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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Awesome and nice update!!

Looking forward for the next update!!!

Some one is jealous here dont u see?

Carry on soon!!

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ara_000

@ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

nice chappy 👍🏼
feels good dat khushi is adjusting herslf wit arnav nd now she is thnking abt having a baby boy just like arnav...!
Awww she is falling in love ❤️
sanjana is truely a good frnd of khushi nd i liked her concern for her..!
But shyam 😡
arghhh he is a psyco 😡
so he offered khushi to dance nd here arnav seeing them dancing is getting all jelous 😉
lovely chappy 👍🏼
waiting for d nxt chappy now 😳

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@MeWantBanana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

*Rubs Some hands together for amazing next hopefully LONG amazing update*

*Runs to a corner and does Gangnam Style For the return of ASR/LAAD GOVERNOR/RAKSHAS/SEXY BEAST*

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rimu

@rimzu

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

yaar khushi jus cm bak to table soon..otherwise i doubt wat wil drunk arnav do...

update soon

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@nidhu18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Amazing update!
Talks abt next family member were to cute.
Arnav's realizing Khushi's scarifices for him makes him an ideal husband.
Poor Khushi was made to dance with Shyam I hope it is not a start of some kind of misunderstanding.
Drunk Arnav looking forward to next update but patiently .
Thx for the PM

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: anjs

i used to love ur ff Manjari...but why this twist...

i mean khushi isnt this stupid to go and dance with a guy, who isnt ready to believe that she has moved on...

and her friends, what can one say bt them, if friends dont understand to tow their line, then they are not friends...seriously...with friends like these, i wud prefer enemies...why did they invite shyam...what point did they want to prove...

and why is sanjana, poking her nose into a matter which is clearly between a husband-wife...thats a strict no-no...

i was quite disappointed by this update...and hope u take my criticism positively...

thanks and sorry for being a bit harsh

You used to love my FF? 😆 So now you don't? 😛 Okay, firstly, I think this is your first comment because I am pretty sue you aren't a regular commenter or else I would have known.

Look, I don't want to give out anything about the twist as that will be revealed in my next update.

But I do want to tell you something about Arnav's character. He is introvert, he doesn't share stuff out loud. He has lately been really pressurized with work and business and on top of that he finds Shyam lingering around khushi and he doesn't know how to get them out of this mess. So he is frustrated.

This is a way through which he will vent all his frustrations.

And her friends are also Shyam's friends. You are forgetting that. Rohan and Shyam were really good friends. Khushi didn't tell her friends about Shyam being obsessed or anything, on the other hand she told them that Shyam had moved on too. Her friends were here for two days so they thought they could have it together, anyway, even that is cleared in the next update.

Sanjana is just being protective, she is concerned about Khushi. That's all.

and I am glad you criticised the update and in this way probably both of us can learn things. I will clarify it in a clearer way in the next update.

Thank you so much for commenting.😃

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
All through the FF, one thing stands out - Khushi is singularly self centred and self focussed.

I am surprised that after all that has happened, she was still dancing with Shyam. Yes I understand that she didn't want to make a scene but there are always ways of getting out of a dance - we all have been there and managed! Lus here all her friends knew their past, so who would be surprised if she refused?

She is essentially trying hard not be the bad girl in Shyam's books. If she has been in a place where she almost lost Arnav due to her own behaviour, and Arnav has given her another chance, she should be doing all it takes to safeguard that.. she is taking Arnav for granted cos Arnav has forgotten everything and shown a endearing desire to have her love him...

Instead she is happy straddling two boats - not wanting to be the reason for Shyam's unhappiness and assuaging her own guilt and yet wanting a life with Arnav. You cant have everything - she needs to make a choice!

I hope Arnav doesn't just get drunk and behave stupidly begging her for her love - would be v disappointed. High time Khushi was taught that you cant be everything to everyone and when you make a commitment, that must be all important. I hope Arnav gives her an earful and keeps his distance from her for a while and makes her realise her mistake.

My first question to you would be are you a regular reader of this fanfiction? I am sorry but I keep track of the people commenting regularly. I haven't seen you around much.

Anyway, getting back to your confusion.

At every point in this FF I have only heard that Khushi is self centred. I have heard this before from many people and I thought as the story proceeds their view points would change and many did.

Khushi's character is complicated. I do not claim that she is perfect. She is Impulsive. She is fickle minded but she is NOT self centred. Khushi cares too much for other people.

* Marrying Arnav for her buaji. That was not self centred. If she was selfish she could have run away with Shyam.

*When Shyam returns she gives him an explanation. If she was selfish she would have explained everything to shyam so that he could move on. Yes, she was hurt when she saw Shyam with someone else because thats when she realised that while she was crying buckets over shyam he was moving on. she realises that she has to move on too. she tells him that I cannot be with you. If she was selfish what could stop her from having an affair.

*Khushi hated herself for hurting arnav. She was upset because it was her fault that Arnav and Shyam's lives were ruined. SHE WAS GUILTY.

GUILTY and SELFISHNESS are not the same. Khushi cares too much about everything.

One line I agree with. Khushi doesn't want to get into Shyam's bad books. She wants to see him happy too like she is. She wants him to have a life. She may even want to be friends with him

She danced with shyam to tell him somethings. You will see.

I understand that you are right to have your opinion but don't be too quick to judge people. Khushi's character is very clean. She is guilty and she is trying here. She is trying to improve and at every point Shyam has let her down thats why she started to change her mind about him. Arnav on the other hand was understanding and considerate.

I hope you are getting a clearer picture. Please try and understand.

Thank you so much for commenting and please don't take anything I said to heart. It was just my point of view.