Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Amazing update lara 👏👏 Liked it👍🏼

viren and manvi's frdship is very nice

i think its virats company.

[DIV]<font sizeand manvi collide with karan!!!!its interesting yar looking forward fo ... (Reply) Hey am commenting throw my phone yaar:) so sorry fr this weird kind of reply, thnks fr ur comment nd I will try to updt tmrw

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Res

unres...

fab update...!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

u know have no idea for how long i was waiting for it... i have read this story 4 to 5 times till now... i am in love with it lara... and though virat is someone i should hate... but i am unable to... actually on seeing him alone and struggling with pain is hurting me thinking how lonely he is... its true, a single mistake of ours can turn our life upside down n that is what happened with virat

i am happy to see the reaction of karan on meeting manvi... jaisa bhi ho... dost hai... and manvi was also right... infact i loved karan n manvi confrontation to the bits... and coming to my viren... aww he understands mannu sooo much... great...!!! and now the innocent soul burning in hell... i cant see virat like this... he is burning... he is suffering... he is devastated... he is alone... he is finshed 😭 i cant see virat like this but that doesnt mean i am not with manvi... i dont want manvi to come to back to virat... infact i would love to see her moving on with viren... dont want viren to be left heart broken...

i donno what am i blabbering... pllzzz excuse me 😳

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Awesome update
Poor karan...felt bad for him
Hope manvi gets to know the truth...
Excited for the coming parts...
Loved viren 's concern for manvi...so caring
Cant wait for the next part
Continue soon

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Mannia

@Mannia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Awesome update...⭐️

poor kiran,he is so innocent.but manvi...

hope kiran will find truth soon

manvis hand is bleeding,ohoh.

contine soon...

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abirami

@madhuharini

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

what an emotional update! loved it... Please make Manvi smile 😊

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paddu503

@paddu503

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Amazing update..,...emotional part too...loved the lines very much...,.continue soon...take care.

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Hey, I read all ur updates in just one go...😊

frankly,, super awesome👏 plzzz continue soon!!!😉

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

loveddd itt
it was fab.
Cntinue sooonnn

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

wow superr update lara i guess virat will get to knw the truth...soon or may be not...just a guess...

anyways loved your update loved your...dialogues...superrr...👏

do continue soon dear...😊

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

was waiting for this update from sooo long finally i got it and i was like
and the update was fab making me soo emotional samajh nai araha kiske liye bura feel karung aur kis ke liye nai...i mean ofcoz the most hurt is manvi infact she is completely broken coz she lost her love his trust and then those words from him then lost her bestie and then her baby the biggest pain for her and is a soul less one now...her pain anger clearly reflected on the way she reacted and spoke seeing karan ...😭😭
and karan even he is nt at fault he stilll is hurt that manvi is put into all this coz of him abit ...and he is her frend who cares for her and is ready to find the truth for her 😊😊
and viratt gosh i so hated him that he didnt trust her i still do for what he did to manvi but still am a virman fan ya feeling bad for him tooo he is equally hurt lonely and in miserable state without manvi ...
and viren is a sweetheart he cares for manvi alott and knows her in and out in so less time...loving their bond 😃
and the bits of shayaris i loved them very well written lara am soo much in love with this 😃
update next one sooner and also waiting for mirrors and refugee camp too😃

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