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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

so khushi told him the truth this time not like ipkknd...loved it

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Awesome update really felt for Khushi when she was in the temple. Hope Arnav is able to convince her of his love. Pleased Khushi has told Arnav about seeing Shyam seems like he is manipulating Anjali

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Wow that a brilliant and simply Amazing update,

Loved the update it was a wonderful read, awesome writing.

Awww the part where Khushi was sitting alone in the temple was really sad, poor Khushi thinking about the future is really heart breaking.

Khushi taking out her frustration and anger on Arnav is totally justified, I think it's going take a lot of convincing from Arnav to win back khushi's love and trust.

So Khushi noticed Shyam leaving Anjali's room and I'm so glad she confided in Arnav, can't wait to see how he reacts.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

awesome update loved it felt sad for khushi when she was in the temple thinking about the future cant wait for the update thanks for the pm

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Arnav's gift to Khushi was so so awesome i loved it

and i can't believe that she spotted Shyam, i'm glad she didn't go running to everyone instead told Arnav now

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Rocking update! Even remembering how Anjali behaved after Shyam was kicked out pisses me off! She was so damned selfish! Didn't even care About her child, only Shyam!!

Waiting for the next part! At least in your version Khushi was honest with Arnav and told him Shyam was coming to the house!

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

oh wow...

kushi saw shyam??..great so he gonna make his entry in the story now...

i hope this time arnav would be alert...

once again wonderful update dear..

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#718

nice update yaar
thanx for pm

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Hahaha poor Khushi, fighting between her heart and mind. All her miseries are caused by Arnav and he is the only one who can help her in removing them. Its so heart touching to see Khushi worrying about her future, whole scene was written so brilliantly. Superb work Smitaji, glad that you made Khushi share about Shyam to Arnav, eagerly waiting to see how to take it forward. Amazing story!

Thanks for the PM rashmi, loved your interpretations. Simply Superb! 👏⭐️👏

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#720

what a dhamkedaar chapter this is...loved the fact that khushi saw shyam coming out of anjali's room & confided to arnav...just hope & pray that arnav instead of being blinded by his affection for his 'Di' would do something to get that woman out of her happy bubble...she seems to live in a world of her own...high time someone gives her a reality check..i was annoyed with the way anjali's character was fleshed out in the show..if your anjali too turns out to be the same, i would want nobody else but arnav to give her the reality check about her shaymji that she desperately needs...alright, i know i have ranted enough...now coming back to arnav & khushi, my heart goes out for this poor girl...wonder what arnav will do in the span of 11 days, to win her back, now that he has to sort to shyam-anjali mess as well..do update soon..looking forward to the next chapter...

Edited by shagun-rocks - 12 years ago