Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Suprb update !!!!!! Luv virat's annoying behaviour +++ manvi's outburst on ruchi about virat !!!!!! So, maya mam is back ... Hate her !!!!!! Seeing her wd virat manvi say yes to viren !!!!! Want to see jealous virat but also sad for viren !!!!! Keep rocking thanks alot for pm...

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Superb...babes...

Bt i want this evil Virat to be turned into sweet one very soon!!!

Do u get that????❓

Soon means soon...

warna tu to gayi...!!!😡😡😡

Bt still loving to read these kind of updates also!!😊😊😊

update soon1!!!!

love ya!!

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Lara Lara😳 thank u so much for updating this one😛 i was waiting for your this update😳 coming to the update it was superb update as always and very well written dear.👏👏i enjoyed the every bit of it. aww it was really like a tennis match for ruchi. poor soul stuck between these two without any crime.and i was laughing 🤣 then virat's cabin scene was so beautiful. virat intentionally doing all this to irritate manvi and he was enjoying it too. love that lne miss or mrs. manvi😳. then their closeness they still have the effect of each other. and now that bloody bitch naya came again with her evil plan😡 now it will get more intresting haina. plz update soon and thanx for the pm take care

regards shivali😳

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@neetnia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#884

aahahahahahaha.. poor virat.. uska tho band bajne wala hai.. viraaat babyyy 🤣
thank u sooo much... but galath jagah pe rokha tu ne.. 😒

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Awesome part Lara
u write very well...great update
u know what I like viren so much and that much I hate virat in this story
but amzing part...waiting for next
thanx 4 the Pm////do cont soon 😃

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942983

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#886

awesome update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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shaalivirman

@shaalivirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

ooppps...i llate...😕

but the update was FAB...❤️👏

ahaan...VirMan...not able to resist thselves...😳

viren is tooo good but i dont want manvi to accept hiim...😛

and i want virat to feel fr his mistakes sooonnn...😛

continu sooon thnx fr the pm...😃

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Awesome update Lara..!! 👍🏼 Fatafati 😃.. Virman 'tennis match' was superb.. Both were swearing at each other! 😆 Really enjoyed reading it.. Poor Ruchi! 😛 Her condition was hilarious! 😆 Loved the way Manvi fought back and Virat didn't because she was not well.. Somewhere Manvi's Virat still exists behind this egoistic, cold-hearted rudy.. Though I hate Virat yet loved that little intimate Virman moments! 😳 Finally Viren confessed his feelings.. I think Manvi can never get over Virat so Viren will be heart broken :(.. Maya kamini is back! 😡😡 Waiting for Maya-Manvi face off.. Hope Virat won't get too close to that witch.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