Virman FF: Unexpected Love ~ Updated Chapter 5: Page 78!! - Page 24

Hey zainab...:) superb updt yaar... I would lve to see a super jealous virat, manvis super hot attitude nd chipku getting a hard smack frm virat... but chipkus flirting is also goin good yaar... pls pls cont soon nd thnks fr th pm nd th scrap also... take care

Originally posted by: littles12

So like I'm here nd I like loved the update it was so amazin!!!!

I can't put smiley faces cause I'm like using my phone so like sorry!

Chapter 2 was like my fav

Virat is so not shareeef of course I love that bout him!

Sorry he's my favorite character he's hot plus smart plus arrogant!

Who would want more!

Manvi is stupid she should just kiss him

Lmfao!

And I was going to say something else but forgot so like um

Idk

Oh yea manvi definitely didn't kiss him by accident in chapter 3

Lol I know she wAnted to!

I'm just kidding love the story the chapter everything is perfect

Meray pe eik ehsan karo key koi ehsan na Karna!

Lol Bhai says tht all the time!

No but put space between ur dialogues

Because like a million times I skipped ten lines d read the wrong ones nd it didn't even make sense!

Chal Phir update soon! Lmao I died ur putting up ur story in every fan club on fb

I was like she could lie become a promoter instead of a doctor!

Lmao jk!

Wow my comment was like so

bad

U know u loved it though! Oky bye!

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Hey zainab...:) superb updt yaar... I would lve to see a super jealous virat, manvis super hot attitude nd chipku getting a hard smack frm virat... but chipkus flirting is also goin good yaar... pls pls cont soon nd thnks fr th pm nd th scrap also... take care

Originally posted by: tina25198

hey girl

when r u updating? plz give us a jealously virat nobody has shown possessive virat much...

Originally posted by: neetnia

ek baath bathavo ye chipku kya hai yaar.. dimag k ganti bajay aap logone.. soch soch k pagl hogay main.. batha...

Originally posted by: Aashalovevirman

Hi.. Zanu.. Its me again with sm stupid suggetion plz clear my cnfuzn abt the chapter as i asked sm que befor in my privious cmments.. N 2ndly i want u to update the pic of maya n rohan so that we cn imagin them too.. As i cnt able to figuer out how rohan look.. So plz whenevr u get time plz show us who is rohan.. Hume b to pta chle ye chipku rohan aakhir dikhta kesa hai..? Plz tell us, till then take care n update soon.. M waiting n u know i hate to wait.. Bye for now.

Originally posted by: niki795

I want virat jealous track...
and for kiss he should be happy and angry also

Originally posted by: beauty14

finally u decided to comment!!😆

someone sure is very biased to virat!😉

yeah and i will put space between the dialougues, some other people told me, i will do it, when i update the next time!😊

shutup, ugly! i am not any promoter! 😃

Originally posted by: littles12

Of course I would side virat or kya tumhe Karoo

Idiot lmfao virat all day!😳

Yes u r! Chal I give one cent per day to do mine too!🤣