pyaar ya dosti?(KR&SS FF)chap 6 updatd - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesum updte...👏

loved it...

do cont soon...

thank u ..

and will defo contnue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

the chapter was superb and fabulous ... loved it...
swayan and sharon lost their ways back and rey is worried
for his sis sharon as she did not return last night home and there
raj is try to calm down kria as she cry whole day as swayan his brother
did not return last night and raj call rey at his house as kria was cry
because swayan did not last night and kria also came to no that
sharon to came up and both are together so they are a little relief and
raj and rettu are go to be face to face and kr past to be revealed...
do continue soon and pm me

thank u ,,,

will continue and pm u ...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Devil

nyc update...

love swaron's jungle scene...
kuch toh shuru hagayaa swaron ke beech...
hope jaldi hi they realise...
raj went to pick reetu, patha nahi kya hoga...
so sweet of rey for consoling kriya...
precap is intresting...
wanna know kriyaansh past...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...

thank u...

yup kuch shuru huvahey ...

f8 hoga aur kya?😆

will try to update soon..

and nothanks abt the pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
CH6:THE TRUTH
mean while in de jungle...WITH SWARON:
sharon woke up only to find her self in swayam's arms...she pushed him..by dis swayam was also woked up...both of them were feeling dam awkward..both strated to look in different directions..there was a pin drp silnce b/w them..fnlly swayam had broke de silnce..
swayam:hmmm ..sharon.. i think we have to startd..
sharon:yupe ..okay..lets move..
both strtd walkng ..aftr some distance of walk they found the road..both wer vry happy...that they found de road..sharon was sitting on the mile stone..and swayam was askng the vechl for lift..but no one was willng to gve dem lift..
swayam:oh god..ek bi lift nahi derahahey..ab humey yehi road pi rehahoga kya?
sharon:oho.. swayam tumey lift mangana bi nahi athahey..oho wait ..i'll ask for lft..u sit dwn
swayam:try it out ..no one is gng to stop...
sharon:ya..dhekthey rehana...
swayam:we will see...
sharan:no you will see...
sharon goes to de road side..now swayam is sitting on de mile stne..sharon strtd askng lft ..soon one car stopd in frnt of dem...de car glass lowrd dwn..der was a guy insde de car..
sharon:hey ..acutvlly our car had brk dwn ..pls will gve us lft ?
guy:sure..but wer r u people gng?mumbai?
sharon:ya to mumbai..will pls gve us lft till mumbai?
guy :ya sure get in..
sharon goes near swayam & drags him to de car...swaron got into de car...swayam sat inde frnt seat & sharon sat in de back seat..
sharon (gvng her hand):hie ..am sharon..sharon signhania..aur ye..swayam ...swayam shekawath..mera classmate..
guy :hi ..am Karan ...Karan Malik
sharon:oh karan ..nce name..
karan:thank u miss beautiful..
soon dey both wer in to dere talks &by dis all swayam getng super si upar wala jealous...
HERE WITH RAJAT AND REETU:
a grl was walking in airport darning her luggage with her ,here raj was searching for reetu soon unknwly they both bang into each other and reetu was about to fall when raj saved her frm falling she closed her in fear but soon opend them and find her self in raj's arm ,she stood up with a jerk and shouted
grl:"tum?"
raj:ah me nahi tho tumey receive karaney SRK ayega kya reetu ?
reetu:tumesi bat karana hi bekara hey BTw bhai kaha hey?
raj:tumarey bhai busy hey that whyhe sent me here...
both startd walk towrds the exit
reetu:ethani mrng mrng kya wrk hey uney?
raj:oh god tum ek min bhi chup nahi rehasakthi?question pe qustn puchi rahithi hey..loud speaker
reetu(pulling him back):tumney muje loud speaker bola?
raj:ab LS ko Ls nahi tho aur kya bol they hey?
reetu:what ever loser kahika
there fight was gng on and on both got into the car and strt driving back home..
HERE WITH KRIYANSH:
kriyaansh were having coffee,kriya got call from her dady to do some urgent wrk ..
kriya:hmm rey wo i ned to go but i will be back in few mins..
rey:hey its okay..u carry on.
kriya:hey rey meri aney tak yehi rahana...
rey :okay cool
kriya okay then bye..
rey :bye
kriya took some file and left from there.aftr he has gone.he was getting bored rey strtd de have a luk at kriya's room...there wer pics of his sistr &kriya allover de room...jst then he saw a diary lying on the table ..he went near it ,took it
rey :i know reading others diary is not a good habit but what to do i don't have such good habits
he opend the diary and
"KRIYA SHEKAWATH"
was written on the frst page ,he turned to the next page and got the biggest shock of his life..there was his pic paste in the scnd page..

