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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

LOVED IT

UPDATE SOON :)

thanku ...

will update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

hello readers ..i knw am late but kya karu i was not well so thodi late hogi...shorry still not feeling bettr but for u people update it ..hope u people will like it ...i didn't do any proof reading so ignore typos...

CH5:THE HUG

sharon ran in de dirctn in which swayam went...finally she saw him lying on the ground with his head bleeding ..as he got hurt on the same place where it was injured before...
she tried 2 wake him up..she place his head on her lap..remvd his band aid on dat wound and washed the wound with water...& put anthr band aid..(sharon always carries frst aid box with her..u see😆)she sprkld sum watr on his face..he had woken up...
sharon:ur okay?
swayam:yup am okay ..
sharon:i don't understand how come did u get hurtd? are u kid can't u jst take care of urself?oh god don't knw how sweetu tolerates u..
swayam:i jst was..befor he culd answr back sharon has stopped him and said
sharon:now i don't need any explntn..frm now we will go togthgr okay?

swayam:huh? phele kehathiho ki tumey meri sat nahi ana peri kud kehathiho ki we will go togthr ?

sharon:god jst stop speaking this rubsh and follow me did u get it?
swayam :okay ..i wonder tu kisi bi sunthiho kya?

sharon:what?

swayam:kuch nahi ..chalo
as it had become night they decided to stay there that night..there were cold wind were blowing... sharon was shvrng..swayam gve his jackt 2 her..she took it widout cmplng as she was feelng chilld..
sudnly they heard sum roars of lion...sharon got scrd and hugd swayam as tght as she can...for the 1st tme they both felt sum thng diffrnt ..sum thng spl..kuch kuch hotha hey types...
sharon's fear was vanshd as she was feelng dat she was in de wrlds safest plce...dey sat dwn still holdng each othr..
swayam(brkng de hug):ur okay?
sharon:ya am okay..i was scarred hearing dat sound..
swayam:i knw u grls alway wil be feared abt such thngs...
sharon(not payng attn 2 his wrd ..lost in him):ya..(rembrs wat he said &wid full on attutd &angry pushing him back)wat ?wTH ..hello wat do mean ha?u don't knw any thng abt me?got it? u wer say as if u boys nevr get scrd of anythng..
swayam(balancing himself):oh kk chill..chill .it luks lyk if i don't agree u r gng to kill me..okay fine ..we boy do get scrd okay..
sharon:hmmm...
aftr sum tme sharon fell asleep on swayam's shldrs...her hairs wer fallng her face...he slw lock her hair behnd her ear...she was jst lukng like an angel...
swayam talked to him self:kitini cute..innocent ...i wish if u wuld be as innocent as ur now..it wuld be grt...but still u luk vry cute whle sleep..gud n8...
soon he too had fall into deep sleep..his hands was on her waist...her hand wer arund his neck...dey both lukng really cute ...
nxt mrng at kriyam aparmnt..kriya and raj was tnsd abt dere bhai..they doesn't knw wer he is...they have no clue abt there bro...kriya was cryng and raj was trying to console her ..her nose has already became red...she didnt sleep the whole night ..she was wry abt his bhai...she was angry ..sad..worried .
kriya to herself:hey universe ji pata nahi bhai kaha hey ..but pls where evr he may be...pls keep him safe ..please unverse ji.

raj:god knows bhai kaha hey ye bhai bi na..aur di ki tho haltha bohat bura hey i think only one person can handle her now.."REY" yes rey i will call him..

AT sharey's apartment rey is really worrid abt his sistr ...as she was miss 4r last night ..and he shld go to receive his baby sis too
rey to himslef: oh god shar..wer r u dear?am really worry?u didn't take phn aslo ...pls come home soon me &mumy r worid abt u ...dear..oh god i hope ki meri behan kahi bi ho tok ho...dats it..and muje choti ko leney airport bhi janahey...

jst thn raj calls to rey and rey pick it...
raj:hmm rey

rey:yup

raj:raj here..

rey:hie raj when did u come?

raj:hie rey ..yestrdy ..can u pls come to our flat?

rey:kyu?kya huva?

