Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 83

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

First of all congratulations lara for hitting century !! 🤗
U noe wat i was eagerly waiting for this update n finally it comes superbly !! The way u hae written it my god really really awesomeee !! 👍🏼 the atmosphere u created the emotions u portrayed all were juz amazing !!❤️
Huh !! U hate virat !! I juz hate him !! 😡 how can he say those words to mangi !! Aargh !! 😡 N miss mayaa !! She is getting on my nerves 😡 !!
I can feel manvi pain !! It was written so well lara !! Everything was perfect !! Song choice is wow !! Loved it !!!
It was emotional , heart touching update !! Getting more n more interesting !! Loved the way u r taking the story !! Fabulous !!❤️
Looking forward for next update !! Will be waiting !! Thanks for the pm :D

Originally posted by: neetnia

omg omg omggg i luved ittt 👍🏼especially the last word 👏🤣 plzz pm me if u can..

Originally posted by: anu0555

congrtzzxx lara...u cmplted more than 100 pgs..love u yaar..

im damn happy for u ..muahhss

n it was awsome foursome update..mindblowing..

amazing...

n emotional too..feeling really bad for manvi..

plzz do clear all misunderstandings between virman..i love them.. <3

n viren is sweet..

fab part...good job

update soon..waiting...

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

lara tune mujhe rulaya ab main tujhe rulaungi 🤣 uff wt an update lara ji i toh just loved it. Haww virat is a big cheapo he again hurt manvi with his heart piercing words argh hate him. I felt pity on him he was calling his own child illegetimate hw dare he. He should have trusted on his love instead of those photographs. Nw that maya bitch what is she upto. Nd wt abt manvi i hope nothing bad will happen with her. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Plz lara jaldi update karo warna main spamming shuru kar dungi 🤣 thanx for the pm tc regards shivali 😳

Originally posted by: nrithyao

amazing update
loved the song selection
apt for the situation
virat is being so cruel to her
wonder what happened to maanvi
hope she is fine
thanks a lot for the pm
please continue soon