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nahaananya

@nahaananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

res
unres

yipppe am firsht 😛
dhasu update lara
virman meeting ... it was goood
virat still hates her
and i loved how viren cares about manvi
now dey got the bussiness deal
waiting to c wats next

Edited by nahaananya - 12 years ago

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SS4MaNan

@SS4MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

so viren was indeed in love!! n eeekks virman faceoff! can't wait update asap!!

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JESMY

@JESNIA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

AWESOME UPDATE.
LOVED IT.

EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE.

Edited by JESMY143VIRMAN - 12 years ago

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

Awesome Lara.!!! Loved it..And the best abt this update..Maanvi has become strong..cz now she has nothing to loose n when she fights now, it would be to her dignity...nit him in her life..yes she is lonly...but up to an xtent Viren has filled that up not complelty as the blow she faced is hard to get over with..but this time its time for Virat to have the worse time..as he has defntly faced pain but 1 or 2 percent of what Maanvi has faced...Eager for next..!!!

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

superb update

loved it

virman meeting was superb

viren is so caring

plz cont soon

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niki795

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

awesome update
loved it
the way you described the garden scene is superb
virman faceoff
waiting for next
thanks for pm

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virumanu

@virumanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

wow i was waiting 4 ur update and and i got it...

the update was superb..fab

conrinue sooonnn

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lujeyn9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

fabulous update

thanx 4 pm 😊

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#549

Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#550

this is just soo beautifully written the song with the scenes just go soo well i could feel all that well done lara fab work 👏👏
thefeelings of virat onn seeing her the peace that smile aww that was like soo beaitiful how he was admiring her that just brought genuine smile on mine face 😃
then manvi seeing his reflection then how he didnt let her fall held her still he cared for her but again the thought of karan made him heartless...wanna see his reaction when he meets her at the office with viren thats gonna be really exciting 😃
then viren's care for manvi his love and then the feeling of just a touch from her i feel bad for him when he gets to know that virat is manvi's husband...
waitng for the next update viren and manvi's dinner 😃

thanx alott for the pm and update next part soon and longer one 😊

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