Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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iluviratmanvi

@iluviratmanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

jakaaas update dear

ur all story are great

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

sorry for late comment
awesome update
interesting virat worried for manvi but always end misunderstanding her hope soon he get know the truth
continue soon
thanks for pm

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tina25198

@tina25198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

it was awesome soniye...😉

keep d update flowing 😃

update ASAP😛

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naina

@naina927

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#864

res

unres

sab hat jao yahan se... ye update MERE LIYE HAI...😉 mere liye... i am soo happy... 😊

this is for you lara ji

and coming to the update... TENNIS MATCH...

throughout the update i was singing

DHAL GAYA DIN... HO GAYI SHAAM... JAANE JO... JAANA HAI...😆 😆 😆

kya match tha by god... virman were hell bent on scoring a point against each other... and poor ruchi... bechari ki haalat koi nhi samajh sakta 😆 😆

and one thing i have to say before i forget... VIRAT KI KHISAK GAYI HAI...🤢 he has lost it yaar... bechare abhi se pagal sa ho gya... kabhi manvi ki care karta hai, kabhi gussa karta hai, kabhi jealous hota hai, kabhi chillata hai, kabhi chup ho jaata hai, kabhi hurt hota hai, kabhi hurt karta hai, aur ab toh hadd hi ho gayi... manvi ko kiss kia... hawww...

VIRAT SINGH VADERA... listen to me dude - "manvi is not the one for you... she is cheap and characterless AS U BELIEVE and u need to hurt her... divorce de de yaar usko... chod na... teri item hai na 😉 and manvi ka piccha chod do virat ji so that manvi ji viren ji ki ho sake... okkk...??? 😳 "

PS : manvir were too cute... i love viren like anything... he is truly a gem... and a kissey to him bcos he took a first step towards manvi...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

owww great..

i dont want think about viren, he will be heartbroken😔...
and now this maya is back🤢...

great part thanks for pm

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lujeyn9

@lujeyn9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it
Thanx 4 pm
Continue sooon😊

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#867

Havnt commented for ages
been busy at wrk but i never miss reading ur updates
awesome once again
ufff whos cum nw in between them
we might get to see jealous manvi ooohhh
continue soon 😉

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 12 years ago

#868

awesome update
loved it
loved the way manvi shouted on ruchi about virat
Maya is back
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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SS4MaNan

@SS4MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#869

fabb update! like sa heated convo between them! swearing at eachother😆! n dat proximity even even when I know da guy is a complete jerk but its virat n it makes me blush😳.so the sparks r still very much there! n maya the bitch is back! god save us! b viren?! is it gonna be a heartbreak or manvi's reaction on maya's return?!!!! continue soon like really soon. n update mera dil...tooo!😉

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abirami

@madhuharini

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#870

OMG! I can't express you how much I like this story...
Please continue soon and update the next part today itself... please...
And moreover, make Virat understand Manvi's pain very soon...
I am very very eager to read to next chapters...

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