*Awarded* FF: A New Khushi #7 Ch 66-72 *COMPLETED*

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dershika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

I hope khushi forgive arnie soon
Continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

gud one currently many confusions are there in the lives waiting for the nxt part

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KrishVeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

It was another wonderful update by you. Nice👏

Along with being wonderful it was an emotional one as well

I knew Arnav's lie won't help. I really think he would have done better than this. He was in a vulnerable state. Although Khushi shows that she is okay, she is obviously not. And the last words she said about not giving birth to an unwanted kid broke my heart. Please make everything alright between them. I want to see them happy together😊

Thanks again for a wonderful update😳

Thanks for the pm as well😃

Update the next chapter soon😉

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shubhi7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

That was quite emotional..I hope they overcome from these problems

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

I'm just finishing up the chapter today and will post either tonight (USA EST) or tomorrow morning with Mr. and Mrs. Naughty Raizada..

Thanks 😊

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

I loved that he wants to be the one to feed and fuss over her but his guilt keeps him away, indicating that he does realise he was wrong in the way he handled things. I loved how he feels knowing that he always manages to hurt her when she is the last person he wants to hurt...and he remembers the Shyam fiasco, were once earlier he managed to hurt her...the feeling of helplessness then and now...both causing him anguish, remembering how she left with the intention of not returning still causes him fear...loved how he recalls her dreams of the perfect Rajkumar as her husband and resolves that he is going to the be the best husband to her...His intentions were pure but unfortunately for him and them his methods not...

I loved how she was hoping he was asleep so she could avoid talking to him just like she does and runs off to the bathroom the moment Di and Payal leave...

I love how he reaches out to her with memories of his past, those which made him what he is, his insecurities and need to protect his loved ones stemming from the tragedies and fear of losing a loved one.

I loved that whole album scene, her momentarily forgetting everything and enjoying looking at glimpses of his past and happier times, I loved how he says I wanted to show you my childhood and how it started off normal. I felt really sad for him...no child should have to bear what he did, and I understand how deep rooted his fears are...I am happy they share some tender moments and she even teases him, smiles and even pinches his cheek...and love the way he shares it all with her, with hope.

I love how she feels when she sees them and she understands him a bit better but to forget and forgive completely that will take time.

I loved how he hugs her with a sense of relief and hope and promises to be there for her through her pregnancy and also do his best to be a good father...just the fact that he says this shows how much her happiness and she mean to him, to put away his fears for what she wants.

I love how she realises that he has misunderstood her words and clarifies her stand, and says she needs time ...this was a big blow for her and till it is totally out of her system, and her faith and trust restored she cannot move on so easily ...but I am so glad they talk...communication being so important and crucial at a time like this.

Beautifully written Sami, I can feel their love but at the same time I feel her sense of betrayal and his sense of guilt...love the many layers of emotions...cannot wait to see what the new morning brings in to their lives!

This chapter really worked so well for me!

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chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Hmmm.. Khushi was avoiding Arnav. Arnav was trying to talk to her.

Despite what anyone might say, I have a very skewed perception of his actions. Yes, he was wrong. But his intentions weren't. So maybe I don't find the need to constantly find fault with the guy.

I mean, he also needed unconditional love after the tragedy that took place in his life, but he didn't find it. Instead he was plunged into a world full of distrust and hardships.

Everyone is talking about Khushi healing herself, but did once, Khushi ask about Arnav's wounds? he never got better after he first broke down. He is fine, but not completely fine.

So I find Khushi avoiding him or not talking to him properly or whatever, to be another setback for Arnav. He isn't a cruel person. Granted, he has hurt her knowingly and unknowingly umpteen times in the past, but he doesn't deserve the you-are-a-murderer look.

Sorry, that's just my view. I am sure most won't agree.

Well, it was a lovely update, on the whole!!

Edited by chibisuke - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

PHew!!! A new clean slate..kind of,lol

Curious now to see what happens next.

xxx

Edited by -Zara- - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

Nids

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I don't know why I've felt so overly sensitive and emotional during this whole track. Both have grown through so much, when will it end??

You have written this chapter beautifully. How does Arnav try to make it up to her, by making himself more vulnerable. Because he knows Khushi will see the significance behind it.

The two of them on the bed just going through his childhood album was beautiful, perfect and exactly what was needed.

Great job Sami!!!

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago