor : mr. shekhawat mene aap logon ko pehle hi kaha tha k
khayal rakhiyega koi bhi aisi cheez na ho jis se unka past juda ho
aur iss accident ki wajah se aaj unki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi but now she is better..
mene injection laga diya hai unhe aaram ki zarorat hai ab woh kal subah ko hi uthegi
but next time be carefull ..iss baar kuch zyada nhi hua but next time aisa na ho khayal rakhiye ga..
sw : ji doctor hum dhyan rakhenge thanks doctor (and doctor leave)
sharon : guys relax taani thik hai abhi and i think sab bohut thak gaye hain abhi so lets go
rey : hey sharon raat bohut ho gayi hai tum sab kaise jao ge aur taani bhi yahan hai
ek kaam karo aaj raat sab yahin ruk jao kal collage ke liye sab sath mein chalenge ..
sharon : okey cool
sw : mein ek baar taani ko dekh ke aata hoon..
gang : ok good night reyy...
rey : good night..
sw : taani abhi so rahi hai i hope woh thik ho
rey : relax dude doctor ne kaha na ke woh thik hai so chill
sw : rey (and hugs him) thanks yaar agar tu nahin hota toh aaj taani
rey :(break the hug) thanks ?? tu mujhe thanks keh raha hai swayam??
swayam agar taani tumhari behen hai toh woh meri bhi kuch hai
sw : rey mera woh matlab nahin tha yaar and reyam hug each other (and swayam go)
rey come in room and sit in a chair beside taani
rey : taani tumhein kuch nahin hone dunga mein , kuch bhi nahin (rey was sleep)
and taani 's nightmare

[aik larka jis se yeh(TAANI) boht
pyar krte hai or woh usai dhoka deta hai yeh woh sab bardash nhin kr pate or
city chor kr jate hai wahin us k sath kuch bura hota woh yeh k us ki gadhi
khahe mein grjati hai or us k har taraf aag he aag hote hai woh KUCH KAH RAHE
HOTI HAi pr kuch sunai nahin deta.]

(nightmare end) and taani wake u and scared ,shout
taani : aahhha aag aag aag bachao aag
rey : (wake up) taani, taani kya hua tumhain taani
taani : woh , wohh aag woh,,
rey : relax' relax taani tum yeh lo paani pio (taani drink the water and she sleep )
rey : (in his mind) aisa kya dekha tumne taani jiss se tum itna scared ho gayi aur aag???

next morning :
taani wake up and she saw that she is alone in the room no one is here..
but soon rey come there with breakfast
rey : Good morning ...breakfast is ready
taani : mein yahan kaise?? aur baki sab kahan hai??bhai, sharon sab??
rey : actully kal raat sab mere ghar pe ruke the so tum bhi and swayam aur sab log collage gaye hain.
taani : bhai collage chale gayi mujhe bina bataye ..aur aap nahin ja rahe collage??
rey : haan jaonga but pehle tumhein breakfast toh karwa loon
taani : aap?? mujhe breakfast karwayen ge??
rey : haan...i mean mujhe koi shok nahin hai tumhain breakfast karwane ka
woh toh swayam ne kaha ke tumhain breakfast karwa ke phir collage le kar aaon
and swayam mera best friend hai... wese bhi mein apne friends ki baat kabhi talta nahin
taani : oh really?? any ways mujhe collage jana late ho raha hai..
rey : oh hello kahan?? pehle breakfast ok and haan collage tumhain mere sath hi chalna hai
taani : what?? mein,,mein khud ja sakti hoon ok so no thanks
rey : i know tum ja sakti ho but tumhare bhai ne kaha unka kehna nahin mano gi??
taani : thik hai but just bhai ne kaha hai is liye
rey : to tum aise nahin mano gi na?? chalo mein hi khilata hoon
taani : (in her mind) aap ho kya rey ?? mein aap kabhi samjh hi nahin pati hoon
kabhi akhdu ban jate hain aur kabhi itne sweet ban jate hain
kabhi kabhi .. toh kissi ki parwah hi nahin karte and kabhi itni care karte hain
God... mein aap ko ko kabhi nahin samjh paungi reyy..

END chapter 7

phheeewww finally end chapter 7 i hope u all like it
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Edited by Rabertmona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww Taarey snapping at each other is so funny lol
OMG!!! Taani trapped in that store room was awful
I love that Rey save her and he took care of Taani so Nicely
Superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update yaar continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...taarey little fights are funny...

taani in store room and aag...thank god rey is here...taani confused about rey...hope usse sab jaldi yaad aa jaye...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Taarey cute fight awesome
Rey save taani awww
Taani I Rey room and Rey care nice
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm update
Taarey are so cute wen fighting
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
rey saved taani😊
Aww he cares 4 her so much
Continue soon!!!

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