Arshi SS : For Your Di!!!! IMP NOTE: PG 57 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 23 :

Soon the day arrives when khushi would be leaving with lavanya & NK. The raizada's come to meet them for the final time at GH. All was set. Soon all of them left to airport. All hug khushi. Arnav gifts her a pack. /she was first hesitant but then she took it. When she opened it she broke into a smile.

Arnav: This is a way so that you can remember me khushi.

Khushi : Thank u so much arnavji. I will never forget this gift.

The gift was a collection of salman khan movies with the photo frame containing their photo.

There was an announcement, soon all went inside. Khushi sees back and runs to arnav and hugs him and tells that she will miss him and she loves him a lot. Arnav kisses her on her forehead and turns away to hide his tears. They all board the flight and soon the flight takes off. All return home. Arnav goes to his room and starts crying hugging khushi's dupatta.

Edited by shanthiva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update but too short
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no u made me cry
but i salute her journey of self reliance a need to be kushi not a daughter a wife or a sis ...but just kushi and find herself
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor arhi right
but then it has to be done
neither will forget the other
that much am sure of
so she left huh
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very sad update😭
But arnav at least bid Khushi heavily.
I hope Khushi to come back soon for arnav, her love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional update
hope she returns back soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..but a short one
Khushi leave😭 hope she came back soon
Arnav gift is so adorable😛
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Posted: 11 years ago




From the first part of this ss till the 23rd part...I could not stop myself and read it one go,very happy with the concept and really liked the way you wrote it.What attract me the most is Shashi is cured and he was pretending because of Shyam,the way Khushi talked with him and she is right if one can understand her point of view.The meeting between Raizadas and Guptas @ GH.The anger,pain,helplessness and the emotional ride for all the members...👏 very beautifully written. And the bond that took place between Maamiji and Khushi-Payal..the hug and the comment from Maami ⭐️ well she is right no one can take care of both the sons like the Gupta sisters 😛 and finally Shyam's truth came out...Khushi's declaration to leave the RM and her love - her Rakshas..it's really difficult for her but it's the only thing that will provide them much needed time to think for the right way. The last night at RM and they shared very beautiful moments the words spoken by Anjali was really hard to believe but she was trying to undo the mistake for her Chhotey but in a wrong way ...😡
entire scene of Mandir and after that the condition of ASR 😭 I was crying for both they are in love but one is totally broken and the other is in pain, guilty and in shame may be...but the way Akash is behaving and always stands with Arnav is just simply superb..and yes in this ss I liked Aman's character too 😃 when I read the part where a person was talking with Khushi the first name clicked in my mind was NK and then Lavanya but you mentioned them as couple was truly brillant. They also know the reason and in the last two parts were the best as the new journey begins for both Arnav and Khushi the way Khushi talked with Arnav about her feelings the hug with full of love the Kiss and now Lavanya knew they are very much in love but because of the one person they got this Judai...but she will do for both of them and of course NK too ...the gift by Arnav to Khushi and that too Salman Khan's movies! so adorable moment ...but I hope they will meet again soon and rejoice their love.

eagerly waiting for the next part...thank you for the beautiful SS
take care.😊

Edited by shakrobaaj - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago




From the first part of this ss till the 23rd part...I could not stop myself and read it one go,very happy with the concept and really liked the way you wrote it.What attract me the most is Shashi is cured and he was pretending because of Shyam,the way Khushi talked with him and she is right if one can understand her point of view.The meeting between Raizadas and Guptas @ GH.The anger,pain,helplessness and the emotional ride for all the members...👏 very beautifully written. And the bond that took place between Maamiji and Khushi-Payal..the hug and the comment from Maami ⭐️ well she is right no one can take care of both the sons like the Gupta sisters 😛 and finally Shyam's truth came out...Khushi's declaration to leave the RM and her love - her Rakshas..it's really difficult for her but it's the only thing that will provide them much needed time to think for the right way. The last night at RM and they shared very beautiful moments the words spoken by Anjali was really hard to believe but she was trying to undo the mistake for her Chhotey but in a wrong way ...😡
entire scene of Mandir and after that the condition of ASR 😭 I was crying for both they are in love but one is totally broken and the other is in pain, guilty and in shame may be...but the way Akash is behaving and always stands with Arnav is just simply superb..and yes in this ss I liked Aman's character too 😃 when I read the part where a person was talking with Khushi the first name clicked in my mind was NK and then Lavanya but you mentioned them as couple was truly brillant. They also know the reason and in the last two parts were the best as the new journey begins for both Arnav and Khushi the way Khushi talked with Arnav about her feelings the hug with full of love the Kiss and now Lavanya knew they are very much in love but because of the one person they got this Judai...but she will do for both of them and of course NK too ...the gift by Arnav to Khushi and that too Salman Khan's movies! so adorable moment ...but I hope they will meet again soon and rejoice their love.

