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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Awesome Update Lara..!!! Lovely...Superb...Maanvi found a real frnd...cz the people she trusted has actually thrown her out...and Virat is still trying...Waiting fir next ...!!

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Ufff bechari manvi
has to go through sooo much
love the lines about nafrat n pyaar u wrote
cnt wait to see virmans aamna saamna soon 😉

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

nice emotional update..love it..both manvi and virat are in pain..but still i felt sadder for manvi..the way she confronted karan is justifiable..he is indirectly responsible for all that happened..i think now he will try to find out the truth...waiting for virman face-off..continue soon!!

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Brilliant update Lara !!! OMG !!! i can't see manvi like this ;'( this is soo getting intense n awesome !!!! u have portrayed every feeling superbly !!!👏👏👏 emotional update reyyy !!!! poor manvi !!! i really feel bad for the most !!! she is the one who have to suffer the most !!! viren is as usual really sweet !!! virat !! i don't noe !!! i feel more bad for manvi !!! loved the update !!! ❤️ this is getting more n more interesting !!! looking forward for next update !!! will be waiting !!! thanx for the upcoming pm :)

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

superb update
loved it
liked the way viren cares for manvi
hope karan finds out the truth fast
continue soon

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

awesome update

loved karan and maanvi's part

so emotional

plz cont soon

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Superb updt
loved manvis outburst on karan
waiting fr manvi n virats face off
cont soon

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

nice update she face of karan but
she MU him now how he will prove
him innonce and she cut wrist
update soon and send me him
everytime whenever u update
u story and still waiting for
refuge

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richa002

@richa002

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Update was awsome...
Loved manvi nd karan's confrontation...
Poor karan...hope he will get to know truth...
Virat is so alone nd finished...its saddd...
Viren understands manvi nd caring for.her...is sweet...
Thanxxx.for pm

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unknown

@anu0555

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#430

outstanding update as alwyas...!! i'm loving it to the core...

awsome part...good work yrr...

brilliant..super !!!!

i'm sad for manvi...!!! she is broken into zillion pieces..n now karan's appearance made her sick..viren's care n love was making her strong but coz of karan..she once again met wid her cruel fate n past...!!!

but i hope manvi will come to know abt truth very soon...

yaarr..really missing virman's scene.. n i hope dat virat will also come to know dat manvi is innocent...

manvi is hurt very much..she cutted her wrist..thnk God viren reached...

when manvi n virat will meet again..???

btw i was really desperately waitng for nxt part..!! n finally u updated..!! thnku soo much lara for PM!!

plzz cntnue soon waiting eagerly for nxt update..!!! don't get late..

love yea

-anu aka rouza..

Edited by anu0555 - 12 years ago