Smitar's: Loving Khushi #1 Link to # 2 on Pg 1 - Page 17

Originally posted by: B.S.I_Love_You

Teacherji... 🤗

Student can never forget thre Best Teachers.. 😳

i am so happy to see you...

Hum toh aapke jaise shayari nahi kar sakte na...😔

aaap jo nahi thi...practice nahi rahi...

But i am so happy you dedicated you "valuable" songwa to me..

Thank You..

The interpretation was just AMAZING!!!

Originally posted by: sayali_d23

Awww thank you kyooo Betaa... its my pleasure 😊🤗

baki kise ne meri shero shyariii miss nahi kiyee...🤔

yeayyy new story!

so u r back...i'm so happy...

wow...i cant wait for the cheezy romance to come... 😛

Originally posted by: B.S.I_Love_You

Rashmiii Again you have done this...

When Arnav ran up the steps it was with trepidation of not Finding Khushi. With his heart sounding like jungle drums, he opened the door to find her packing her things. Stuffing the last of her item into her bag, she answered his query of what was she doing, with, she was on her way to Buaji's house. As she stood up to leave Knowing Khushi, and her soft giving nature, he asked her not to do it, as he had not meant whatever he spoke and it came out only in a fit of anger, without meaning anything! She told him his anger does not have a bearing on her decision and all he told was the truth. When she started to list out all the things that should not have happened he knew, Keeping Khushi by him was an uphill task. Her calm tone, reasonable argument along with the serene face, with no emotions like snow and ice she manifested, his heart clenched like a fist. A hand of cold started to grip his heart.

and i love you for tht... 🤗 you are awesome...

and i agree with the last para too.. specially the bold part..

In the entire update it is Arnav Singh Raizada's temper that has contributed to the unraveling of his marriage. His sense of unrealistic attachment to his sister even to the extent of closing his eyes, towards the unconditional love that his wife Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada has for him and his family, contributed to it. But when he realized the extent of damage his harsh words had done, his sense to right the wrong done prevailed. But his deeds redounded to his discredit. Skating on thin ice, the contract marriage, he has held on to Khushi by his side and is trying to have his efforts redounding to the good.

I know Smita ji will deal with this "bold" part in a wonderful manner in her FF..

Yeh wednesday kab aayega...

Great to see another new story form you Smita! That was quite an intensive start to the story.

As ever, Khushi's logic hits the nail on the head
Leaving Arnav to flail over all that she has said! 😃

Thanks Rashmi for the superb interpretation, it was very impressive.

Originally posted by: B.S.I_Love_You

Sab ne miss ki hogi shayri...😳 bas kehte nahi hai... 😆

Arnav singh Raizada k fan jo hai..."express" karna nahi awat hai... 😆

Hai na.. ??? threadwa k log bolo bolo...