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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: sayali_d23

Smitajiii

you better give us looonggg updates if you are going to update on alternate days...😎

Wasn't the first part looong enough?😉 I was scared when I saw the length..ha..ha.., Sayali Bitiyaa!😆

Smita

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: smitar

Wasn't the first part looong enough?😉 I was scared when I saw the length..ha..ha.., Sayali Bitiyaa!😆

Smita

Smitajiii...

First part is longgg I agree... leking kaa karee... yehhh dil mange more...😛😆

I am veryyy happy to see the length of the update...😃.. so u better continue with at least tht... if u want to add more I don't mind...😉

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

THANK YOU SMITA!!

CANT WIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE! AND IM GLAD I WAS ABLE TO CATCH UR STORY!!!

Edited by mastermagician - 12 years ago

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akankha

@akankha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

one of the painful moment of ipkknd...always bought tears in my eyes,seeing their helplessness...U potrayed very well the situation,their feelings,pain n all smita.
they love each other so much,bt situation creating distance between them...arnav loves khushi more than his life,bt again cant xpress...and khushi always sacrificed for others,bt never get her share of happiness,now life even aking away her love from her...her arnavji...
hope here,arnav win her again,make her feel his love for her,and take out her feelings for him...

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sphobic

@sphobic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: rulama

Pooja,

This update had a lot of anger but it had anger earlier too when they got married. The entire update is about the effects and affects caused by anger. First it lad to marriage and the next to her nearly moving out of the house, without taking into considering the heart-break! When a person is angry, red hot angry they don't realize what comes out of the mouth.

When a person is angry, red hot angry they don't realize what comes out of the mouth--------
this sayings really confuses me di 😕 ,and i strongly believe this--

but i understand that here the situation is very different,here the anger was because of all the misunderstandings

Love!!!

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

loved the interpretation👏

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barunmaniac

@barunmaniac

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

amazing story

i really love reading your stories

plzzz update soon

😃

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Rashmiii Again you have done this...

When Arnav ran up the steps it was with trepidation of not Finding Khushi. With his heart sounding like jungle drums, he opened the door to find her packing her things. Stuffing the last of her item into her bag, she answered his query of what was she doing, with, she was on her way to Buaji's house. As she stood up to leave Knowing Khushi, and her soft giving nature, he asked her not to do it, as he had not meant whatever he spoke and it came out only in a fit of anger, without meaning anything! She told him his anger does not have a bearing on her decision and all he told was the truth. When she started to list out all the things that should not have happened he knew, Keeping Khushi by him was an uphill task. Her calm tone, reasonable argument along with the serene face, with no emotions like snow and ice she manifested, his heart clenched like a fist. A hand of cold started to grip his heart.

and i love you for tht... 🤗 you are awesome...

and i agree with the last para too.. specially the bold part..

In the entire update it is Arnav Singh Raizada's temper that has contributed to the unraveling of his marriage. His sense of unrealistic attachment to his sister even to the extent of closing his eyes, towards the unconditional love that his wife Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada has for him and his family, contributed to it. But when he realized the extent of damage his harsh words had done, his sense to right the wrong done prevailed. But his deeds redounded to his discredit. Skating on thin ice, the contract marriage, he has held on to Khushi by his side and is trying to have his efforts redounding to the good.

I know Smita ji will deal with this "bold" part in a wonderful manner in her FF..

Yeh wednesday kab aayega...

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muskaanrao222

@muskaanrao222

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

very interesting start...!

loved it...

thanx for the pm!

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: sayali_d23
@Isha...aka B.S.I_Love_You aka My Student...

🤗 Gud to kw tht you still remember me... 😳

last one month tere teacherji ki bhi roj class lag rahi hain... Esliye hum gayabwa hain... But i hope to be regular from now onwards...

Ek song student teacher ke nam...

Januu meri jann...
Main tere kurban...
Tu meri student ...
Main tere teacher...
Jane sare readers on ths thread... Lol

Teacherji... 🤗

Student can never forget thre Best Teachers.. 😳

i am so happy to see you...

Hum toh aapke jaise shayari nahi kar sakte na...😔

aaap jo nahi thi...practice nahi rahi...

But i am so happy you dedicated you "valuable" songwa to me..

Thank You..