Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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Dimz13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Oh my...just like Kushi I can't bear to see Arnav like this...at a loss for words and lost..so not sure of himself...afraid to do anything because he's not sure what will set Kushi running the other direction...!

Not that he does not deserve any of it... But seeing someone so down on their luck is hard..especially the dashing Arnavji...!

I hope Deeya can do something to help Kushi ...!

Kushi take your time to get over the hurt.. And it's big...but keep Raoul away?...!

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Oh super awesome update aria - we saw a very strong khushi in this update - I don't know what to say about arnav -
Lovely update aria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Poor arnav!...hats off to you for writing his emotions so well!

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nyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Oh damn. I am totally loving this.

Perhaps one of the best redemption tracks I have seen of these two. Much needed to truly write over the pain, the hurt that was inflicted by one on the other...and While, It is heartbreaking to see Arnav like this, but I cant help but feel that this is what he needs to truly win her back. Even, Khushi was waiting for him to say something...anything...but, then, he goes back in time and recalls all that he has done...Will a "sorry" or "come back to me" be really enough to undo it all?

Its going to be tough, but it is a treat to see THIS Khushi, and then, now witness THIS Arnav winning her back...the right way. It was also something else to go through his mind, while he contemplates on what he should say, or even just do that will make her come to him...I want more... :)

Awesome update Aria! Thank you for the PM :)

The car ride was filled with silence, and the ending filled with thoughts and memories...Makes me as a reader wait here for another update asap! :)

- Dee

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koisk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Feel bad for Arnav but still am angry with him. Loved the update though, just wish they could showed this track in the show...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Yay you updated!

I'll be honest, that bit in the end where you described Arnav's turmoil and helplessness, for a second I did forget all the cruel things he did. I wanted to hug him and tell him it would all be okay. It was so heartfelt... its just difficult to see any good person going through this. Sigh. And while I really am proud of the woman Khushi has become, I cannot help but mourn the loss of the part of herself that she has lost along the way. The optimism (bordering on delusional optimism) and charm that was essentially Khushi is not there anymore. Same case with Arnav.. gone the is man who thought he ruled the world, who lived on his own terms and always got what he want. That confidence if lost.. and I think he is slowly losing his arrogance though. But to see him this helpless is not as relieving as one had imagined it to be.

Fortunately of unfortunately, Arnav is the only one who can heal Khushi and vice versa. Destiny can be so mean! The one thing these two must realise is that their story isn't isolated.. Akash, Payal (and her child!), Anjali... all of their lives are connected to these two. Whatever they do, they must have that in mind.

Now since this update was sooo good, I am already greedy for the next 😃

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Anuradha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

awesome dear, i feel bad for this arnav even he did miserable things to khushi..

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arshina223

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Just feeling sorry for both of them.

awesome update.

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Someone's getting bolder.

Great update! :)

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#600

I love this line:

'It was a strange this helplessness ... like his first tryst with ordinariness.'

Arnav is well and truly out of his depth. For once all his attributes are not going to get him out of this mess. He's going to have to learn humility. 😆

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