Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 33

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update viren starting liking her
what happen when virat get real truth
that maya is done plan to make them separated
and when he eill get to know all truth update soon

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome update

that girl is maya, hate her

viren is falling for maanvi

he is so caring

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Fab dear
awesome part
aweome update dear
liked it

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

nice update got to know chages in both of thems life ...
virat a complete changed man but still thinks that manvi is at fault and hates her haan and maya to sati savitri hai uske liye andha hai kya
and this chipko maya isko na fevicol lagake kisi kale bandar ke saath chipka do hamesha ke liye
manvi trying to move on and be happy ...but what she wants to say to viren galt time pe rok diya ...
viren taking care of manvi he is surely falling for her...
wanna see virman faceoff soon...
update next part soon

Originally posted by: Syed695

Superb Update..!! though hate that Virat didn't take the iniative once to find out the truth and least bothered abt her whereabts...tau feelings ka achaar dalega..(waise me and sis told this line together while reading)...but loved Viren again...Waiting for next..!!

Feelings kaa achar... omg... haa haa... 😆 😆...Kya wonderful thought hai yaaro... 👏 ... but so true you guys are... Will try to updt soon...

Hey dat was awsum……prologue was fab….. it shows virman seperation

Chap 1

Gawd how can virat think its karan's child…. Hate virat here….. jealousy has taken over his love side ….. I knw he will repent for his dangerous mistake… and dat day he's gna suffer very badly…..

ITS VERY TRUE DAT…. ITS EASIER TO POINT FINGERS AT GIRLS RATHER THAN A BOY

Chap 2

If karan had planned al dis …. I m defo gna kill him…. Nd dat lady I gues its some1 either maya or tanya…. Gawd nowadys I hate dese names…. And lara let me tell u ….. u describe the feelings so well, perfect, apt for d situation….. ireally had tears reading them….cz I cud connect with the whole situation

Manvi feeling so worse…. I cant help but to cry with her painful situation

Chap 3

Ahaaa its viren …I knew it I knew it …. Yesss….only viren can understd manvi's pain… ireally adore their relation…..

Viren is such a selfless guy … he lost his contract just to save mannu…. I m njoying dis…. And omg manvi lost her child… its so painful…virat insulted and told stuffs to manvi…. Den wat is he doing with dat skimpy girl…… as I told…. ITS MUCH EASY TO POINT FINGER AT GIRLS… watever virat u rot in hell …. Disgusting…. He called her a who**…. Den wat is he????/

Chap 4

Ahaaa seems a love triangle … jo bhi ho am loving karnia…. Eeks…. I alwys adore viren …. He is such a true frnd…. I guess he's developing some soft corner fr mannu ….and I seriously want manvi to marry viren… and gv a slap to virat's face… lambe chaude waade karte hai …. Lekin asli tym pe sab phuuus …..

He has to pay for his grave sins…..and moreover his family dint trust her also …. Commendable

Chap 5

Ayee yaar galat jagah pe brake laga diya na… chal koi baat nahi… viren already falling fr mannu …. And manvi joined office… loved her rapport wid d co workers…. Virat is alsi changed man

And plzzz yaar maya ko kahin dur latka do…… arghhh she always gets on mah nerves……

Plzzz I wanna face offf

Continue soon

Once agn it was a treat to read ur updates

Love

Ananya … aka…. Anne

Stay cool and be happy muaaah

thnx fr d pm... sry fr being late ... plz pm me 😳

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

Amazing update as usual !!!! i loved it got to the noe changes in both virman life !!
hawww virat still thinks manvi is at fault n tat mayaa !!! aargh had hoti hai !!!i wanna kill her
awwn i m juz loving viren here !!! he is really a sweetheart !!! the way he cares for manvi !!! awwn !!!
i m happy tat manvi is working !!! :D
is viren falling for manvi ?? Hainaa !!
haww why did u stop there !!! wanna read more !!! looking forward for the next !!! will be waiting !!! continue soon if possible Lara!!!

Thanks a lot dear... 😃 ...Viren is falling for manvi ?... 😳 Guess it yourself dear... 😉...😉Will try to cont soon dear... 😊...Tada...