Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 35

Originally posted by: Mannia

Awesome update dear

oh maya is that evil girl, hate her

nd this virat he likes her!!!

what is manvi going to say?

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Yes dear... maya is that one and only evil girl... 🤢 🤢...Thanks a lot... will be back soon...😊

Originally posted by: sindhu4karanika

awesome update yaar!! i like da way u have compared manvi n virat's attitude at present!! n wow wow mr so called lovable husband had already moved on with dat s**t eergg I sooo wanna kick his ass i I'm really happy for manvi looks like she is doing just fine. n viren is falling for manvi.i like it! like everyone I'm also so excited for virman face off! update soon!!

Feeling pity for virats ass... 😕...You will obviously want to kick his sexy ass more after reading the upcoming updts...😆 😆...Thanks a lot for your comment dear... take care...😊

Originally posted by: nimi00

aweome update, sorry for the late reply. I am glad Virat isn't warming up to Maya too much. YAY more Viren and Manvi, thank you thank you thank you for that. I love this Viren, he is so nice to Manvi. Continue soon, thanks for the PM

Thanks a ton yaar... 😊...Glad that you liked viren and manvis thora thora woh... 😉...

Originally posted by: nahaananya

Hey dat was awsum''prologue was fab'.. it shows virman seperation

Chap 1

Gawd how can virat think its karan's child'. Hate virat here'.. jealousy has taken over his love side '.. I knw he will repent for his dangerous mistake' and dat day he's gna suffer very badly'..

ITS VERY TRUE DAT'. ITS EASIER TO POINT FINGERS AT GIRLS RATHER THAN A BOY

Chap 2

If karan had planned al dis '. I m defo gna kill him'. Nd dat lady I gues its some1 either maya or tanya'. Gawd nowadys I hate dese names'. And lara let me tell u '.. u describe the feelings so well, perfect, apt for d situation'.. ireally had tears reading them'.cz I cud connect with the whole situation

Manvi feeling so worse'. I cant help but to cry with her painful situation

Chap 3

Ahaaa its viren 'I knew it I knew it '. Yesss'.only viren can understd manvi's pain' ireally adore their relation'..

Viren is such a selfless guy ' he lost his contract just to save mannu'. I m njoying dis'. And omg manvi lost her child' its so painful'virat insulted and told stuffs to manvi'. Den wat is he doing with dat skimpy girl'' as I told'. ITS MUCH EASY TO POINT FINGER AT GIRLS' watever virat u rot in hell '. Disgusting'. He called her a who**'. Den wat is he????/

Chap 4

Ahaaa seems a love triangle ' jo bhi ho am loving karnia'. Eeks'. I alwys adore viren '. He is such a true frnd'. I guess he's developing some soft corner fr mannu '.and I seriously want manvi to marry viren' and gv a slap to virat's face' lambe chaude waade karte hai '. Lekin asli tym pe sab phuuus '..

He has to pay for his grave sins'..and moreover his family dint trust her also '. Commendable

Chap 5

Ayee yaar galat jagah pe brake laga diya na' chal koi baat nahi' viren already falling fr mannu '. And manvi joined office' loved her rapport wid d co workers'. Virat is alsi changed man

And plzzz yaar maya ko kahin dur latka do'' arghhh she always gets on mah nerves''

Plzzz I wanna face offf

Continue soon

Once agn it was a treat to read ur updates

Love

Ananya ' aka'. Anne

Stay cool and be happy muaaah

thnx fr d pm... sry fr being late ... plz pm me

Ohhh Anne... 😃... thanks a lot my dear friend for your wonderful comment...😊...I am feeling so much happy that you liked all the chappys... 😊 😊...It takes so much hardwork to write a story... you know that well naaa... 😕...And when you get appreciated by your readers it feels like blessing... 😊...So thnks again...🤗...So sweet of you...love you... muahhh... ❤️...Will obviously send you pms...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Ohhh Anne... 😃... thanks a lot my dear friend for your wonderful comment...😊...I am feeling so much happy that you liked all the chappys... 😊 😊...It takes so much hardwork to write a story... you know that well naaa... 😕...And when you get appreciated by your readers it feels like blessing... 😊...So thnks again...🤗...So sweet of you...love you... muahhh... ❤️...Will obviously send you pms...

ayeee frnd ko thnx bolti hai tu 😡
yaar tune inna hardwork ki... tareef toh banti hai meri jaan
chal koi nahi ... likhte raho
luv u too muaaah 🤗😳

Loved it
Its getting interesting
Cant wait for the next part
Continue soon please!

Omg heart attack aa gaya
love this sweet caring viren
but manvi n karam aamna saamna ooohh
i bet its virats company that viren got offer from
very excited for next chappy
update soon 😉

awesome update
loved it
I think its virat 's company
continue soon