Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 57

Awesome updt...finally they met...my fvrt part was the 1st where virat was following manvi before their meeting...viren is sweet man n he hs a genuine feelings fr manvi...so pls dont do any injustise with him at last...waiting fr their next meeting n some deadly convo...cont soon

awesome part
loved the way u wrote their meeting
it was wonderful
loved viren's care for maanvi
thanks a lot for the pm

Fantastic update it is a virman ss bt i really dnt mind manvir together it was short yet nice contnue sn

I was getting so happy wen virat followes her n even saved her frim falling
but the hatred returns
feel sorry for them both
cnt wait to see wats next nw
hope u get well soon
continue wenever u can dear 😉

EEKS, more Viren and Manvi, I am loving this story more and more. Sorry I took so long to comment on these 3 chapters.

Chapter 6:

I loved Virens love and concern for Manvi, haye he is really a sweetheart. I am very frustrated with the inconsiderate and useless Virat in your story, can I please hit him and knock some sense into him to help his poor wife? Karan is back in the end, I cant wait to read more now.

Chapter 7

I am really going to kill Virat in this story, he is worried about a business deal yet he cant call his wife to apologize. I am glad he is at least thinking about her but after what he did to her, he needs to beg for forgiveness. I felt so bad for Manvi in the story and beechara Karan is stuck in the middle. Even he is willing to help Manvi yet her husband that she love so much is being extremely inconsiderate.

Chapter 7 Cont.

YAY virman face off. Manvi please slap him for me. I was so happy when Viren realized his love, I am loving the Viren Manvi jodi in your story, kisi ki nazar na lage dono ko, they are both sweethearts. I will not say anything about Virat, I think you already know my opinion on him from the previous comments.

Chapter 8

Haye, Viren is so caring, and this Virat, I have no words for him. He let her fall and didnt even care, Viru please use your head, she is your wife for godsakes. I guess I will enjoy my Manvi and Viren jodi for longer since this Virat is showing no sign of getting a brain anytime soon.

I am loving the story a lot. Continue soon and thank you so much for the PM's 🤗

Super awesome update
too good yaar
;sorry for late
bt like it very much
thanks for pm

nice update both are came face off
but when he get to know real truth
and viren so much controlling his feeling
toward her update soon

hi lara,
its always a great pleasure reading ur stories.waiting for ur next update

wow...super silent face off.👏..as expected virat hates her...guess once the truth is out he will hate himself.😆...viren in love with manvi...hopefully virat get to knw the truth early...do continue soon...😊