Smitar's: Loving Khushi #1 Link to # 2 on Pg 1 - Page 73

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Posted: 12 years ago
now Arnav knows that Anjali is playing.. good..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh that was an emotional update smita
Khushi's thoughts and plight in the temple brought tears in my eyes - my throat was choked dear
Wonderful update smita

Rashmi, 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
morning was nice he was not letting her go but these people will never let them to spend time together
Anjali has really lost her mind she will regret this soon
waiting for what is arnav gonna to do next
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read your entire story and I loved it!!! I should be doing math yet I am here to read awesome stories!!!

This part started out with teasing and love but then it took a serious note. I seriously feel bad for Khushi for what she suffered through. And I am glad Arnav is trying to gain forgiveness. Its easy for us to say that Arnav should forgive her but only the person knows the suffering she went through.

I am glad Khushi told Arnav about Shyaam instead of hiding it. Secrets will always come back to bite us!!!

Awesome part

Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Feel sad for kushi... so much pain
looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heartbreaking
I am glad Khushi told Arnav that Shyam was here
What will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was painful to read.
I feel this FF of yours has the most pain out of all of the others in terms of Khushi n Arnav...

Now I completely do not remember all of them...but I have a feeling...

It was a beautiful update...loved it so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bbeutiful update
Khushi's thought abt her future was heartbreaking
Hope everything get settled between them soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update. It was simply the best. I don't have words.


Red hot tears were coming out of my eyes when I read Kushi's monologue. It is way too deep, painful.

I have a doubt, Kushi thinks Arnav is pursuing her for his hurt ego. Though we were shown it was love in serial and here too, isn't it his ego too? Because, in the serial he didn't care for what she was going through, he just wanted to win and get her back home. When she agreed to come, his dialogue to her was 'ASR never fails and is always right'. Not even a monologue of loving words in his mind was shown. Here you are showing it, yet is this LOVE?

I mean he want her with her. Yes, because she gives him something which he won't be able to get from anywhere else. But, does he really love her? He was attracted to her before marriage, NK trying to win her had hurt his ego and he wanted to 'claim' what was his.

Seeing her with Shyam had again hurt him, more than for his Di, it was the thought that she chose Shyam, over him. He wouldn't have married that girl if it wasn't Kushi. But that emotion is it propagated by love or his ego or both love and ego? If so can love and ego exist at the same time?

Now here too, at the first instance he got he had used Kushi as a punch bag. When his Di was hurt, he wanted to hurt someone and natrually he did it to Kushi. But when she said she is leaving, and his feeling of responsibility towards her after she saved his life too going to that extent, didn't let him to leave her. Is that love?

Nowadays, he is getting angry but he doesn't show it in fear of losing her. Is that love or his urge to win? Because he is controlling his anger so that he could win her back. Once she is back to his life, he wouldn't bother. Why this pretense and farce? Is this Love?

Even in the serial, once Kushi had agreed to be a part of his life, he had stood by her during Dadi times, came back to marry her etc. But once Sheetal came, Aarav was adopted by them, her Mrs. India times he was least bothered about her. He was again back to taking her for granted if it cannot be termed as 'ignoring'. So how is that love? Or is that is what is love?

So it is true when people say love fades away?

Here I don't feel Arnav love her. He feels guilty, he need her by his side, as now at the ending of this update he wants comfort from her-she is a commodity that gives him calmness? He is physically attracted to her too. But is there love? Is this love?

Please do reply if you can clear my confusion and show me the right path.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant part.. I am glad Khushi told Arnav that she saw Shyam

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