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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

o wow smita new story...u know wt its a continuous journey with u through ur writing...:) loved each and every bit of it and must say i enjoyed it a lot...

loving khushi wow awesome start...feels like each and every scene was going in front of eyes...loved the fact that khushi cleared terace scene openly which never happened in the drama...thanks for touching the topic...looking forward to enjoy it again with u:)...love

thanks a lot rashmi for the update...will be waiting to read ur comment on each part asusal too :),love to both

Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Loving it so far cant wait to see how he proves his love to her and win her back

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Congrats for the new story.

Reading the begining of the story, is as if im looking IPKKND whom i deeply miss.thanks a lot

thanks for pm & of course eagerly waiting for next

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

i never read your other khushi series but now i here u start new story its easy for me to follow it

beautifully written everything byusing arnav khushi that scene

i really want to know how he will win khushi by his love and trust

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LIONHEART

@LIONHEART

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

fabulous topic and as usually brilliantly written. But I have just one request that please maker Arnav repent and grovel for her forgiveness as it was the one thing which we all missed badly and which KKG fully deserved no matter how self destructive her over the top generosity of heart was.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Wow! A lovely update, you took us back to those angst filled days of IPK... This was one of the best scenes that they had, Khushi hurt at his callous words & Arnav trying to keep her with him after hurting her like that... But what happened after this scene in the show was not to my liking, I hope you are going to give us a beautiful story here, like it should have been on the show...

Great going, keep it up.

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Nice start... Really looking forward to read this story.

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Megha

@naughtymallu

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Here Iam with a banner for this Khushi series😃...Don't know how it turned..😳

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sphobic

@sphobic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

awesome!!! i m so glad you picked this track smita di.

i was soo not satisfied the way this track was being carried-on,on the show.
but now we will get t o see this track of wooing khushi in your way.*sooo happy* 😊

liked that khushi cleared so many things between them here unlike in the show.

so arnav has twelve days,lets see how Mr.Raizada is going to woo Mrs.Raizada in smita di's style
😆😆😆.

@rashmi di so looking forward to your interpretation for this update .😊
but take your time becoz now i will get to read it after my college overs today,so no hurry.😆

Love!!!

Edited by sphobic - 12 years ago