eagerly waiting for the next part...thank you for the beautiful SS
take care.😊


Thank u for your wonderful comment... Thank u so much.. It really means a lot.. I know there is a delay in positing this SS. I am struck with work. Will try posting it by wednesday.
Edited by shanthiva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 24 :


All were worried for arnav. He never spoke to anyone nor came out of his room.HP tried calling him for dinner still no go. He had locked himself in his room with only one thought "Khushi". Arnav wakes up by the continuous banging of his door. Cursing the person he sees that it is bright outside. He opens the door and was shocked to see his entire family along with aman & Guptas worried for him. Naani takes his hand and leads him inside and makes him sit on the bed. All see khushi's dupatta clutched in his fist as if its the only thing he has now. She instructs HP to bring breakfast. All surround him taking their place beside the bed and on chairs Di and maami crying seeing his condition while akash, payal, mamaji consoling them. HP comes with a tray containing his toast, and juice along with his medicine. Payal takes the plate and keeps it infront of him on the low table.


Naani : Chotte aap yeh kya haalath banaie hai. Please chotte have something. Its not good for your health.


Buaji : Hai re nandkishore. who is this man here. He is not Arnav singh raizaada. The ASR i knew is strong and full of gussa. Arnav bahuwa u cant be like this. Then how will you sankadevi come back to you if you dont have the strenght to fight for your prem and bring her here. Just imagine how she will feel if you dont take care of your health.


Hearing sankadevi arnav looked at buaji searching for answer as if asking her that will their sankadevi come back again to him. All looked at him reacting only when he heard sankadevi. Akash unable to bear this state of his brother called up NK. After few minutes NK picked the call and akash told arnav's state and asked khushi to speak to him. Akash put the phone on the table and turned on the loud speaker. Soon the room was filled with the most awaited voice. Yes the voice of Khushi. His Khushi.


Khushi : Arnavji.

The moment he heard this word he felt staring at the phone without blinking scared that if he he blinks the call with be disconnected. Getting only silence khushi tried again.


Khushi : Arnavji...How can you be so careless. U promised me that you will take care of your health. And who are you Mr raizaada to punish my arnavji. Only Khushi has the right to punish her arnavji. I love you a lot arnavji. Please take care.. Hello arnavji why are you not answering, Jeejaji. Kya huva.


Arnav heard everything and now slow tears were flowing down his cheeks. He slowly picked up the phone and spoke just one word..


Arnav: Khu..Khushi..


Hearing his voice and the pain behind his voice all self control which khushi had gathered broke loose. She started crying. Arnav could sense it.

Arnav :Khu..Khushi kya huva.. What happen? Why are you crying.. Wait i am coming there as soon as possible.


Khushi : No arnavji. We just reached here. I am not crying. Please take of yourself. U are Arnav Singh Raizaada. The ASR i know would do anything and writes his own destiny. I am always there with you arnavji. U promised me that you will not go into the shell. I will be back to you soon. Right now i need some time. We need some time. Please dont make it difficult for me. I will come back only if i get to see ASR and not this broken man whom i dont know. Take care aranvji. I will have to go out now and will call you later. Please have you food and medicines at proper time. I love u arnavji.


Arnav : I love you khushi.


Hearing this khushi cut the call. Immediately aman's phone buzzed. He checked to see message from Khushi.


Message : Order from Mrs. ASR : "Amanji I know how much arnavji is hurt. Please take care of office work and this is my strict orders that he should not be allowed into office for 2days and no working from home as well. Please u and jeejaji manage the work".


Arnav gave a smile to his family and had his breakfast. All were happy to see this change in arnav.


Naani : Dont stress yourself chotte. Take rest today and sleep well.


Arnav: No naani i am fine i will go to office.


Aman : Sorry ASR but you are not allowed to enter office today and tomorrow.


Arnav: What the.. Aman how dare.. Cut by aman.


Aman : Sorry ASR but for proof you can check for yourself.


Saying this he offers his phone. Aranv reads the message and laughs. Payal immediately picks up the laptop seeing which aranv's eyes popped out. The very silent payal touching his laptop. Before he could speak something payal speaks


Payal : I am sorry arnavji. I am sure khushi will call me or message me with one of her tactics to hid your laptop. So instead of waiting for Mrs. ASR orders i am doing it so that you dont stress yourself.


As soon as she said this her phone buzzed. Well guess what... Message from Khushi : Payal opens the message and reads it.


Payal : Khushi : "Jiji, please hide arnavji's laptop in your cupboard or anywhere where he cant find it. And also ask jeejaji to got to office and take his laptop with him. When aranvji is sleeping take his phone and switch it off. I have told HP not to give any call to arnavji if incase anybody call him on the landline. I will call you later jiji. Take care Jiji. Miss you."


Hearing this all started laughing. All were happy that even being far khushi has care for arnav. All tells him to take rest and move out of the room. Anjali kisses him and slowly leaves the room. Arnav gets up freshen up and visit his garden. Hi favorite place where he can find peace. Soon he found himself in digging pots and taking care of his plants with a smile on his face thinking of khushi's orders.


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