The battle between you and me..Sajan SS(Part 5 Updated) (Pg 28) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: pakpearl

I can't see my Sajan in pain//

Both r tensed...
.both r missing each other...

I wanna know y r they separated ??
Something big must have happened...
5 years...too much..

Fati.. update soon to reveal the past ..
I want them together again !!!


Awww I know Api we never can. But experiencing pain is a very integral part of this SS.
For that wait a little more. That time will tell.
I will update but not to reveal the past so soon 😆
I know u want that too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: monaya4eva

Thanks for the PM, Fatima. Lovey update. And that is because you have portrayed the pain that SaJan are in so well. It made me feel very sad to see our januables in this condition. Please update soon. 😊

My pleasure<3 😃
Awww Thanks a ton dear 😳
It means a lot and I am happy that I made u feel the pain as well :)
I will for sure.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Finally done with the comments!
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The update is here finally:P I hope that you will like it guys. Will meet you at the bottom.

Chapter 2

Part A

She was trolling in the big mansion for the seventh time. Moving up and down with a hot cup of coffee in her hands just staring at all the luxuries,comforts and things she possessed. Does she really need these things in life? Did she ever wished for all the stardom and fame that she owns today? Does she even deserve all this? A heart that has been emptied over a span of 5 long years can it again be able to love someone,feel the same affection that it used to for someone? Actually no it can't because to love a heart is needed and by the time Gunjan had no heart at least no feelings in that it seemed as if she had become a robot-that just does it work,eat food and sleep in the night. This was life for her now.

Shaking her head she came down as she knew that always these questions just become a big headache for her and nothing else so its better to leave them unanswered as somethings are better done that way. She moved towards the kitchen trying to figure out the dish to be made when her door bell rang. She left everything and hurried to open the door as she was aware that who might be there. Opening the door she smiled and let her sister, Dia in.

Good Morning Gunjan. So kaisi ho?

Bas je rahi hoon.

This plain reply made Dia a bit sad as she could feel the pain in her voice and she knew what her sister has gone through it was tough to move on but still she did somehow leaving behind everything made a mark in the world. This was so true that Gunjan is just living life like a dead body striving alone.

So next show kab hai?

After 2 days.

So excited?

Please Dia baar aik hi sawal kyun poochti ho?
Matlab aren't u happy kya?

Happy kyun?

Kyun k tumhein itne bare offers milte hain,log tumhein itna pasand karte hain.

Kya happiness sirf fame ka hi naam hai? Ab in cheezon se mujhe koi khushi nahi milti. They have just become a part of my life you know routine ban gaye hain mere liye.

Zara sib hi nahi.

Nahi kyun k khushi ka asal matlab kya hota hai wo maine last time kab jana tha yaad nahi so nahi hoti khushi.

I feel sad for you.

Sad? Hey don't be.

Kyun? Tum meri behen ho and I feel bad tumhein is tarah dekh kar.

Is tarah matlab?

Matlab yum akele tanha aur…

Yeh tou zindagi ka hissa hai ab and you know what maine ab is tanhai se pyaar karna seekh lia hai. I am very happy with my life Dia. Believe me. Yeh akelapan hi mera saathi hai jab bhi apni us lights,crowd,noise,camera,glamour wali duniya se tang a jati hoon na tou yehi tanhai mujhe company deti hai. Sakoon milta hai akele rehne se.

Yeh galat hai Gunjan yun apni life ko kharab mat karo meri jaan. Tumhein bhi kisi k saath ki zaroorat hai. Akelapan apko sirf tanha hone ka ehsas deta hai yeh batata hai k aap andar se aik dum akele reh gaye ho. Apko kisi ka saath chahaiye.

I said na I am happy tumhein aur kya proof chahiye?

No you are not happy. Abhi tou tumne kaha na

Uff yaar aik tou tumhein na kuch batana hi nahi chahaiye. Mera matlab tha k apni life se khush nahi hoon par is tanhai se mujhe ishq hai baby ishq.

