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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ajoop
Me in second page 😭

oh that was cute
specially the last line
I so loved this story 😊
Khushi bullying Arnav, that is different, loved it

aww don't be sad priyanka...

glad u liked it sis<3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: bs1224
Loved it ...
It was all together a different story
And way khushi made fun of arnav's name chotte...
And the way he boss her was so funny...
And as a coincidence he was anjali's chotte...
Well done
Thanks for pm

i tried to write something different...

glad u liked it:D

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Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

n i love the title especially...😉

arnav n chameli ka tel...😲😆

behti hui naak 🤣

i would love to read khushi's reaction...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Gul_malik
oh wow.
New os.
Amazing
bahuria rani.
Loved it.
Naak har waqt behti reti ti.sir par chameli ka tell lolz.
Hey cheeni are u gng to continue it.

sasu maa apka ashirwad mil gaya aur kya chahiye😉

will write another part I guess...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Chocolate_barun
nice one
barun sobti ki eyes mein lost
oh so the note was for khushi
loved it
thanks for pm di

m happy u liked it Gaggu:D

Originally posted by: ArshiAms
cheeni cum...!!!!
bohth cute tha...loveit...🤗
arnav sing raizada...bachpan me khushi ka bholu...
superse uper tha...😃🤗
muaah<3

thank you so much Ams...

muahs<3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: EMERALD-S
Awesome.

thanks:)

Originally posted by: ..Gunjan..
Cute OS 😊 😳

thank you so much:)

Originally posted by: flutterlashes
dat ws a cute os...
loved it:-)

thanks:)

Originally posted by: shyperson
Aww cute and funny os loved it.

thank you

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: DoNotDisturb
BIG RESS!

So glad you wrote again :D

*Edited*

Hey 🤗 🤗

I loved it again. Please tell me there is a second part to it? There has to be, right? This isn't complete.
The concept is really sweet 😃 I wanted to read ahead. This can't be an OS. You have to make it longer. The story is incomplete. Do write more and post. Maybe one most part, atleast.
It was so funny when Khushi said, "Chote itne bade honge" lol. 😆👏

Keep writing. 😳

-Manjari

Thank you Manji...ur such a sweetheart...

about another part, I will write part 2 and make it TS instead of OS:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: LuvArnavKhushi
omg this is actually too good! What a perfect way to start my day! Thanks Komal! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Just too good! 🤗

So CUTE that Khushi thought Chotte was a kid and just loved how it was none other than the DM but also the victim of her bullying days!

👏 You rock gurl! 😉

Farah ur here...m glad u liked it...

hayeee m so happy my fav writer like my story:D

muahs<3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -MonikaSobti-
It was so so cutee! <3
Amazing OS! ^^
You write so beautifully! :D
Loved it! <3<3

thank you so much for reading and commenting:)

Originally posted by: please6
love it and its amazing like the last one but plzzz continue this one and khushi being a bully is a new and funny concept which is quite interesting lol and khushi taking arnav lunch damn she was mean and arnav still asking her to be her valentine was cute and now i guess arnav was getting back at her in school by making her call him sir lol anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

Thank you so much...

About Khushi being mean, she was a kid...u know why m I justifying her coz I too used to snatch people's tiffin😆

will surely write another part and update it soon:)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: bunny22
so nice kk...lovd the end part..khushi is too funny and always doin lol like u love u sis keep on writin gr8 goin😃😉

thanks HB...

you are right she keeps doing lol like me😆

Originally posted by: _RheeluvsBarun_
Omg! It was very sweet!!!!!! Keep the good work up!
I specially love this line:
By the way, Khushi, that note was for you not for your bench mate

thanks...