UDAAN- New OS by BlueMystique, Pg 39, 27 Nov, New! - Page 4

Amazing OS!

A very beautifully woven tale on a social cause!

That was a painful story
but beautiful and hearttouching <3

absolutely beautiful...:-))
i really got emotional while reading
dis... really dedicated to all d womens who suffered frm these
traumas...
amazing dear...
beautifully written.!!!!

Wow! I'm speechless!
The increasing acid-attacks in the country have really been the subject of worry. You brought out all the aspects of this crime. Starting from the physical pain to the emotional trauma the victims go through.
It was really heart-touching. I don't wanna say anything else as i'm afraid i won't be able to express my thoughts on this os with appropriate words.
Thank you for coming up with this theme! :)

Kripa, I had tears in my eyes, hopelessness and then courage and hope, all in one OS!? Brava for not only bringing such a topic to the fore, but through such brilliant, emotive writing.

Hello. :) This is my first time reading something by you and I'm glad that I did get the chance to read this.

Actually I just recently came across another writer who has also started a similar such series and it just awes me when I see people like you taking up the courage to express something like this.

I don't live in India and haven't been there for a long time, but when I hear of all the horrific acts taking place there I can't help, but wonder why the government or the police force take more action? Acid attacks, rapes, child marriages, and the list goes on. I want to be able to proudly say this is my country, but when crimes like this are spreading like a wildfire how can I not hang my head in shame?

But then there are those like Laxmi, who don't give up, when fight and remind me that there is hope especially when her efforts price fruitful.

Coming to your OS, I salute you for your courage for approaching such an issue in such beautiful way.

Arnav and Anjali are both correct in their frame of mind. Arnav because a person's beauty should come from within and Anjali because she knows what it means to be a women, whose features and shape matter so much nowadays.

And also... Not every love is as strong as Arnav's obviously as they abandon these victims rather than supporting them.

They emotions you brought out in this OS were quite tangible. It hurt to just read something like this so I can even imagine how it feels to ensure something of this extent... The pain and endless tortute that comes with being a acid attack victim is unimaginable.

Once again I salute you for this OS... No, not OS, this is something much more than that. <3

This are just several quotes that came to mind while reading this...


"That's always seemed so ridiculous to me, that people want to be around someone because they're pretty. It's like picking your breakfeast cereals based on color instead of taste." - Paper Towns.

"The most beautiful people we have known are those who have known defeat, known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and have found their way out of the depths. These persons have an appreciation, a sensitivity, and an understanding of life that fills them with compassion, gentleness, and a deep loving concern. Beautiful people do not just happen." - Elisabeth Kubler-Ross.

"Sometimes people are beautiful.
Not in looks.
Not in what they say.
Just in what they are." - I am the Messenger.

my heart is aching reading this one...unfortunately its a fact of society...to throw acid on a person face is equal to murder u potrait a brave khushi who together with the supportof her family n arnav she decided to live for her ...

Ohh god this is beautifully written NB ji...
This type of incidents r horrible and i always wonder how some ppl cud damage women like this...in this OS khushi had all d support form everyone but its not d case for all women...
Loved d concept of this series:)