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libbyferns

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Thank you for this fantastic update. I just loved ASR here, very controlling, he completely bulldozed Khushi in accepting his assistance on his terms. Phew! well written chapter. Awaiting for more fireworks...

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narmatha biju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

very very nice story...can't express in words...pls update soon..pls don't make us wait ...

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akankha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

awsmm updt! i like what arnav is doing...good going arnav!
as for khushi...why always she wants to take decission in their relation,not trust arnav's love. arnav also has a mind,nd that's not emotionless,why she always forget that!

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sulu_123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Beautiful update.

Very well written.

You have brought out arnav's feelings of loss, anger at khushi's assumptions and lack of trust in his love for her all those years ago so well.

He, who hasn't stopped loving her at all, though he believed he hated her all along.

Now, that he knows the truth, he WILL never let her go ever.

It is so like Arnav to threaten, blackmail her , just to ensure that she doesn't flee once again.

He knows how stubborn and fiercely proud she is. So blackmailing her is the only option available to her. Wonder how he is going to get her out of her self sacrificing and self criticising mode.

How he will make her see that SHE matters to him far more than any child he could possibly have ?

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praseetha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

congratz 4 the new thread.
loved the update.

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Loved the update. I enjoyed reading it. If I be honest, this chapter is the first one of this story that made me attached to the story and interested and look forward to the next update in all true sense.

I couldn't hide my glee when I read this line:

" Her job, her house, her brother's treatment, practically her entire life has magically gone into his control over-night."😆

And yea, should I explicitly say Arnav's last line today is and is always going to be the master stroke of the story.

Loved this persistent Arnav. Afterall Kushi is holding back for the sake of self-respect. If she feels he should move on, first of all she should move on, she is still stuck in that hospital report. She is demeaning herself in her eyes when he doesn't care for it. If Arnav saw the dreams of children, it was not he alone, Kushi too had the same dreams and if it was Arnav who was having a problem, will she let him drive her away for her sake? Why is she not getting this point?

Oh Keshav forgot his tutor? And yea felt really sad suddenly and out of the blue when Arnav was revisited by the memory of two legs!

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sudhalata1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Awesome awesome awesome

Beautifully written. Read the last two parts together and loved it

Now waiting for the next part

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

I don't know for whom I feel more bad - Arnav or Khushi!! Well guess what I don;t need to pick up any sides, they are together, now in their hearts and well would be soon for real. 😊
Arnav is upset, angry and at the same time is thinking about her well-being, trying to know as much about her as he could. Using his brains, his tactics of being a lawyer.
Khushi still thinks that he should settle with a nice girl. Can I say she is being overly sacrificial and fool. Can't she understand that a man who has not moved when she gave him enough reason to hate her eleven years ago obviously still loves her, is bound to her by some forces, pull beyond them?
He actually was being very harsh and rude with her, but I guess sometimes one has to be stubborn to get their work don and knowing Khushi well she won;t have accepted his proposal if he has not literally threatened her.
'Start with the happiness worth eleven years that you owe me' he said without missing a beat.
This brought tears to my eyes. This man loves her, loves her immensely.
It's time she acknowledges it and grab the one chance at happiness God has given her after years. She better not let it go last time in her insecurities.

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ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#639

O U T S T A N D I N G anon
Bang on Arnav!!
woah i just loved him... seriously like he said, she doesn't know what type of man has she gotten to fall in love with herself and he'll show her just that.
I loved his every retort to her absolutely amazing and the last one when he said "start with the happiness worth eleven years you owe me" Epic.
He may behave rude or may be his way with her but its all his concern and love for them so sweet of him.
This was the best update of FYS till now i loved it thanks anon come soon with next.

Edited by ashw99 - 12 years ago

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Parisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#640

This is the ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA i am fidaaa over ;)
Poor khushi whaty has she gotten herself into lolz .. serves her right for being an idiot 11 years back .

Keshav :( ...

loved the update
keep updating

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