Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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richa002

@richa002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

Nice update..loved ittt...
Hate that maya...nd virat hurting manvi soo much...
But virat is also so much trapped.. Feeling bad for his inner turmoil...
Loved lift scene...plzz throw that maya out...
Nd update soon

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

jaroorat pare toh bournvita khao... koi toh pls mil jao.. krish ban jao..

KUCHH BHI...

HA HA HA...🤣🤣

Dimag fir gaya h tera lagta h...

He he he...🤣🤣

I told u earlier also, why u feel exasperated??😊

Hm log kafi nhi h kya???😊

hmmm???😊😉

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

Awsm update ... I m in cnfusing state ,dear ... Whether luv virat or hate him ,,,,bcz in one update i hate him and in next one i feel sad for him ,,he also suffer !!!!!! Really hurt to see manvi's cnditions !!!!!!!! But luv the lift scene &&&&&& and hate that maya...want to shoot her !!!!!!!!! See hw much i m crazy abt ur wrk !!!!!!!!! Do cntnue ... Thanks alot for pm dea...

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#994

lara ji

thank u for the update😳

uff kya batao ke mujhe kaisa laga after reading this part. i was like😲😭 arrgh yeh kamini maya pe mujhe itna gussa aa raha tha na ke dil kar raha tha ki uski ussi table ke neeche kabar bana dalu😡

i hate virat from the starting of this ff but now i am feeling bad for him b'coz it wasn't his fault either na actually we only believe which is infront of our eyes so it was obvious that he blamed manvi for betraying him or his love but on the other hand he should have trust on his love but he didn't that's why he is suffering today like this.

on the other hand manvi's situation is also very bad and am feeling very sorry for him. poor gal don't know how much lara make her suffer in future😳

overall loved the whole part very beautyfully written. do update soon next part

thanks for the pm

take care

shivali😳

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Hiba

@Kicha111

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#995

Wonderful update

hate maya 2 d core...hw mean she speaks 2 manvi

Manvi s really broken abt d engagement news

Whr s karan...once said he got proof nd still he sit idle

virman small moment n elevator ws so nice

Hope virat cme 2 knw d truth soon

Cont soon

thnx 4 d pm

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esme

@maclean

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#996

😭omggg manvi is crying,,, from chapter 1 to chapter 15 😭 kithna royenga,,,,,,,, and virat, omg he is becoming rude day by day... 😔and what the heck with that 😡😡😡 maya,,, urghh i really got hyper is that sweet scene,,,,, and plzz sort out manvis,, saddy side 😭😭 and kill thay maya,, awesomeee update.. go on waiting 4 next part... ⭐️

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nia333

@nia333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#997

Hi
THIS IS MY FIRST EVER COMMENT ON THIS STORY
I MUST SAY THAT U ARE VERY GOOD WRITER N I LOVE THIS STORY😊
NICE UPDATE BUT KAB VIRAT KO MANVI KA SUCH PATA CHALEGA YAAR
I CAN'T SEE MANVI CRYING😭
WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
UPDATE SOON.