Arakshi SS: Bechain dil mera Pg 50

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

ohhh...vidya dii...one more diamond frm ur factory...

this ws soo beautifully written...i loved it...i simply loved it...

haww...i ws feeling soo bad for arjun...

he has such a ruthless nd selfish person as father...hw badly he used to miss his mother...my eyes welled up during reading dat part...

Roshni ws indeed an angel in arjun's life...she gave him all the love nd support for which he yearned all his life...bt u wrote it right nd they say it right...life is no fairy tale...

continue soon dii..

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

u should give me a treat now for this...I was crying as i wrote it...ab tak wahi hoom...it has caught me there in his childhood...Am still standing there with the little boy on lonely nights staring at the sky!

Ha do check creation galery di pg92
thoda aur cry 🤗
Treat n me wow ho skega i give di
do teme wat u want
aww sry di make u cry 🤗
Love u di

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: gujjupari

😉🤣
we'll seee di... i'lll get there someday😉😆😆
PS: nice idea for OS di👏

🤗

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

ooww...

dat was so touching!!!!!

felt so bad 4 him!!!!😭😭😭

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful..
No other words can define it..
It's truly beautiful..
Arjun's glimpse of life was written brilliantly..
Now Shakshi to support Arjun..
Thats great!!
Waiting for further updates..
Continue soon..

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Ketakee

@Ketakee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Beautiful os vidya di...
Please continue...

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shararatisuhana

@shararatisuhana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

vry well wrtn..an d way u dscrb d emotns an flngs in ur

wrtng is smthng fab.. im a bg fan of al ur writngs

d way u portray ARJUN's life his jrny is rely diff an nc.

THNK U FOR SCH BUTFUL CRTNS😛

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NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Ress / unres

Awesome story ... Thank God Sikander is no more and his chapter has closed from Arjun's life ... Aww Sakhshi was worried about Arjun ... Flashback was nice ... Plz update soon sweety :)

Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago