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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl
Another story by Smita...ooh la la Dil garden garden ho gaya..

Where do you vanish off to regularly, you garden girl?

Smita

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Enjoyed reading the first part pls continue soon
Thabx

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

this was so similar to that episode
very beautifuully written
awesome update
thanx for pm
continue soon

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chupachup

@chupachup

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

congrats for new storyits amazing!!

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Wow nice start..

cant wait for more..

continue soon

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

very much awaitd track in d serial, bt it did satisfy. And surely ur story is gonna do justice. Waitng 4 nxt

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Congrats on the new story. This is the one episode that broke my heart and I hated Arnav to no end. How could he? After all that Khushi went through only for him and his Di, this is what he rewarded her with. I m so glad that u added some extra lines through which Di's brother Mr. Raizada came to know how his Jijaji met his contract wife Khushi. Believe me its so hard for me to write the words "contract wife" for Khushi. Only if he said he loved her and couldn't live without her, Khushi would've stayed with him. But he had to break her heart again. I ask what if it was Khushi attempting something like Anjali because of the harsh words of Anjali, would Arnav have said the same thing to Anjali? Each and every question Khushi asked was justified and Arnav had answers to none. Loved Khushi's attitude while she made it clear that only 12 days are left for the contract to end. A great start indeed 👏

Edited by risat - 12 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: rulama

I can't believe that you got the spot the very minute I uploaded!

Congrats on your stalking skills dear!

thank u thank u for the appreciation of my stalking skills rashmi - since today was 15th, I was just wondering when smita would come out with her new story and I was keeping an eye on u - haha - it worked -

smita, lovely start dear - so the story has started from where arnav has a deadline of 12 days to get back khushi - superb smita - iam eagerly waiting to read more

priya

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

I have waited for a long time for someone to redo this part Smita .and the beginning is fabulous , every cutting hurting word just like in the show ...and the promise of your magic to make things right for poor Khushi , who never did get her due for all that she suffered for loving Arnav Singh Raizada.

I really wouldn't mind a little bit more angst from KKGSR for what he said that day isn't really deserving of forgiveness. Looking forward to the update .

Thnx for the pm @rashmi