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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#981

ufff you make it everytime difficult for me to choose between viren and virat for manvi,
i want to see manvi happy now, she deserves it and i think viren can give her the hapiness...
by the way where is karan, couldnt he find out the truth????

thanks for pm

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#982

awesome update
loved it
hate this Maya 😡
throw her out soon
poor ruchi ..she gets into such situation almost every time
lift scene is nice
loved manvi saying those things to virat
what would be his reaction
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#983

Nice Update Lara
i really feel bad for Manvi
...Waiting for next part
update soon and Thanx 4 the PM😃

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abirami

@madhuharini

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#984

it's an amazing update...
speechless seeing my mannu's condition...
If he's standing in front of me, I'll continuously slap him blurting out the truth and my mannu's feelings on his deeds...
I luv u loads for this update dear...
pls update the next parts very soon...

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#985

it was fabulous

loved the update

hate maya

felt sad for maanvi

plz cont soon

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#986

nice update...

bt it was way too short Yar...anyways I really liked d elevator scene a lot

update soon

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#987

Yet again awesome update Lara !!!!👍🏼
haww kamini maya !!!😡😡😡 sali samajti kya hai apne aap ko !!! i will kill her😡😡 how dare she talk to manvi like this !!!!

gosh !!! i don't noe wat to say !!! :( i feel bad for manvi yaar !!!
n honestly i don't want virman separation !!!!!! i like viren but still i want virman together !!!! :/

the small virman moment in the elevator shows tat how much they are craving for each other !!! but still i would say virat is at fault !!!! he should have trust manvi !!

Lara u really nailed it rey !!! this is really captivating !!! i m always waiting for ur updates !!!

love the way story is flowing !!!! ❤️ can't wait to noe wat is gonna happen next !!! continue soon if possible !!! thanz for the pm :)

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#988

Awesome updt...after snaching her husband, her child, torturing her frm last 2 yrs like anything...she still want to hurt her...n wasnt enough i guess fr that virat is also doing the same...urghhh...but apart frm that i loved the elevator scene...thats so beautiful...now i m waiting fr virats reaction on manvi n virens relation...OMG i cant imagine...lolll...cont soon