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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: Ashavi
i don't understand in initial updates u showed Arnav as one of the best and didn't gv much description abt Shyam but nw u give a character sketch of Shyam as all positive and good,lost and some1 who deserve sympathy while listed none of Arnav's positives...if he was so very good y wud Khushi's buaji reject him and choose Arnav over him...
and even in this update u tried 2 show Shyam all innoscent and Anita 2 b on wrong side for breaking up with him...Shyam had cheated her,played with her emotion and used her trust on him yet u tried 2 describe in a way that Shyam gets sympathy...
please clear our confusions...
anyway loved that finally Arnav's confession brought them closer than never before...
update soon...

Hahaha. It's funny when you say stuff like this.

See, I mentioned in the CS those points which you people have failed to understand till now. Everyone spoke about the wrongs in Shyam and the rights in Arnav so I just mentioned the other way round and Shyam is NOT innocent. That is NOT true 😆

But yes, at the end it was an ArShi update. I hope you get it 😛

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: arnavkhushi1106
wow u're an amazing writer😉

the way u describe the story , the characters while doing justice to their personality is too awesome

just want them to confess their feelings 😉

Thank you so so much! I am so glad you liked it. it means a lot.

Originally posted by: bookadict303
Awwwhhh they acccept eachother! :)

Thanks!

Originally posted by: horizon123
fantastic update😊

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: rimzu
amazingchapter..very wel writtn

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: lalarukh
beautifully written

Thanks!

Originally posted by: JCJS
Just loved it and finally he bursted out his feelings for her. Feeling pity for anita and shyam . So they are back and hope their feeling for each other would get more strong . Waiting for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

Thank youu! It means a lot!

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Originally posted by: HUMII10592
update chahiye

I will update as soon as im done with the update. I am going through the comments to understand what you'll want to read further! 😆😉 So whenever Im stuck that's what I do. So your comments are vital.

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY
wow beautiful update😊😊..loved it❤️..and thanks for the pm😃

Thank you!

Originally posted by: nishi22
Awesum
love it..

Thanks!

Originally posted by: shubhanjli
Wonderful update...
Now finally Khushi knows he loves her and Arnav knows that she is over Shyam. I hope they ll concentrate on themselves. And as you said tender is going to open. Khushi ll stand by Arnav as a true wife.
Humans make mistake. Yr characters ve true quality in them. This was necessary for both of them to realize the depth of their relation. Now they can freely move forward.
Thanks for the pm...
Do I need to say... Waiting for yr updates religiously. 😊

Thank you so much!

They will. Now they will.

Thank you so much for understanding my characters! 😳

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

I dont remember if I have un-resed in last update or not, so here is my comment...

absolutely amazing update. Very well written. Glad that asr finally confessed though he wasnt in his senses.

continue soon

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: anjale
hay u dnt say wat she told to shyam while dancing...will she say it 2 arnav now...

She doesn't need to. He will understand. Look, you don't say each and everything to everyone na. basically that's why!

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
So the night was a disaster...loved the way u wrote it...and Arnav-Khushi convo in the morning...loved it so much...thanks for the pm...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: dieforasr
😃 can't say more..

Thanks!

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: asthagarwal
Finally, I read all d chappy in a go n nw I'm here 2 drop my comment...

Firstly its an honour 2 comment on a FF lyk dis... 😊

Secondly, U r gem of a Writer n Person... ⭐️

Thirdly, I'm head over heels in luv wid dis FF... ❤️

Wat perfection u hv in describing emotions n turmoils of ur characters...

Arnav's confession made me DANCE...

I wish Khushi confesses her feelings soon...

Shyam d Creep, Get a lyf... 😡

I luvd d emotional outburst of Arnav, I ws waiting 4 it...

I wanna tel u tht I'm a Besharam Bhukkad n I need my dose soon... (Dose means 🤬) I knw it'll tough 4 u bt I want it... Bas... 😕

3-4 Chappys??? U gotta kidding me... Abhi to bahut kuch baaki hai... 😲

Stretch it upto 30 Chappys n Yes, I cnt wait 4 Season 2... 😃

Thank you so so much! 🤗 it means so much coming from you 😳😃

I will try and do my best in the upcoming updates and yes, I'll see what I can do about extending the chapters. I can promise that you guys won't miss anything. I will do full justice to my idea!

Originally posted by: monasha
Amazing Update

Thanks!

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: beenish248
awesome update yarr ...

Thank you!

Originally posted by: asmaju
This surely did a big change to the whole stroy..
Kind of Arnav's action is justified for me as Shyam has crossed his limits under many situations..
With Khushi she is no where at fault..The sudden outburst of Love that Arnav had shall show a great way to their future,..

Thank you so much! I am glad you understood the characters I am trying to portray!

Originally posted by: parjay
just went through the whole FF ... such a nice story.. u write it so beautifully... so close to reality.. i luved the fact you portrayed abt human psyche..waiting to read more...

Thank you so much! 🤗

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: Punya13
I think arnav is over reacted that night...simply scene created..
I am glad that he confessd his feeling for khushi..this is only best thing he did that night..
Awesome up date dear...
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you! And yes, he did over react!

Originally posted by: deepika45
Wow!! Its awesome update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Punya13
Awesome up date..

Thanks!

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BlueEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: shamlin
ooh.somuch happnd in one night...:))...
im so happy...atleast arnav confess his love...:))
awsome update..:)))

Thank youuu!

Originally posted by: sana11
one decision of dance..one decision of shyam not letting go of khushi...the impulsive reaction of arnav...
as bad as it is...
its good it came out...
keeping it within..only messed relationships...
shyam and khuhsi are more sorted out now...
anita s dam hurt...
khuhsi and arnav though they hurt each other...the find solace in each other...
n showed their place in their relationship...
marvelous update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
update the next soon dear😃

Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed the update. Next update coming up soon!