Impossible ho tum!!

Jo bhi hai chal go and sit in the pool side main breakfast lati hoon.

TUM!! (she nearly shouted)

Haan main tou?

Nahi I mean tum aur khana?

Dia main abhi bhi khana bana sakti hoon.

Janti hoon par itne servants k hote huwe.
Haan kyun k Sunday ko mere servants chuti par hote hain. Yehi tou din hota hai when I can do my work by myself.

Wow. Matlab abhi bhi wo purani Gunjan…

Nahi Dia us purani Gunjan ko wapis lane ka sochna bhi mat because you will fail miserably at it.

Saying this she moved to the basin after giving Dia a smile to which she responded with a faint smile. Dia was lost in her thoughts when Gunjan came there and placed the breakfast on the table.

So kahan lost ho?

Huh? Are nahi tou I was just asey hi choda na…

Missing your dear hubby kya?

Gunjan (blushing a little)

Call karo na.

Umm nahi yaar he must be busy baad mein karungi.

Ok as u wish ab let's eat warna yeh thanda hogaya tou you will complain.

They ate breakfast after which Dia took leave as she had to go to the doctor. After Dia left Gunjan washed the dishes and went to her room, did a little bit of cleaning and settled on the couch in her bed to watch tv. She was randomly switching channels when she saw the recording of her concert last night. Standing on the stage with a mike making the crowd go crazy with her soft yet confident and powerful voice. Powerful to make every emotion of the song to be felt. She looked at that Gunjan who was singing in front of her,not afraid of lights,crowds,camera or anyone else. This was the new Gunjan…life had taken a turn indeed a drastic one.

She is able to woe people now but no one can make her do the same. Gunjan Bhushan has become the singing sensation now..the new youth icon. Going back in time she remembered….

Flashback

Hey…Ha..han…aaa

Yeh Zindagi Khole Bahein Khari

Hawa yun chali dil kahe tu bhi

Zara saath aaa…

People were clapping and swaying to the song. Cheering for the new budding talent of their college. She was happy,smiling through tears and looking at her best friend who made it possible for her to sing in front of all the huge crowd. She gave all the credit to him as ultimately won the 'best talent' award.
Falshback ends.

She used to credit others for her success every time be it the talent parade or the annual play at college. This was the old Gunjan who used to credit others all the time but never took the credit and the present one should definitely be credited for her hard work but still she's not satisfied is still unable to get that type of satisfaction that the Gunjan used to get whom Dia was talking about.

Her chain of thoughts were broken by the ring of her cell.

Gunjan. Wow wow wow. What a performance! Itni confidently you performed k basmaza agaya. Mujhe yakeen nahi hua k yeh meri hi sharmili Gunjan hai na?

Thanks a lot Di. Mujhe acha laga k tumne phone kia.

Kaise nahi karti? Tera performance tha hi itna rocking.

Acha kaisi ho?

Theek hoon tu bata? Sorry kal phone nahi kar payi
I am fine Di. Its ok na I know k tum busy rehti ho.

Naraz hai?

Nahi tou. Naraz kis se hoon Di?

Pareshaan mat ho sab theek hi hoga.

Sab theek hi hai Di.

Sach?

Haan.

Acha tu kehti hai tou maan leti hoon. Acha Gunjan ab mujhe na kaam hai. So bye. Take care.

Bye Di You too take care.

These two sisters were the life of each other but things here have changed as well. These 5 years have created a gap between them. Although they both congratulate each other on their success but still things are not the same somehow. Life is not as easy as it seems to be. Relationships do weaken up with time, life plays such games that every relation no matter how close it is to you seems to slip from hands like sand. There is no relation as close as your family and today even these do not fall in place. Fights,quarrels and what not happen for property. Here no such thing was an issue it was just life and its quick moves by the time one understands its moves life changes its course! It's sad but the truth it is!

