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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Dii u updated it ...RES
Pheww finally read it
and I m saying it dis the best one lolll
i say it in every update kya karu mjhe har update apka best lgta hai 😊

Part 1
Arnie sleeping and akash is disturbing him for his selfish 😆😆 needs Poor arnie kahan fas gaya shadi yeh kar raha hai bachlor party akash ko chaiye i knw he is also gonna marry par bichara payal se itna darta q hai 😆😆

I was aww mrng 5 bbje club lolll😆😆 u scared me once😲

I lyk d attitude of arnav when he said this line to akash "NO. I am what I am. And for your information, I know I am the best and I look hot. And lot of girls already approved that. So I dont need to do anything more."

Poor akash and his betting game lolll

wat khushi not agreeing to apply haldi is c mad i love dat custom d most and c is really mad girl

Payal did d best job 👏👏 c sent d pic to arnav gosh soo cute diii muahhh⭐️⭐️

Lolll widout checking wat is dere he handed it over to akash really somtimes arnav is mad 😡😡

soo he aww stuck wid his beauty welll mee too khushi was luking damn cute in dis get up

Y he deleted it😡😡

Idiot wat the ..!! usko call karne par majbur kar rhi thi lolll game chnge hogya par phn nai aya hahahahahahahha😆😆😆

d same scene reminds me of d akash payal convo of idiot it was hilarious dii
👏👏👏

Khushi will spy arnav hahahahaha fun to watch it😆😆


Part II

Hhahahaha voicemail part was best in⭐️⭐️ 6 missed hahhaa

Khushi is still aftr dat stupid nk😲 Dii y u doing dis apko maza ata hai na😡😡

hayee soo cute mehendi and dis tym also payal grt job👏👏

ANd dis tym my arnie also didnt dlt d pic ☺️

He was lost in her pic only god knws shadi wali rat kya hoga ☺️ ☺️

Spy karte karte samne chali gyi he grabbed her hehehe

dii is following ol d rituals wich her mother said bt still she went to spy arnavv cnfused ..??

soo he was concerned for her i lykd dis side of him he always thinks of her first still end up fighting wid her 😉😉

U knw dii i love d teasing part of arnav bcz dis is the only way he sounds cutest d way he maje her tease and c instantly replies to her gosh i think wen c wil leave him for nk c is gonna miss him for dis

Part III

Shadi wala din barish loll yeh sirf onka saath hi ho sakta hai 😆😆

C i was ryt both parents and khushi and r sad for d past deeds bt dey had repented it with dere present works so no regret if khushi forgives her parents 😃😃

I m feeling bad arnav

He is so ryt he had everyone at one tym bt now he is ol alone for his marriage nt a single person whom he call his own family 😭😭

Finally akash said it to khushi dat it was his plan nt arnav😛😛

He didnt go for the bachelor party c i knw na dis soft corner never dies how much rude he becomes for the world he wil be still the same arnie to cokie

awesum ring ceremony again arnav naughtiness going in his and he stoppin himself for loosing his cntrl loll gosh i cnt believe it nw and khushi panic to dem heheheh grt dii

still khushi worries for stupid nk family repututaion leaving her own family really unbeliveable dii c is getting engaged and still saying c loves nk poor arnav moods went off and he stiffens at d thought of dis i wanna beat her badly

i didnt watch d vm so nt cmnting for dat and so for d last lines wat to say wen i dnt knw d wat was d vm abt


Pheewww diii i made my longest cmnt ever
hope u enjoy reading it
it took me whole one hour to wrote bcz i wrote 3 tyms while posting my cmnt
u gave me a mahaa mahaa mahaa update so here is mahaa mahaa mahaa comment

and dis is for u


Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
omg four parts...yey..rswa...

sorry i think its four...

Nice start with arnav nd akash.they have special bonding. they r discussed about bachelor party at 5:30 pm..he he he lol..😆😆

akash booked spa for arnav beacaue he needs hair cut, a clean shave, massage, pedicure manicure craziest friend ever arnav is right he is nt bride .🤣

On other hand khushi performing all rituals of marriage haldi mehndi...WOW

payal sended all d photos of khushi to arnav nd that paragraph in u describe arnav thoughts ws awesome yaar he missed her smile fan all things he had in collage days...nd at last he deleted her photo how rude he is.

Khushi called him idiot..ha ha ha...awesome..it hearts his ego khushi be careful payal is wright they r fighting like cats nd dogs nd khushi's mehendi pics part ws beautiful .after seeing photos he wants she always wore mehendi nd anklets all her life time..WOW..

