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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

A really great end Komi 🤗 Keep it up and do keep writing.

Glad to see you wrote part 2. 😃 The ending was really sweet :)

My Favourite scene was the end where Khushi talks about Barun and Sanaya and Arnav is like "Who is Barun and what is Rabba whatever?" 🤣 Love your dialogues.

Edited by DoNotDisturb - 12 years ago

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bs1224

@bs1224

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

LOVED IT ...

FINALLY THEY CONFESSED ...

THANKS FOR PM...

IT WAS AMAZING UPDATE ...

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mubina_m19

@mubina_m19

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

That. was amazing update just love it

Now table is turn and this time was bully and khushi was a poor soul

Love the update

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wiwy

@wiwy

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Superb! 👏Everything about the story...the idea, the humour, the dialogues, the reference to Barun n Sanaya was mind blowing! 👏

Never ever stop writing Komal!!⭐️🤗❤️

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

so he was bullying her too
but his way was so cute
and it got them confessing
hey that was bound to happen right
so funny that was for sure

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Gul_malik

@Gul_malik

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

wow cheeeni
amazing.
Ak dum jakas.

Khushi said
farak phadta hai dammit bcoz ilove u.
N
i love u sir.lolz

he wrote love letter in 2nd grade.

Barun and sanaya mentioned.

Wow raabaa ve hai rabaaa ve.

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Love the update and the lol it was funny and lovely anyways loved it and plzzz write a new writing piece soon

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indi52

@indi52

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

hi komal,

just read part one. beautiful dedication to your asthadi. 👏 she sounds like a gem.

and the story was hilarioius, so she's smitten with barun sobti and arnav singh raizada was her cass mate whose valentine rose went to the wrong girl and now he's the dm, while she's a school teacher in his district. maybe he's back only to take revenge on her for all the bother all those years ago. 😆

that was lovely... now two.

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indi52

@indi52

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

ah so he did decide to take revenge... 😃

lovely story... refreshing and fun and passionate, with an asr in love... who says dammit after i love you just like barun in ipk... good one, komal.

somewhere it became all our story with that, huh. i hope your ashu di finds her asr... and you too. will read your other stories soon... thanks so much.

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

loved it komal di
khushi was arnav's first crush and he loved her but he wanted to be sure of her feelings...his closeness affected her...and the last part where they confessed was so cute
superb os cheeni di
waiting for your more os to come
thanks for pm