She again thought about her performance last night and many memories came to play. But putting them all aside she went to check the newspaper and there was what she wanted….'GUNJAN BHUSHAN STRIKES IT AGAIN'!! written in bold letters on the front page of the newspaper aptly highlighted to make it noticeable. But the news was not on the top. She was not able to digest the fact that whose news got more weightage than the star Gunjan Bhushan? Her boiling temperature rose to the maximum it could and after seeing the news she quickly dialed a number.

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Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Part B

Samrat's morning was not an unusual one either. He had his coffee and breakfast which went without much disturbance. But how can u feel the disturbance when your inside is burning and is restless? You want peace and harmony but can't get it. Just imagine what a terrible situation it would be!

Samrat was going through the same pain. He was not able to think properly,not able to concentrate on anything. Nothing was in place. He opened his laptop to see his official mails when got a new one which was from none other than his best friend Benji.

'Hey Dude! Kaisa hai? Missing you so so much. Yahan tere bagair kuch bhi acha nahi lagta bas dil karta hai k bhaag kar tere pass India a jaun ta k hum phir se wohi chuddy buddies ban jayein. You know best friends forever. Khair friends tou hum ab bhi hain but that spark is missing. Tu tou sabko bhool hi gaya yahan tak k mujhe bhi. Wapis ane then I will tell you gin gin k badle lunga.(Samrat smiled through tears that were making way in his eyes. He so missed his best friend) Ab zayada drama mat kar. I am not gonna spare you this time man. Khair I miss our college days yaar. Our pranks,masti,jokes,bunking classes,flirting and you always being successful in winning the girls' hearts,our chasing sessions,plan of cheating in exams,scoring baskets,all the parties,get togethers -each and everything I miss being our selves. Ab tou kaam se hi fursat nahi milti btw Dia India ayi huwi hai so if u wanna meet het her u can. Acha is se pehle k tu aur bhi senti ho aur main bhi chalta hoon. Reply zaroor karna warna dekh phir tu'.

'Bye. Love u and take care' Missing u yaar plz mera best friend mujhe wapis dede.

Samrat closed the laptop with tears flowing freely on his cheeks like water flowing in a river. He washed his face quickly before those precious pearls could reach his heart as he did not wanted those words to affect him more than they did. He missed each one of them.

Mayank and Nupur their cute fights,their infinite love for each other,their 'never letting go'attitute and their friendship all was missed by this business tycoon. Dia and Benji looked so made for each other from the college time. He missed their arguments and embarrassed look on being caught after just a simple eyelock. Ah so adorable they were especially their friendship that the trio used to share. Best buddies for life!! How can he forget Dodo-the joker of the gang yet simple and sweet. He was dumb but still never did anything unintentionally to hurt weather his friends or sisters. A genuine friend with whom Samrat has enjoyed a lot. And then of course Suhani and Adhiraj who were just a part of the gang but left an impact for sure.

All of them had a special place in his heart and especially Gunjan'..the name came to his mind and felt as if his mind has stopped working,his hearbeats became slow and he was lost so lost in those golden memories'

Kal choti si choti yadoon ki gali

Pal mein naya aesa wadoon ka silsala

Bheer mein bhi kyun lage k

Hum hai akele yahan'.

Her voice was so soothing..so mesmerizing that he was lost in it. Her smile,her eyes thanking him for everything,their togetherness. But not anymore'it has all become a history for which he always think 'K Kash''

Before making himself loose more in the heap of old golden memories he composed himself and lit a cigarette,opened his files and tried to divert himself. Well he knew that it would be of less help but still he just can't afford to lose what he had today!

Samrat was trying hard to concentrate on work when his phone rang and the voice on the other end made him shocked..rather surprised.

Milna hai aj hi. Venue aur time message kar dungi.

She hunged the call. He could not understand what to do? But he had to go there for the meeting.

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Precap: The meeting became a source of comfort. Finally experiencing comfort after years.

Gunjan felt like breaking everything. Mixed emotions all at once eating her from within.

I hope that you liked it. Do post your comments and don't forget to hit the like button. I tried my level best to make it different and interesting. Thanks for all those who previously commented. Love u all<3
Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow Fati u got a good idea der i think this is a very nice plot line and the character sketch is interesting too liked the samrat's character and my god i cant even imagine Gunjan's character hehehehe and the prologue OMG samrat with cigarette i am imagining the pic where he is smoking
anyways good luck with the story sis hope ppl like the story BAS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update !! Wonderfull work Angel !! I loved reading gunjan's POV.. aww i miss inocent si gunjan <3 i so wanted to know what happened in all these years..why sajan are not together :( I loved how dia met gunjan n dn nupur called aww sweet sisters <3 emotions were well described..omg gunjan was angry .. was that samrat's news :P ? aww she called him yaa !!
Samrat aww felt so sad for him too.. n benji mail was too emotional :( Felt really bad for every one of them of missing old time..but life is that moving on... i loved dat they are so successful in their lives <3

OMg i just can't wait for their metting.. i so wana know the reason of their separation.. it is gunjan who is going to get him back ? ahh so many questions lol.. continue soon .. aweosme job done !! Loved n enjoyed the update !!
Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Anu-

wow Fati u got a good idea der i think this is a very nice plot line and the character sketch is interesting too liked the samrat's character and my god i cant even imagine Gunjan's character hehehehe and the prologue OMG samrat with cigarette i am imagining the pic where he is smoking

anyways good luck with the story sis hope ppl like the story BAS

Woho!! 🥳 So so happy.
I never thought that u would do this!! 😆😲
It meant a lot just can't explain 🤗 Thanks a lot for the comment.<3
Made my night 😆
I am trying to make it different. I had to write this one for sure 😳
Haha yeah this pic suits the CS but he is different still. Gunjan has changed Api.
Awwieh I wish the same<3
Anyways thanks a ton. So so happy<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSluvsSI

Amazing update !! Wonderfull work Angel !! I loved reading gunjan's POV.. aww i miss inocent si gunjan <3 i so wanted to know what happened in all these years..why sajan are not together :( I loved how dia met gunjan n dn nupur called aww sweet sisters <3 emotions were well described..omg gunjan was angry .. was that samrat's news :P ? aww she called him yaa !!

Samrat aww felt so sad for him too.. n benji mail was too emotional :( Felt really bad for every one of them of missing old time..but life is that moving on... i loved dat they are so successful in their lives <3

OMg i just can't wait for their metting.. i so wana know the reason of their separation.. it is gunjan who is going to get him back ? ahh so many questions lol.. continue soon .. aweosme job done !! Loved n enjoyed the update !!

Haha really Sweetheart? So can I say that the wait was worth it?😆😉
Gunjan has changed indeed yaar. I am sure all want to know this.
I know love their bond<3 Awww it means a lot 😳 Hehe wait to see
Maybe or maybe not 😉
I missed them equally gave the Benjish touch to it I hope I was successful 😳 Yeah life is all about that :) I am glad u loved it<3
Hahahaha just stay tuned for the next one😆😆 You will get to know sweetie. Hehe I can understand that.
I am so so happy that u loved it thank u so so much for each and every word. Its so so special <3 🤗🤗
Love u a lot<3
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Originally posted by: HSFA

Woho!! 🥳 So so happy.

I never thought that u would do this!! 😆😲
It meant a lot just can't explain 🤗 Thanks a lot for the comment.<3
Made my night 😆
I am trying to make it different. I had to write this one for sure 😳
Haha yeah this pic suits the CS but he is different still. Gunjan has changed Api.
Awwieh I wish the same<3
Anyways thanks a ton. So so happy<3

Inna bhi mat khush ho Fati its not like m reading ur SS 😳 just gave u feedback abt the CS and Plot thats it 😳 😳

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