Khushi spoiled akash all plans he he he...nd veil part ws beautiful yaar they always started with good things nd ended with arguments...OHH GOD.

Arnav loves his father a lot poor arnav...

When khushi know strip clup wala plan akash ka tha she is felt happy she have mixed feelings for arnav she always thinking about him khushi didn't know her feelings about arnav she thought she loved NK .she ws planing with NK...😡

arnav just want eye contact to khushi but its nt happened..nd again they ended with fight she told him she love nk...AWW my poor arnav.i feel sorry for arnav but I know khushi ws only belongs to arnav.

VM ws beautiful deeps...😳 almost kiss is happened ...hope they realized their feelings for each other soon soon soon...in next part marriage going to happen after that can't wait dear..

fabulous update..beautifully written...👏 👏...wonderful...🤗

plzz plzz update soon yaar...

Edited by chetna19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Have been waiting for your update.😳

Very nice update. Loved it. 👏Waiting for the marriage happen. When will khushi realise the fake love of nk.
Btw I love nk from the show. Wish you would have used some other name for the character.🥺
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awesome update dear plz update soon
Edited by sweetydoll32 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Yepiee Omaha update ,I feel so sorry for arnav ,kush is feet ,the way u explained it any one would fall for her feet through arnav eyes,and the veil parties just beautiful now waiting for the marriage update and how will they continue their journey after that ,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
superb maha update. excellent vm. loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Part 1

WOW...so Akash is here...off course Arnav is not tensed...and he doesnt need anything...he is ASR after all...
Khushi's haldi...And Payal sent the pic to Arnav...And Arnav's reaction seeing the pic...his inner turmoil...I really feel for him...
Khushi's voice mail...when she called him idiot...I just loved it...
So Akash is taking him to strip club...And Khushi wants to catch them...lets see...

Part 2

I like this Akash...seeing him, it feels like life is all about enjoying...
Loved Khushi's curt tone to NK...we dont want u there on time NK...get lost...
Oh...Arnav's again lost in her mehendi pic...trying to control his feelings...its hard for him...
So Khushi & Payal caught them before entering into the strip club...good good...
loved Arnav-Khushi convo...or should I say argument...Arnav is right...why she is so concerned about bad omen in their meant nothing relationship...

Part 3

Khushi got to re-live her childhood with her parents in these 8 years...really his loss became her gain...
When Arnav was standing before his father's pic thinking he has no one...felt so bad for him...he is so unfortunate...
Then the engagement...she didnt even look at him...Arnav had to feel bad...but all her mind is occupied with NK's thought...if only she knew his real intention...
"He didnt understand why her words affect him so much."...its because somewhere he is still the same Arnav who fall for her...
then that scene...he got mesmerized seeing her...and the almost kiss...beautifully shown by the vm...its perfect...

loved the update so so much...its awesome...waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Oh my god khusi is so stubborn ...poor arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
beautiful update!!!!
loved all d parts..:)
loved d vm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Part 1

WOW...so Akash is here...off course Arnav is not tensed...and he doesnt need anything...he is ASR after all...
Khushi's haldi...And Payal sent the pic to Arnav...And Arnav's reaction seeing the pic...his inner turmoil...I really feel for him...
Khushi's voice mail...when she called him idiot...I just loved it...
So Akash is taking him to strip club...And Khushi wants to catch them...lets see...

Part 2

I like this Akash...seeing him, it feels like life is all about enjoying...
Loved Khushi's curt tone to NK...we dont want u there on time NK...get lost...
Oh...Arnav's again lost in her mehendi pic...trying to control his feelings...its hard for him...
So Khushi & Payal caught them before entering into the strip club...good good...
loved Arnav-Khushi convo...or should I say argument...Arnav is right...why she is so concerned about bad omen in their meant nothing relationship...

Part 3

Khushi got to re-live her childhood with her parents in these 8 years...really his loss became her gain...
When Arnav was standing before his father's pic thinking he has no one...felt so bad for him...he is so unfortunate...
Then the engagement...she didnt even look at him...Arnav had to feel bad...but all her mind is occupied with NK's thought...if only she knew his real intention...
"He didnt understand why her words affect him so much."...its because somewhere he is still the same Arnav who fall for her...
then that scene...he got mesmerized seeing her...and the almost kiss...beautifully shown by the vm...its perfect...

loved the update so so much...its awesome...waiting for the next part...

Nishu, I know the vm is awesome right. It just fit the scene so well. God knows how many times I watched that...lol

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