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raina

@Girlabouttown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

loved the first part lets see how u handle this track...

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

superb update dear...

i'm eagerly interested to know how arnav will woo khushi in just 12 days...

loved it!

continue soon...

thanx for the pm!

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Smita di is back with a bang. What a start. I am totally in glued with this New series. :D

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Milii

@Milii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Yayyy new story!!!!!

Thank u sooo much Smita...for writing this part!!! 🤗

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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: -RabbaVe-
That was Awesome! Goossh! Simtaa What did you reminded us.. So Hey I wanted to say that I would Love to Make a Banner for this story of yours.. 😊 If you Accept it 😳 and Yess.. thanks for the Link to the Index! :)

Pls make a banner for this story!

Smita

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

awesome story...
upset with arnav's behavior he must have found any other way to stop khushi

for example by saying
i love u khushi please dont go.

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Fantastic start to the story,ASR an angry man.👍🏼

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simim

@simim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Wow a great point to start the story from...and good that u got the whole shyam meeting her for the first time, and the MU during payash wedding out in the open...looking forward to the rest of the story

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

wowww ...ur descriptions are amazingly gooddd

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Thanks a ton Rashmi for the Pm.

Hey Smita...wonderful, beautiful start.

I have always loved the scene that u started out with, the realization of Arnav as he drove away from Khushi, the emotional turmoil and love and anguish that both displayed when he comes back to see Khushi packing and he tries every hook and crook to stop her, overall how he actually did achieve that but with the contract brought up again in their discussion.

Reading ur first chapter made me relieve the whole two episodes almost as if i was watching it being played out again in front of me...

Loved it yet again...do update soon as i know, knowing u, u will have different alleys tucked up alongside the original storyline to surprise us, amuse us, and make us dream more than what we did watching the actual scenes in the show.

So Update soon... i will be waiting very eagerly.

Take care

Swati.