" MY FRIST CRUSH ..MY LOVE ..MY HERO ..MY PRINCE CHARMING"
without his notice a smle came on his face aftr reading but still he couldn't belive his eyes...he then trun to next page..there was a pic of there frst meeting..whch the most strge one that any one can have...his smile became wider aftr rembr ther frst meeting

"THE MOST WEIRDEST MEETING ANYONE CAN EVERY HAVE..."

withe same smile he turned to the next page to see the pic of there both ...
"AFTER SPENDING DAYS WITH HIM I AM FALL FOR HIM MORE AND MORE.."
he was really in a grt shock now did "she say i am falling for him? BTWshe has huge collection of our pics i wonder frm where she got all this..."he thought to himself and truned to next page..
"OUR FIRST DANCE PERFORMANCE TOGETHER "
aftr seeing he got back to his FB aftr remberd there performance...so automatically a huge smile came on his face...he turned the page..
"IN MY DREAMS YOU ARE MINE BUT IN REALITY YOU ARE MY DREAM"
by now he was not able understan any thing ..but to get the clarity he turned to the next page...
n de nxt page...
all ovr de pge it ws wrtn "rey i luv u ..i luv u rey..." ..aftr readng dis he was cmpltly shckd ..he was not able to belve wat he was seeing..de gal who has rejctd him..luvs him soo much..out of xctmnt he trund to nxt page..

"rey .. i love u so much ..but i don't have de dare to tell dis to u becos.. am scrd dat if shar knw abt dis...i wil lose my BFF fvr...she will nvr talk to me...me apni best friend ki liy e apani pyaar ko chodidungi..sry rey meri pass koy optn nahi..i luv u rey ..i luv u rey..i really do..rey meri pass koh optn nahi hey ..pls forgve me ...i am helpless.."


he turned to next page and there other pic of there both
""Why were we so far apart, even when we were together? "
he agn trund de page..

"rey i was vry harsh to u today..i am really vry sorry rey but am helpless i have to do it save my friendship..ajaka dini meri life me black day hey...tumey muje propse kiya aur meney tumey rejct kiya..am sry rey am sry...and i love u rey "
then he understood everthng and he clsd dairy...
rey 2 him self:iska mathalab kriyu luvs me? aur usi muje esi liye rejct kiya kuy ki wo shar ko kona nahi chahati...chahey kuch bhi ho par me tumey nahi chodunga kriyu...mey tum si ye bolwakehi rahunga ki u luv me...tho miss.kriya shekhawat get ready to say i luv u ...
he said it with a wide smile and place the dairy at its place and jst them the calling bell rang and it was kriya...rey opened the door and just then raj and reetu to reach there reetu meet both kriyansh and went into her flat while rey bid gud bye to kriya and went to raj and pulled him aside and huged him and said..
rey:thank u so much saale..
raj:kise keliye?😕
rey:wo muje teri ghar pe bolanekeliye..
raj:me kuch samja nahi..
rey:chod tuje samj me ayega bhi nahi...
both bid gud bye and went into there respective flats...
here it ends...i knw its not dat gud as u people have xpctd..but pls adjt...
PRECAP:
sharon:hey i have to say u have a grt dressng sense..u luk grt..
karan:hey thanks..u knw u luk vry beautiful..
by now swayam was really vry jealous...
***********
rey:hey raj mera ek help karega?
raj:defo karunga bolo what do u need..
rey:wo kya hey na ki
rey explain the whole dairy matter to raj
here it ends..i hope u people will like it..thank u so much for such lovly comments .. due to spamming prob i couldn't rply to every one but i loved reading them.slnt readrs atleast hit lyk..& pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment.pls igrnce spellng and grammercl mistke...

luv,
renu

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Rey knows the truth now...grt

Loved it

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Renu di. . . . .
M realy sorry. . .woh m hell busy with my colg thngs. .jaise hi free hongi,aapki sari stories read krke coment ker dungi. . .plz do wait til then,n mujhe pm snd kerte rehna. .i prosmise,dis wil b the 1st thng i wil do wen i get free. . . .bye. .g2g .
Wil b back super soon. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rey ne kria ki diary padhi
kitna aca collection he photos ka
n finally rey kria ko apni banayga
then reetu ki bhi entry ho jayi
n raj n ritu ki fight
n about swayum bichara jal bun ke rakh ho gaya
sharon n karan ki baate sunkar
nice update
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow renuka di .. !!
mast update ;)
rey ne kria ki diary padhi ..
aur us diary me un dono ki pics .. awww ...
lekin shar se KriYansh ka kya lena dena ??
hmmm ... next part jaldi update karna ... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
renu...it is simply superb...
loved it..
finaly the truth is out..
pls update it soon and thnks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update👏
Swaron ka jarur kuch hone vala hai
Rey come to knw that Kriya still loves him lot.
Nd Rey on mission on her to say i luv u frm her for himself.
Lovely update

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