Virman FF: Unexpected Love ~ Updated Chapter 5: Page 78!!

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Syed695
OMG Superb..!!! Loved Maanvi's POV😆 she is complete hilarious...Virat doesn't really like her but hez possessive...he would annoy but wouldn't want any 1 else around her.. And she did kiss Virat in front of the CHIPKU frnd from the past...but loved it Zainab...Eager for next...!!!! Waiting for Virat's POV😃!!!!

thanks for commenting fauzia! 😊

ur literally always bang on with ur comments!👍🏼

i fulfilled my side of the promise of updating, and i updated twice already, and u still haven't updated ur story! 😒

its already past eid, and still no update!😡

i am going to span ur thread if you don't update soon!😆

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Thanks guys for all the wonderful comments I am getting from all of you! The support and your love helps me write faster when i feel lazy and plus it really means alot when you guys write such wonderful things! Will be updating by the end of the week! 😊

So, while you are waiting, I want to leave a question for you guys! 😛

For the next update, I would like to hear how all of you guys would like Virat to react like!?! Do you guys think there is more to Chipku's flirting?😉 How would you like him to react to Manvi's small little kiss and Rohan-Manvi's proximity?

Would love to hear your suggestions! 😃

Luv ya all,

Zainab🤗

Edited by beauty14 - 12 years ago

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Polo_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Wow,Manvi kissed Viraat accidently. So challenge acomplished. Great! Who is dis chipku? Has he crush on Manvi? Be alart Viraat! Plz update next.

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Aastha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Do you guys think there is more to Chipku's flirting?😉 How would you like him to react to Manvi's small little kiss and Rohan-Manvi's proximity?

Yes..the chipku flirting..making Virat uncomfortable.
To the kiss..he shud nt get angry.. 😛

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: ..BiLlY..
Do you guys think there is more to Chipku's flirting?😉 How would you like him to react to Manvi's small little kiss and Rohan-Manvi's proximity?

Yes..the chipku flirting..making Virat uncomfortable.
To the kiss..he shud nt get angry.. 😛

so you want him to want more from her!😉

and there is more chipku-manvi to come! don't worry about that!😆

Edited by beauty14 - 12 years ago

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Aasha singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Hi.. Zanu.. Tum ye puch rahi ho ya bta rhi ho, well agr puch rahi ho to, i'll i jst lv jealious virat.. Its a treat to watch.. So jitni chipku flrting show krni hai kro bt jst in frnt of virat bt plz akele me us rohan ko manvi se dur rakhna.. N abt kiss, well he must b happy frm inside bt he cn never show that as that chipku was holding manvi so he must b angry on rohan bt woh manvi pe apna gussa utar satka h.. N by the way the hot cofee was on his shirt to woh paka gussa hoga manvi pe.. N i want a fight..

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Aashalovevirman
Hi.. Zanu.. Tum ye puch rahi ho ya bta rhi ho, well agr puch rahi ho to, i'll i jst lv jealious virat.. Its a treat to watch.. So jitni chipku flrting show krni hai kro bt jst in frnt of virat bt plz akele me us rohan ko manvi se dur rakhna.. N abt kiss, well he must b happy frm inside bt he cn never show that as that chipku was holding manvi so he must b angry on rohan bt woh manvi pe apna gussa utar satka h.. N by the way the hot cofee was on his shirt to woh paka gussa hoga manvi pe.. N i want a fight..

hmmm... interesting! 😊

u sure did pick up on the details of the chapter!!😆

well, their will be more flirting from chipku!😃

and well, u tell me if virat will be happy or not from the kiss! i think it's kind of obvious!😉

ur just going to have to wait and see what happens next!😛

so keep on reading and find out!

btw i am asking u guys about what you want to see happen next, not telling you guys, then will take your ideas and try to incorporate them in the chapter!

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mridula

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

i want virat get happy as well as angry at same time as manvi accidently fullfill her challenge.also want virat give her other kiss challenge.rohan may be like manvi so i want virat get jealous to see them together in future.

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

he should get jelous by seeing
her with chipku

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@neetnia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

virat shd fall first 4 manvi.. bcos vo thoda jyada arrogant hai compared to manvi..😆 so he shd be in a drm world after the kiss.. 😃 vese bi ek khoobsoorat ladki ne kiss ki hai yaar.. kissiko bura lagega kya?? 😉