raj:wo rey di rat si rorahi hey and she didn't even slept last night ...so i thnk only u can handle her pls come na..

rey:what ?kriya rat bar nahi soyi hey? am come me abi arahu..

raj:okay thanks rey..

rey:but can u do me a favour?

raj:yup tell me..i will

rey:kya tu airport ja sak they ho to recve my sisy?

raj:okay ..fine..

rey :okay then i am coming

raj left to airport and rey went to kriyam's flat...kriya opns de door &he comes insde..
rey: are you okay ?kya huva why are you cryng so much?
kriya jst hug rey as tght as much she can...and was still sobbing badly..rey hugd her back...
rey(brkng de hug):kriyu wat happnd..?
kriya:no rey nthng is okay ...bro didn't come 2 home snce last n8..
rey:ur bro too?(cnfusd)😕
kriya:wat do u mean by u bro too? who else went missing?
rey :my sis is also miss since last night..
kriya :wat?shar is miss?and u didn't me til now...?(now angry at him)
rey:kriyu its not de tme to be angry okay?let thnk wer did dis both go..
kriya:hey rey kahi ayasa tho nahi ki wo dono sath me kogaye?
rey:may be .hosakitha hey..hey do u have any shar's classmats numbr?
kriya:yupe..meri paas simmi ki numbr hey..ek sec(gve him her numbr&he calls her...)
simmi:hello ..who dis?
rey:hello me sahron ki bhai rey hu..
simmi:ohtum bolo kuch kam hey kya?
rey:acutvly wo shar kal raat se ghar nahi ayeha..do have any abt wer is she?
simmi :no ..sry but shayad swayam ko pata hoga..becos dey both r prtns in botny prjct..
rey :oh ..kk thank 4r de info bye..
simmi :any tme..bye
both hang the phn

kriya:what happn?what did she say?
rey: wo keharahithi ki swayam aur sharon dono kisi projct me partnrs..so may be dey both r 2gthr...
kriya:ya may be..but jst hope ki wo dono tek oh..dats it..
rey:ya..jst hope..now feel sum relf as swayam is wid my sis..i thnk she will not face any probmls..
kriya:i think that shld be my dialog kyu ki shar is gng to take care of my bro...
both laugh at once and strt to share an LLHH...

PRECAP:

reetu ki entry

raj-reetu ki nok-jhok..

kriyansh ki past ki kuch secret will be revealed...

here it end i knw its not so good...i feel really weak for me wrtng this was a big deal ..hope u people undrstnd..next time pakka achi update dungi...slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...

luv,
renu

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
Love sharon n swayum moment
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres
uuuwwwaaannn ... 😭
i wanted to be the first one 🤢

anyways renu di ...
kya baat h ... 👏
amazing 😊
ab bas jaldi se mujhe kriyansh ke past ke baare me jaan na h ...
loved Sharon's change in nature in the starting of the update ...
will be waiing to see raj and reetu's nok jhoks ... 😳

thanxx for the pm
and do update soon
will be waiting
aur please jaldi se update karna
Edited by Anjori - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update loved it
Sworon are to best there hug and care for each other
And
Raj ko pata hai ki kriya ko kaise manana hai
Rey
And rey beautifully handled her amazing update
And there laugh both are so much cute
Loved that update
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc one...
too good...
thnks gor the pm...
pls update it soon...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing renu
lovely

i really wanna know more about kryaansh past
this is exciting
loving this FF
and sharon's nature change was wow
nice haan
well written

loved it
thanks for the PM
update soon
and do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum updte...👏
loved it...

do cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
the chapter was superb and fabulous ... loved it...
swayan and sharon lost their ways back and rey is worried
for his sis sharon as she did not return last night home and there
raj is try to calm down kria as she cry whole day as swayan his brother
did not return last night and raj call rey at his house as kria was cry
because swayan did not last night and kria also came to no that
sharon to came up and both are together so they are a little relief and
raj and rettu are go to be face to face and kr past to be revealed...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
dat swayam sharon part was mast
nd sharons change nature was wow
amazingly written
nd nw update de nxt part soon
wanna noe abt kriyaansh past

thnx 4 de pm
update soon

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